vietnam 1.11:kiểm tra các lỗi và thiếu sót bất cẩn và so sánh với lần đầu...
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Kim tra cc li v thiu st bt c!n v so snh
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vF vit ting 6nh 4= thu>t v chu:Gn nghiHI Dng $I mJt trung t3m vit ting 6nh ti tr*?ng $ih'c ( (unI8i $.ng th?i cng l ging viGn ton th?igian ti tr*?ng Dng $< chnh sa trGn LLMNNN bi vit
cho viHc $ng bo nghiGn c&u 4hoa h'c tO nmPQRQ Dng l cng nh biGn t>I ting anh cho mJt s2tI ch/ vF 4hoa h'cM 4= thu>t v : h'c cEa i Aoan
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Chnh sa cho r rang(Editing for clarity)
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Ki tra c!c l"i v# thi$% s&t 't cn v# so s!nh v*i l+n,+%
(-o%'le chec for fa%lty coparisons and oissions)
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Sgu:Gn mVu6n ent8rn8t comIan:fs succ8ss rat8 is lo]8rthan an 8l8ctronics irm
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6n ent8rn8t comIan:fs succ8ss rat8 is lo]8rthan that o an 8l8ctronics irm
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Sgu:Gn mVu6n in4 j8t Irint8r is normall: l8ss 8YI8nsiv8
a $i6n in4 j8t Irint8r is normall: l8ss 8YI8nsiv8
than a las8r on8
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Sgu:Gn mVuAist8ning is as imIortantM i not imIortantthanM ta4ing not8s ]h8n att8n9ing a l8ctur8
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Aist8ning is as imIortant asM i not imIortantthanM ta4ing not8s ]h8n att8n9ing a l8ctur8
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Sgu:Gn mVuklat 9isIla: monitors hav8 as long a Iro9uctli8M i not long8r thanM normal on8s
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klat 9isIla: monitors hav8 as long a Iro9uctli8 asM i not long8r thanM normal on8s
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Sgu:Gn mVu6 gra9uat8 stu98ntfs li48lihoo9 o s8curing8mIlo:m8nt ]h8n comIl8ting stu9i8s is
high8r than a univ8rsit: stu98nt
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6 gra9uat8 stu98ntfs li48lihoo9 o s8curing8mIlo:m8nt ]h8n comIl8ting stu9i8s ishigh8r than that o a univ8rsit: stu98nt
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Sgu:Gn mVuenjuri8s incurr89 rom Ila:ing ootball ar8usuall: mor8 s8v8r8
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enjuri8s incurr89 rom Ila:ing ootball ar8usuall: mor8 s8v8r8 than thos8 rom oth8rsIorts
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Sgu:Gn mVu6 machin8fs caIacit: to Iro9uc8 Iarts isgr8at8r than a ]or48r
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6 machin8fs caIacit: to Iro9uc8 Iarts isgr8at8r than that o a ]or48r
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Sgu:Gn mVuchool tuition can b8 as 8YI8nsiv8M i notmor8 8YI8nsiv8 thanM living 8YI8ns8s
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chool tuition can b8 as 8YI8nsiv8 asM i notmor8 8YI8nsiv8 thanM living 8YI8ns8s
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Sgu:Gn mVu8nugoIal an9 Sar8n9ran 7PQQdb; consi98r89limitations machin8 caIaciti8sM Iro9uction
amounts an9 Iroc8ssing tim8s o Iarts
a $i8nugoIal an9 Sar8n9ran 7PQQdb; consi98r89limitations o machin8 caIaciti8sM Iro9uctionamounts an9 Iroc8ssing tim8s o Iarts
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Sgu:Gn mVuS ratios ar8 anal:89 98t8rmin8 th8oItimal s8ttings o th8 98sign Iaram8t8rs
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S ratios ar8 anal:89 to 98t8rmin8 th8oItimal s8ttings o th8 98sign Iaram8t8rs
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Sgu:Gn mVu6 9octorat8 98gr88 is usuall: mor8 tim8consuming
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6 9octorat8 98gr88 is usuall: mor8 tim8consuming than oth8r 98gr88s
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Sgu:Gn mVu6 98Iartm8nt 9ir8ctorfs authorit: is mor8Io]8rul than an assistant
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6 98Iartm8nt 9ir8ctorfs authorit: is mor8Io]8rul than that o an assistant
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Sgu:Gn mVu,roj8ct89 8YI8ns8s can b8 as highM i nothigh8r thanM actual on8s
a $i,roj8ct89 8YI8ns8s can b8 as high asM i nothigh8r thanM actual on8s
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Sgu:Gn mVu-sinchu has a high8r conc8ntration ot8chnical comIani8s than an: oth8r in %ai]an
a $i-sinchu has a high8r conc8ntration o
t8chnical comIani8s than an: oth8r cit: in%ai]an
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Sgu:Gn mVu%hos8 obj8ctiv8s g8n8rall: conlict 8achoth8r
a $i%hos8 obj8ctiv8s g8n8rall: conlict ]ith 8achoth8r
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Sgu:Gn mVuriting a rough 9rat can ta48 long8r
a $iriting a rough 9rat can ta48 long8r than]riting th8 inal IaI8r
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Sgu:Gn mVu_ngin88ring ju9g8m8nt is us89 Irimaril: solving th8oItimiation o comIlicat89 multir8sIons8 Irobl8m
in %aguchifs 08tho9
a $i_ngin88ring ju9g8m8nt is us89 Irimaril: or solvingth8 oItimiation o comIlicat89 multir8sIons8Irobl8m in %aguchifs 08tho9
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Sgu:Gn mVu_YI8ctations can b8 as gr8atM i not gr8at8rthanM on8fs abilit:
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_YI8ctations can b8 as gr8at asM i notgr8at8r thanM on8fs abilit:
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Sgu:Gn mVu%h8 r8st o this IaI8r organi89 as ollo]s
a $i%h8 r8st o this IaI8r is organi89 asollo]s
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Sgu:Gn mVuimultan8ousl: oItimiing 9i8r8ntobj8ctiv8s a r8lativ8l: 9iicult tas4
a $iimultan8ousl: oItimiing 9i8r8ntobj8ctiv8s is a r8lativ8l: 9iicult tas4
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Sgu:Gn mVu%his in9ing conirms that th8 IroIos89sch8m8s ar8 mor8 8ici8nt
a $i%his in9ing conirms that th8 IroIos89sch8m8s ar8 mor8 8ici8nt thanconv8ntional on8s
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Sgu:Gn mVu%h8 normali89 valu8 can b8 as larg8M i notlarg8r thanM that o th8 Xualit: loss
a $i%h8 normali89 valu8 can b8 as larg8 asM inot larg8r thanM that o th8 Xualit: loss
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Sgu:Gn mVu6 r8s8arch8rfs salar: can b8 as highM i nothigh8r thanM that o a Iro8ssor
a $i6 r8s8arch8rfs salar: can b8 as high asM inot high8r thanM that o a Iro8ssor
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