the thesis statement
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THE THESIS STATEMENT
GETTING READY FOR THE MAIN EVENT OF OUR LITERARY ESSAY
WARM UP• LOOK AT OUR EVIDENCE CHART FROM YESTERDAY. WHAT IS STICKING OUT TO
YOU? • BASED ON THE EVIDENCE THAT YOU GATHERED, IS THERE A STRONG CLAIM
THAT IS THERE WAITING FOR YOU TO TALK ABOUT?• IN YOUR WRITERS NOTEBOOK CHOOSE SOMETHING TO SAY ABOUT OUR
CLASS NOVEL. FEEL FREE TO BE OUTLANDISH, AND USE STRONG WORDS AND PHRASES SUCH AS ALWAYS, NO ONE, EVERYONE, ENVER OR FOR SURE. • WE WILL USE THIS CLAIM AS A SPRINGBOARD TO START FREEWRITING IN
OUR WRITER’S NOTEBOOK…
PROMPTS TO HELP YOU WARM UP• START WRITING ABOUT YOUR CLAIM ABOUT OUT CLASS NOVEL, FEEL FREE
TO BE FREE IN THIS AND USE WORDS LIKE “I’M NOT SURE…” JUST TRY!!!• IT IS OK IF YOU DON’T BELIEVE YOUR CLAIM 100%, START WITH SAYING
SOMETHING THAT YOU WANT TO SAY AND SEE WHERE YOUR PENCIL LEADS YOU…• WRITE THINGS LIKE “ON THE OTHER HAND…” AND SEE WHERE THAT TAKES
YOU…• TRYING TO WRITE WITHOUT JUDGING YOURSELF AND SEE WHERE YOUR PEN
TAKES YOU!
AFTER YOU WARM UP ABOUT YOUR CLAIM… ITS TIME TO ACTIVELY ENGAGE IN OUR WORK.• GO BACK AND RE-READ WHAT YOU JUST WROTE.• UNDERLINE POSSIBLE LINES, MAIN POINTS OR IDEAS THAT YOU THINK COULD
BE YOUR THESIS. TAKE THEM AND TRY REWRITING/REWORDING EACH OF THESE THINGS IN SEVERAL DIFFERENT WAYS. MAKE A LIST.• GO BACK TO YOUR LIST AND ASK YOURSELF:• “WHICH IS THE ONE THAT FEEL TRUEST TO WHAT I’M TRYING TO SAY? WHICH DO I
MOST CARE TO PROVE?”
ADDING MORE DETAILS TO OUR WORK• TAKE ONE LINE THAT STANDS OUT IN YOUR WRITING.• LET’S TRY REWRITING THAT LINE. • HOW ELSE COULD YOU SAY IT?• USE DIFFERENT WORDS… HOW ELSE COULD YOU WRITE THAT THESIS?• LOOK BACK ACROSS YOUR THESIS STATEMENTS. WHICH ONE FEELS TRUEST?• WHICH ONE ARE YOU MOST INTERESTED IN EXPLORING?
The thesis that you choose should be one that I could tell you really care about.
REFLECTING ON YOUR WORK• NEXT WEEK TUESDAY, WE WILL USE THE WORK WE DID TODAY TO DIVE INTO
CONSTRUCTING OUR LITERARY ESSAY.• IF YOU STILL NEED TO READ OUR CLASS NOVEL, PLEASE INVEST SOME TIME
IN DOING THAT NOW.• GREAT JOB BRAIN STORMING TODAY! SOMETIMES, BRAINSTORMING IS THE
HARDEST BUT MOST REWARDING PART OF THE WRITING PROCESS.