wednesday, january 16, 2012 write in your agenda: editing: all creatures great and small persuasive...

Wednesday, January 16, 2012

• Write in your agenda:

• Editing: All Creatures Great and Small

• Persuasive Media/Text

All Creatures Great and Small Editing

• Wednesday:

• Capitalization- 10

• Language Usage-1

• Commas-5

• Periods-5

• Spelling-1

• Title-1

All Creatures Great and Small

• Thursday:

• Capitalization-7

• Language Usage-2

• Commas-4

• Periods-4

• Quotation Mark-1

• Spelling-1

• Title-1

Persuasive Writing

• http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jaGJNxCxB-s

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jaGJNxCxB-s

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jaGJNxCxB-s

Persuasive Technique Examples

Decide what technique is used, who the audience is, the meaning, and if

the purpose is stated or implied.

What would you do if all your possessions were lost in a

fire? Get the Save-All fireproof safe and protect your

valuables.

What technique is used? Who is the intended audience? What is the meaning? Is the purpose stated or implied?

What would you do if all your possessions were lost in a fire? Get the Save-All fireproof safe and protect your

valuables.

• What technique is used? Emotional Appeal

• Who is the intended audience? Homeowners

• What is the meaning? Buy a Save-All safe to protect your things

• Is the purpose stated or implied? Stated

As a teacher, I often get headaches on the job. That’s why I use PainAway aspirin.


As a teacher, I often get headaches on the job. That’s why

I use PainAway aspirin.

• What technique is used? Testimonial

• Who is the intended audience? People who get headaches

• What is the meaning? Buy PainAway to get rid of your headache


Help Aerosmith’s Joe Perry help kids learn music. Buy any

slotRadio card through January 31, 2010 and we will donate $1.00

to the Grammy Foundation program to support music in

schools.


Help Aerosmith’s Joe Perry help kids learn music. Buy any slotRadio card through January 31, 2010 and we will donate $1.00 to the Grammy Foundation program to

support music in schools.

• What technique is used? Emotional Appeal

• Who is the intended audience? People with money

• What is the meaning? Give money to help kids learn music


So thoughtfully prepared. So deliciously nutritious. With tender

pieces made with real chicken and crunchy bites garnished with

vegetables. Chef Michael’s canine creations. A perfect way

to serve up your love at mealtime. Chef inspired. Dog desired.


So thoughtfully prepared. So deliciously nutritious. With tender pieces made with real chicken and crunchy bites garnished with vegetables. Chef Michael’s canine creations. A perfect way to serve up your love

at mealtime. Chef inspired. Dog desired.

• What technique is used?

• Who is the intended audience?

• What is the meaning?

• Is the purpose stated or implied?

All Profits To Charity. Newman’s Own Foundation continues Paul

Newman’s commitment to donate all profits to charity. Over $280

million has been given to thousands of charities since 1982.

All-Natural Newman’s Own


All Profits To Charity. Newman’s Own Foundation continues Paul Newman’s commitment to donate all profits to charity. Over $280 million has been given to thousands of charities since 1982. All-

Natural Newman’s Own





Our country put a man on the moon. A better slice of cheese

was inevitable. Kraft singles the American cheese. Is this a

great country or what?


Our country put a man on the moon. A better slice of cheese was inevitable. Kraft singles the American cheese.

Is this a great country or what?





Who says only the rich and famous can have ageless skin? At last, Dr.

LeWinn by Kinerase brings you fabulous results that will thrill you and

your skin. The exclusive formulas utilize clinical strength kinetin,

Kinerase’s signature antioxidant that has successfully transformed

women’s skin for more than 10 years.


Who says only the rich and famous can have ageless skin? At last, Dr. LeWinn by Kinerase brings you fabulous results that will thrill you and your skin.

The exclusive formulas utilize clinical strength kinetin, Kinerase’s signature antioxidant that has successfully transformed women’s skin for more than 10

years.





Somewhere in your subconscious you knew it all the time. You knew you had what it takes to

take matters into your own hands and fix things all kinds of things, including life clogging plumbing issues. You just needed a little confidence and the right tools.


Somewhere in your subconscious you knew it all the time. You knew you had what it takes to take matters into your own hands and fix things all kinds of

things, including life clogging plumbing issues. You just needed a little

confidence and the right tools. • What technique is used?




When you are an NFL quarterback, there are no sick days….. or nights. Nyquil The nighttime, sniffling, sneezing coughing, aching, fever, best

sleep you ever got with a cold…medicine.


When you are an NFL quarterback, there are no sick days….. or nights. Nyquil The nighttime, sniffling, sneezing coughing, aching,

fever, best sleep you ever got with a cold…medicine.





The SUPERVAC cup will keep your drink cold for up to four hours without

refrigeration. It is effective for hot drinks, too- a hot cup of cocoa will still

be hot two hours later. The cup is made from a new material first

developed by NASA’s space program, and many astronauts and politicians

have used it and approved of it.


The SUPERVAC cup will keep your drink cold for up to four hours without refrigeration. It is effective for hot drinks, too- a hot cup of cocoa will still be hot

two hours later. The cup is made from a new material first developed by NASA’s space program, and many astronauts and politicians have used it and

approved of it.





I wouldn’t eat at that restaurant—the only time I ate there, my

entree was undercooked.


I wouldn’t eat at that restaurant—the only time I ate there, my entree was undercooked.





BILLIONS OF dollars are lost each year to online piracy, which stifles the

ability of writers, songwriters and others in the creative arts to earn the

royalties they are due and drains profits from legitimate manufacturers.

Consumers often find themselves saddled with shoddy products and no

prospect of obtaining a refund.What technique is used? Who is the intended audience? What is the meaning? Is the purpose stated or implied?

BILLIONS OF dollars are lost each year to online piracy, which stifles the ability of writers, songwriters and others in the creative arts to earn the royalties they are due and drains profits from legitimate manufacturers. Consumers often find

themselves saddled with shoddy products and no prospect of obtaining a refund.





$50,000 Affordable Term Life Insurance to help those who

mean the most to you.


$50,000 Affordable Term Life Insurance to help those who mean the most to you.





Dear Editor,The City Commission is considering increasing everyone’s gas utility

bills to create a subsidy program for the poor. I am able to pay my own way on a small, fixed income. I haven’t used my furnace yet this winter, preferring to wear three woolen sweaters. I am saving so that

I can pay the proposed 38 percent increase in gas bills when it REALLY get cold.

I called City Hall to protest and was told, ever so gently, that I was one of those who would be helped by the subsidy. Absolutely not! No self-respecting oldster would accept a dole extorted from other struggling citizens. The churches have prime responsibility in this

area. Churches are close to the source and are in a position to locate those actually suffering in the cold.

I am outraged by the proposal to the City Commission.Mrs. A.B. Tony543 South Ave


Dear Editor,The City Commission is considering increasing everyone’s gas utility bills to create a subsidy program for the poor. I am able to pay my own

way on a small, fixed income. I haven’t used my furnace yet this winter, preferring to wear three woolen sweaters. I am saving so that I can pay the proposed 38 percent increase in gas bills when it REALLY get cold.

I called City Hall to protest and was told, ever so gently, that I was one of those who would be helped by the subsidy. Absolutely not! No self-respecting oldster would accept a dole extorted from other struggling citizens. The churches have prime responsibility in this area. Churches are

close to the source and are in a position to locate those actually suffering in the cold.I am outraged by the proposal to the City Commission.

Mrs. A.B. Tony543 South Ave





“Ask not what your country can do for you, but what you can do for

your country.”


“Ask not what your country can do for you, but what you can do for your country.”





“You can join the club”



http://www.presidiacreative.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/DientyneTornado.jpg


http://www.presidiacreative.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/Cobalt_face.jpg


http://www.presidiacreative.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/altoids-2.jpg

wednesday, january 16, 2012 write in your agenda: editing: all creatures great and small persuasive...

Documents

stated slide

intended audience

cxbs slide

persuasive technique

creatures great

saveall safe

small editing

chef michaels canine