Q3) what have you learnt from audience feedback

1) The back ground is to dark 2) The image isn't very sharp3) To much negative space4) Sub headings aren't lined up and look

untidy5) Make Afflecks palace bigger6) Less space between each line of text7) Make ‘tensions between the girl

gangs reaches breaking point’ bigger and closer to ‘afflecks palace’

8) Make all text justified to the side of the page

9) Make the more channels feature canted to draw in the audience

10) Brighten the stars faces 11) Make strap line bigger

Messages I received on my blog about my front cover

Audience feedback on my trailer

Billboard feedback

Needs a hash tag to create brand loyalty Date and time need to be bigger

Need to improve tag line it need to relate to the trailer more subtle

Tag line needs to be bigger and remove dots

Change back ground colour put it on a brick background

Some characters are to dark

Dressed to differently

You can still see some of the green screen here the eraser hasn't been hard enough

Printscreens on how I improved my work

Taking out the background

Filling the background with a lighter shade of grey

Tidying up the areas around the hair line

The finished product

Adding the new photo to my front cover

Improving the position of the text

Canting the more channels box

Billboard improvements One of the comments made about my old billboard was that it would work better on a brick wall back ground so I started by removing the original background

Finding a new background that would work with all my text positioned on it

I then added lots of layers with the bricks behind my stars