Today we will:Juniors: SAT Quiz 3 / Listen to 2nd student

sponsored essayFreshmen: SAT Quiz 3 / 2nd peer edit DJs / All

Explicate Poe

Oct. 8, 2015 Stop:Can I see or hear your

cell phone?Fix it!Homework

Freshmen: Read “The Bells” 2 DJs by MondayJuniors:

I’m listening actively!• Before you listen: Jot down the sponsor’s name,

the essay’s title, and the author.

• As you listen: make note of at least two things that made you think, re-think, question, re-imagine, etc.

• After you listen: write down at least one thing/technique that you might like to use in future personal/reflective essays of your own.

STUDENT SPONSORED ESSAYS OF THE DAY1st Javona Tolbert brings you:“A Silent Night that Brought Healing” by Steve Banko http://thisibelieve.org/essay/9025/

3rd Jarom Jackson brings you:“Speak Up” by Jay Frankstonhttp://thisibelieve.org/essay/105932/

4th Blake Stohr brings you:• “A Duty To Heal” by Pius Kamau https://thisibelieve.org/essay/4120/

1.E (Change find to past tense.)2.C (sentence 3)3.B. (Rewrite the paragraph in active voice.)

4.A. (Briefly explain the concept of electroplating.)

5.C. (Place paragraph 9 to follow paragraph 4.)

Lesson 3 Improving Paragraphs

Lesson #1 Improving Paragraphs &Identifying Sentence Errors1.C 2.A3.B - INSERTING THE

CONJUNCTION ELIMINATES THE RUN-ON SENTENCE

4.B5.A – HAIR IS MENTIONED

ONLY IN THE PASSAGE

1st Period 7:25 – 8:252nd Period 8:30 – 9:353rd Period 9:40 – 10:40Lunch A 10:40 – 11:10Period 4A 11:15 – 12:10Period 5 12:15 – 1:15Period 6 1:20 – 2:20

Beliefs and Cultures

• I am from ___________________ culture. • Because I am part of the ______________

culture, I believe____________________________.

• One way someone would know I believe in _____________ is ________________.

• Another way someone would know I believe in _____________ is __________.

• A story I could tell about my belief is…• Next step: pick an essay to sponsor

Honor Code“I have neither given nor received any unauthorized aid, nor do I have knowledge of anyone else doing so.” Signature

Word Count1.Count the number of words on five random full lines

of text (words must be 3 letters to count)2.Average those five numbers e.g. 9+8+11+10+9 =47

Then: 47 ÷ 5= 9.43.Take the average of that and multiplying by the

number of lines written. 9.4 x 30= 282 

Scoring: 1-44 = 1 45-88=1.589-133=2 134-178 = 2.5179-223 = 3 224-268=3.5269-313 = 4 314-351 =4.5

352+ =5Target

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