FEEDBACK SHEETS ON OUR TEASER TRAILER *FIRST DRAFT*

MISE EN SCENE: ExcellentCAMERA WORK: ExcellentEDITING: GoodSOUND: Ok

STRENGTHS• Good use of layering shots• Variety of shots is good• Sound effects effective in places ,

e.g. when typing• Good use of lighting

POSSIBLE IMPROVEMENTS• More sound needs to be added• Maybe darken the fake blood

shots so the blood doesn’t look as fake

• Make the title longer so they’re clearer to read

MISE EN SCENE: ExcellentCAMERA WORK: ExcellentEDITING: GoodSOUND: Ok

STRENGTHS• Cinematography is excellent• Expertly framed and composed

shots• Mise en scene is very strong for

genre• Love the use of blood and ‘crazed’

gestures

POSSIBLE IMPROVEMENTS• Editing- adjust the pace and

rhythm• Some shots are too long near to

the climax• Needs to be more ambient noise,

sound effects• Should have a complex

soundscape

MISE EN SCENE: GoodCAMERA WORK: GoodEDITING: GoodSOUND: Ok

STRENGTHS• Continuity editing was good• Variety of shots is good• Good transitions

POSSIBLE IMPROVEMENTS• Add sound effects in places

needed• Add more dialogue• Make sure there is a wide variety

of sounds etc in our soundscape

MISE EN SCENE: GoodCAMERA WORK: GoodEDITING: GoodSOUND: Ok

STRENGTHS• Good variety of shot types• Layering shots creates a really

good effect- it works well

POSSIBLE IMPROVEMENTS• The trailer ends too quickly• The sound effects used doesn’t

quite match the action on screen

SUMMARISING OUR FEEDBACKAfter showcasing our rough cut version to the class, we received feedback on what went well and what we could improve. Our main areas of concern is the sound of the trailer. Many people said that the overall soundscape didn't match the trailer or what was happening in the trailer. Some tips we were given was to add fade in's and out's to sound effects, to change the volume of our sound effects so they aren't so intense and to match our sound effects to the on screen action. Many of our audience also said that the titles were too fast and unclear to read. Changing the font may improve the readability of our trailer. Some praise we were given about our trailer included the clear genre that is shown through out. Our audience said that our mise en scene and cinematography was excellent in suiting the horror genre.