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    LoranThe boy lion

    Original title: Loran

    Title: Loran the boy lion

    Copyright 2009 by Paolo Valenti. All rights reserved.

    Cover illustration copyright 2009 by Paolo Valenti. All rights reserved.

    Illustration copyright 2009 by Paolo Valenti. All rights reserved.

    Published by Paolo Valenti, Valenti Corporation.

    Printed in the United States of America, U.S.A.

    First Edition

    To my family

    There was once a seven year old lion, named Loran. He loves adventure and

    dreams of him being a hero.

    His brother, Emerald, with a friend Rocky, fights the evil Dynamiteman and

    his ninjas.

    Emerald has a secret lab, far away from his home, in the Gem Mountains

    and Loran its not allowed in. Lizor lives there.

    Lorans parents dont want him to go with Emerald because it wasdangerous and they putted traps all over the house.

    He went and looked in the sky when he had a brilliant idea.

    He tried to use a tree to jump out of his backyard.

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    Meanwhile Get him Rocky! Teach those ninjas a lesson! said Emerald

    while fighting the Dynamitemans ninjas.

    Emerald, Rocky, come here I finally found it! Emerald and Rocky went

    inside the lab.

    He, he, he, he! Watch what happens if I push this button! said Lizor.

    The ground started shacking, and a barrier trapped the ninjas.

    Whee!! Whee!! I cant take it anymore that Emerald ruins every single one

    of my plans

    Hey I have an idea! Ill just take Emeralds brother and hell come to me.

    Loran was running in the outback of Australia.

    Lorans escape wasnt a secret for long. Emerald went home and figured out

    that Loran wasnt there, and he started to follow him.

    A butterfly! said Loran Ill catch you! I got him where we wanted him

    lets start.

    Stop right there! The ninjas had made a trap to capture Loran! You fell

    for it. My robot butterfly did its work. You are coming with me kid!

    Emerald saw everything, and was running as fast as he could.

    Now he was running so fast, that he tripped and fell. He saw the ninja

    getting Loran and he couldnt do anything.

    Tie Loran with a rope, above lava! said the Dynamiteman.

    At the same time, just above them Emerald was standing. Time to use mySuper Mode!

    Emerald grew red wings and started glowing. Bring it on!

    Then Emerald went down and fought with all he had.

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    There were too many ninjas for Emerald, and he was tired.

    Emerald flew up to avoid the ninjas punches and kicks.

    He tried to free Loran, but one of the ninjas grabbed his leg, and he went

    back down.

    Then suddenly Rocky came with his motorcycle! Emerald go get Loran!

    said Rocky.

    Emerald flew up and got Loran!

    He made it! Yes! said Rocky.

    Its over Dynamiteman! Give up! said Emerald. The Dynamiteman got an

    airplane and flew away. Ill come back Emerald!

    Brother you saved me! said Loran You were so cool! How did you grow

    wings?

    Never disobey our parents again, Loran! Sir, yes, sir Lets go home

    now.

    And so we come to the moral of our story. Never disobey your parents.

    Something bad could happen.

    The End

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    Paolo Valenti is a twelve year old exchange student from Italy. He likes

    reading and enjoys writing children books. He lives in Rome with his

    brothers and his parents.