• My audience liked my bold choice of

colour scheme

• They also thought my model was well

presented

• And finally everything about it was

carefully selected to appeal to them. (

this means my target research was

successful.)

• My audience felt the front cover is to

packed with cover lines

• They also thought the Image is looks like it

had been stretched

• Finally they felt I did not use enough props

to help present my model.

• My audience believe that my photos and

effects are really eye-catching to look at

making them a reason to purchase the

magazine

• The colour scheme is well suited to the rock

genre

• Finally it has a good range of articles

• My audience believe that my photos take the

main focal point instead of the articles

themselves.

• My target audience said that it was good to a

consistent colour scheme through out the

magazine

• They also thought I had a unique drop capital

• Finally I was told I had a good choice of

images

• My target audience told me that the

background distracts the reader from the text

• They also believed I could have done with

some use of props