graze/ycn final crit feedback

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Page 1: Graze/YCN Final Crit Feedback

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. r5 o r.r8 Cor-oua s cH ePlE A?? e,.?|tA'i e FOG fHe BRaalo +ND ,oC P RoDucTrt,rS TH€ Dt,Apcrr.tO rut?ACL€ Fot oge T,.RbeT flAQ,teET?. NHAT DO YOU TH INK A;OUT -THE IDEA O? A ra'NITU(E 6Ot rPq

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. AEf THE Tr g4t,r-y & f H ystC,*LLY, t I THFS€ eNOVilH rsh,UNCe 6 6TwEeA,girrv-r & wE 6 (raoo uclt).

. lT 'rne 60X l, CR.A ^ro,N& € Y€ cATLtt g{ 0 6l EN OA brU6r, € NoU OH ?

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