rough cut ‘analysis’

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FRAME 1

Speed up the typing section, as this is slow and takes up a lot of time on the cut.

FRAME 7

Fast walk into the workshop from the desk, this will make the music sound more realistic and incorporate a fast pace of editing.

FRAME 9

Keep up the fast walk until the light switch shot

FRAME 12

Add in the close-up of the vice (This got cut out of the rough cut)

FRAME 13

Bang the cupboard doors, make this faster (faster pace of editing)

FRAME 16

Either edit (make it faster) or delete the file shot. File looks feeble against the previous shot of the saw.

FRAME 17

Bang the brasso down harder – More of a thriller convention of sudden sound.

FRAME 19

Shorten down the turning of the Brasso cap.

FRAME 20

Make the blade down the sleeve brighter, so the audience can see what the character is doing.

FRAME 21

Add in putting on the coat to block out the camera

FRAME 22

Add slow-motion of sparks – We didn’t do this for the rough cut as we were stretched for time and it’s technical