POSTER - WEBSITE

Eye For An Eye: 2nd Draft

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Eye For An Eye: Before & After

Eye For An Eye: Poster 2nd Draft Corrections

Reveal less of the killer

In the feedback Powerpoint prior, I stated that I had a lot of amendments to make. This is with the intention of improving my poster in terms of making it have a professional outlook and so that it sticks with the conventions of the Horror-Thriller genre.

Rearrange the height and

size of image

Change Strap Line Font

Change “deadly past”

to “deadly fantasy”

Blend image into

background

Change font and its size

Eye For An Eye: 2nd Draft Changes

Here is my second draft poster, and I have implemented all the feedback and changes required from my first draft poster. I have asked feedback from my teachers, other class members and my target audience, as they are the ones that my poster is appealing to. As my first draft poster was said to be interesting, I tried to incorporate and keep the same conventions in my second draft poster. I tried to make the execution less messy and more refined and distinguished by having less images in the background, as I have removed the image of the protagonist because it seems distracting and takes the attention away from the killer. Given that the image of the antagonist and protagonist were very uneven, the original images are very dissimilar in size and therefore it was hard to even them out, and both images looked crowded on the page and therefore looked unprofessional and unfinished. For these reasons, I’ve decided to remove the image of the protagonist altogether. As for my first draft both the images were amateur in the sense that they didn’t blend in well with the background, after having removed the image of the protagonist I used the ‘Opacity’ tool to feather and blend in the image of the antagonist so that it looks as though she is part of the background with the misty and mysterious essence and significance of the smoky background. My inspiration when creating my film poster was ‘The Woman in Black’s’ film poster, and my intentions were to have the same horror conventions that will have a similar effect on my film poster.

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Eye For An Eye: Before & After

Eye For An Eye: Website 2nd Draft Corrections

Adapted the transparency of

antagonist

Move the actors’ names out from within the title

Changed the shape of the social media

buttons

Shrink the title

Provide space for trailer and

billing box

Rearrange the positioning of the

components on the page

There were many corrections that I had to insert to make my website much more professional by using

and developing the forms and conventions of a Horror-Thriller

genre.