Expository EssayExpository EssaySophomore Essay #1

Choose one of the following topics:1. Life is full of momentous events that change the course of our futures. These events may occur because of a decision that someone makes or because of uncontrollable circumstances. Describe a momentous event in your life and explain how it affected your future in a multiple-paragraph short essay.

2. Think of something that is important to you that you learned in school or outside of school. In several paragraphs, write a letter to your teacher explaining what you learned and why it is important to you.

THE EXPOSITORY ESSAY THE EXPOSITORY ESSAY EXPLAINEDEXPLAINED

The essay is the basic form of writing assigned in all academic areas. You write essays

about important concepts covered in your reading and class discussion. You research

related topics. You compose procedure (how-to) papers. You take essay tests. Anytime

you are asked to inform, explain, analyze or write persuasively about a subject, you are

developing an essay. Basic essays usually contain at least three to five paragraphs.

The purpose of an expository essay is to present important information about a specific subject.

On the following slides the basic expository is explained in detail: Introduction, body

paragraphs, and conclusion.

THE EXPOSITORY ESSAY THE EXPOSITORY ESSAY

AT A GLANCE AT A GLANCE Introduction: This paragraph is 40-80 words or four to five sentences in length.

Body Paragraph: Each paragraph contains these parts. Each is also about 100-150 words or ten or more sentences. Essays can contain as many body paragraphs as necessary to prove the thesis.

Conclusion: This paragraph contains 40-80 words or three to five sentences.

Key TermsKey TermsHook - catches reader’s attention

Link – explains hook, gives background or summary information transitions to …

THESIS STATEMENT (subject + opinion)

Topic sentence for each body paragraph relates directly to proving thesis. Gives argument that will be presented in that body paragraph.

The rest of the paragraph offers evidence (concrete detail) to support the topic sentence and explains its importance (commentary).

Transitions are used between sentences.

The concluding sentence Wraps up the paragraph and leads to the next body paragraph or to the conclusion. Restates the thesis in different words. Summarizes the main points of each body paragraph. State the significance or importance for the thesis. Goes further in your thinking about the

thesis.

Expository Holistic Scoring Expository Holistic Scoring GuideGuide4 - Demonstrates insightful and consistent purpose; focused

on thesis

- Reveals critical analysis of topic through well-selected examples, data, and

commentary

- Is clearly and logically organized into well-developed introduction, body,

and conclusion

- Includes a variety of transitions which further ideas and paragraphs

- Uses 3 rd person point of view consistently with a unique or engaging voice

- Chooses words purposefully and precisely to fit content area

- Follows rules of standard written English for capitalization, punctuation,

spelling, and sentence formation; complex forms risked

3 - Maintains a clear purpose and generally remains focused on thesis

- Has relevant and sufficient examples, data, and/or commentary;

understanding of material evident; may have uneven development of some

points

- Is organized into sequential introduction, body, and concluding paragraphs

- Provides transitions to connect main ideas and paragraphs

- Uses 3 rd person point of view consistently with an appropriate voice

- Uses words which are clear and effective for content area

- Follows rules of standard written English for capitalization, punctuation,

spelling, and sentence formation

2 - Have vague purpose and may stray from thesis

- Uses irrelevant or insufficient examples, data, and/or commentary; minimal

understanding of material evident

- Shows an attempt at organization, but is missing one or more parts of the

introduction, body, or conclusion

- Provides transitions which are weak or repetitive

- Uses 3 rd person point of view inconsistently; voice inconsistent

- May have awkward word choice

- Contains noticeable errors in standard written English: capitalization,

punctuation, spelling, and sentence formation

1 - Has no evident purpose or thesis

- Uses few examples, data, and/or minimal commentary; little understanding

of material evident

- Contains only one or two paragraphs

- No transitions are evident

- Uses 1 st or 2 nd person point of view (I, you); flat or lifeless voice

- Uses words which are simple or inappropriate

- Contains frequent errors in standard written English: capitalization,

punctuation, spelling, and/or sentence formation

0 - No paper, off-task, or acts of plagiarism

THE INTRODUCTORY THE INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPHPARAGRAPH

An introductory paragraph catches the reader’s attention, gives some background information about the topic in general, and states the thesis. This paragraph can be divided into three parts.

1. Introductory Technique – Some teachers call this “the Hook” or “Attention Getter.”

Whichever technique you use, it must focus attention on the essay’s topic.

2. Link – This section explains the hook and leads the reader

to the thesis statement. Its length depends on the type of essay. For example, if you are writing a literary analysis essay, you need to give a brief summary of the book as you lead to the thesis.

3. Thesis Statement – This is the topic sentence for the essay.

It has two parts: a specific topic and your attitude about it (subject + opinion)

More On Introductory More On Introductory TechniquesTechniques

1. Definition: Explain a term that is central to the thesis. This may be a dictionary definition or the writer’s definition.

2. Rhetorical Question: This question needs to be central to the thesis and answered in the essay.

3. Startling Statement or Relevant Fact: Either one can serve to interest the reader and direct attention to the thesis.

4. Quotation: A quotation from the book works especially well when writing a literary analysis essay. Remember a quotation may be any section of the book, dialogue, description, or narration.

5. Anecdote: A short interesting or humorous incident is another popular introductory technique. With this hook, the writer must be careful to keep it short in relation to the overall length of the essay.

6. History or Background Information: This type or hook gives information that establishes context for the paper.

Never start an essay with a statement such as “In this essay I am going to write about …”

Organizing Your PositionOrganizing Your Position

Step 1: Figure out exactly what your answer is to the topic question and phrase it as a statement.

Step 2: Decide who your audience is.Step 3: Brainstorm points/arguments

that support your position. What is true about the topic that supports your point of view?

Step 4: Brainstorm/research facts that prove each of your points/arguments.

Constructing a Thesis Constructing a Thesis StatementStatementWhat do you believe to be true?What do you want your audience

to agree to?Is there an opposing viewpoint?Is your topic specific enough to

argue in a short paper but broad enough to allow at least three distinct points/arguments to be made?

Constructing Constructing Points/ArgumentsPoints/ArgumentsBrainstorm points that are true

about your topic that support your point of view.

All three points should be different from one another and support the point of view you have taken with your thesis.

Choose your three strongest or combine to create three and rank from strongest to weakest.

Fact FindingFact FindingResearch and brainstorm concrete

details/examples that support each of your three points.

Possible evidence includes the following: quotes from others, past events, facts, personal anecdotes.

Evaluate the examplesSeparate fact from opinion; only

expert opinions carry weight in an argument.

Confirm that evidence is directly relevant to your point and does not contradict your point of view.

THE BODY PARAGRAPHTHE BODY PARAGRAPHThe body paragraphs provide proof and support for the thesis

statement. A typical expository essay includes three or more body paragraphs. The more evidence the writer can provide, the more likely the reader will accept the validity of the thesis statement.

Organization of body paragraphs in a particular essay generally

follows one of the patterns listed below. 1. Chronological Order – time order 2. Order of Importance – least to most important argument Or second strongest, least strong, strongest argument 3. Comparison/Contrast – showing similarities and differences 4. Cause and Effect – relationship between event and outcome

Body Paragraph StructureBody Paragraph Structure The topic sentence of each body paragraph must help prove the thesis statement. Supporting sentences give concrete proof, examples, details, and/or facts that prove the

thesis (concrete details). The writer must explain the importance of each specific piece of evidence in one or two

sentences following the evidence. This is often referred to as “commentary” about the evidence. Commentary means that the writer explains why the evidence helps prove the thesis in his or her own words.

The paragraph’s last or “concluding” sentence brings the paragraph to a conclusion and transitions to the topic sentence of the next paragraph.

Each paragraph of the essay is linked to the next one by various kinds of transitions; the

sentences within each paragraph are also smoothly connected to one another by transitional

words and phrases.

English teachers often ask students to write body paragraphs of ten or more sentences or 100 –

150 words. The purpose of this is to make sure the paragraphs will be specific and well

developed. It is a good idea to remember this when writing your essay.

On the following page is a simple pattern that shows exactly how a body paragraph is structured.

Sample Body Paragraph Sample Body Paragraph Each line represents one sentence in the body paragraph.

1. Topic sentence (TS) – This idea helps prove that the thesis statement is true.

2. Concrete Detail (CD) – A fact, example, quotation, paraphrase, or piece of evidence to back up the topic sentence.

3. Commentary (CM) – Shows why CD provides proof.

4. Commentary (CM) – Shows why CD provides proof.

5. Concrete Detail (CD) – A fact, example, quotation, paraphrase, or piece of evidence to back up topic sentence.

6. Commentary (CM) – Shows why CD provides proof.

7. Commentary (CM) – Shows why CD provides proof.

8. Concrete Detail (CD) – A fact, example, quotation, paraphrase, or piece of evidence to back up topic sentence.

9. Commentary (CM) – Shows why CD provides proof.

10. Commentary (CM) – Shows why CD provides proof.

11. Concluding sentence (CS) – This sentence is tied directly to the topic sentence, brings the paragraph to a close and serves as a transition to the next paragraph.

THE CONCLUDING THE CONCLUDING PARAGRAPHPARAGRAPHThe concluding paragraph effectively ends the essay

by summing up the discussion in a few sentences. It gives the writer one last chance to make the point.

For the beginning writer, a three part conclusion is

often taught. 1. Restate the thesis in slightly different words. 2. Summarize the main points of the body

paragraph. 3. Go further in explaining the significance or

importance of the thesis.

Six ways to write a Six ways to write a concluding paragraph. concluding paragraph.

1. The paragraph emphasizes the main points by summarizing them. This could be used for a fairly complex, long essay or a research paper.

2. The paragraph draws a conclusion from the body paragraphs.

3. The paragraph evaluates what has been done. This works when the essay is describing a process or a historical event.

4. The paragraph answers the question posed by the thesis statement.

5. The paragraph recommends a specific course of action. This works for a persuasive or

reflective essay.

6. The paragraph gives a final powerful example to emphasize the main point. This, too,

works for a persuasive essay.

TRANSITIONS TRANSITIONS Transitions are very important in writing paragraphs and essays. They are the links

that hold the chain of ideas together. These links occur in the manners shown below.

1. Use pronouns to refer to ideas or people previously mentioned (he, she, it, you, I, etc.).

Pronouns must agree with their noun antecedent in gender and number.

Example: When the children left the bus, they discovered that they were in an

unfamiliar neighborhood. This place had bright lights and tall trees.

2. Repeat words or phrases from one sentence to the next. This method is especially

effective between the last sentence of one paragraph and the first sentence (topic

sentence) of the next paragraph.

Example: In this situation, Jacques was very jealous. (last sentence of paragraph)

Another time, he became jealous when his mother brought his brother a gift.

(first sentence of next paragraph)

Various Purposes of Various Purposes of TransitionsTransitions

a. To introduce an example: thus, for example, for instance, to illustrate

b. To add an idea or fact: again, also, besides, furthermore, in addition, moreover, similarly

c. To establish spatial order: above, below, here, there, inside, outside, nearby, beyond, over, under

d. To establish time order: first, then, before, after, finally, meanwhile, later, second, next

e. To tie together several reasons and show cause-and-effect relationship: because, for, in the second place, since, inasmuch as, to that end

f. To restrict, to contradict, to show contrast: although, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, otherwise, instead, yet, on the other hand, despite this fact

g. To indicate a conclusion or result: therefore, in conclusion, to sum up, consequently, as a result, accordingly, in other words