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ROUGH CUT ‘ANALYSIS’ THIS IS THE LIST O F THINGS WE WANT EDITING OR D ELETING .

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Page 1: Rough cut ‘analysis’

ROUGH CUT

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Page 2: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 1

Speed up the typing section, as this is slow and takes up a lot of time on the cut.

Page 3: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 7

Fast walk into the workshop from the desk, this will make the music sound more realistic and incorporate a fast pace of editing.

Page 4: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 9

Keep up the fast walk until the light switch shot

Page 5: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 12

Add in the close-up of the vice (This got cut out of the rough cut)

Page 6: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 13

Bang the cupboard doors, make this faster (faster pace of editing)

Page 7: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 16

Either edit (make it faster) or delete the file shot. File looks feeble against the previous shot of the saw.

Page 8: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 17

Bang the brasso down harder – More of a thriller convention of sudden sound.

Page 9: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 19

Shorten down the turning of the Brasso cap.

Page 10: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 20

Make the blade down the sleeve brighter, so the audience can see what the character is doing.

Page 11: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 21

Add in putting on the coat to block out the camera

Page 12: Rough cut ‘analysis’

FRAME 22

Add slow-motion of sparks – We didn’t do this for the rough cut as we were stretched for time and it’s technical