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Technical CommunicationFundamentalsChapter 7: Reports
William Sanborn PfeifferKaye Adkins
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Reports
General Guidelines for Reports
Guidelines for Informal Reports
Guidelines for Formal Reports Formal Report Example Four Common Reports
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Reports
General Guidelines for Reports Plan Well Before You Write Separate Fact from Opinion Make Text Visually Appealing Use Illustrations for Clarification and Persuasion
Edit Carefully
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General Guidelines for Reports Plan Well Before You Write
Identify the document’s purpose Identify the various types of readers
Identify the needs and expectations of decision makers
Outline the main parts to be covered in the body
Plan strategies for writing an effective document
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General Guidelines for Reports Separate Fact from Opinion
Findings: Facts you uncover Conclusions: ideas or beliefs based on your findings
Recommendations: Suggestions or action items grounded in the facts presented in the report
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General Guidelines for Reports Make Text Visually Apppealing
Use bulleted points for short lists
Use numbered points for lists that are longer or that consist of ordered steps
Use headings and subheadings for easy navigation
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General Guidelines for Reports Use Illustrations for Clarification and Persuasion Use tables and figures to complement technical discussions
Incorporate illustrations to make technical information clear
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General Guidelines for Reports Edit Carefully
Keep most sentences short and simple Proofread carefully for mechanical errors
Triple-check all figures for accuracy Make sure all attachments are included Check the format and wording of all headings and subheadings for consistency
Ask a colleague to check the report
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Informal Reports
Contain about two to five pages of text, not including attachments
Contain more substance than a simple letter or memo but less than a formal report
Directed to readers outside (letter report) or inside your organization (memo report)
May be informative or persuasive
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Informal Reports
Guidelines for Informal Reports Use Letter or Memo Format Use the ABC Format for Organization Create the Abstract as an Introductory Summary
Put Important Details in the Body Focus Attention in Your Conclusion Use Attachments for Less Important Details
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General Guidelines for Informal Reports
Use Letter or Memo Format Greeting may be left out or replaced by an attention line
Report title often comes immediately after the inside address
Spacing may be single, one-and-a-half, or double
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General Guidelines for Informal Reports Use the ABC Format for Organization Abstract: Capsule version of information most needed by decision makers
Body: Details and supporting evidence, most often read by technical readers
Conclusion: Findings, conclusions, or recommendations
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General Guidelines for Informal Reports
Create the Abstract as an Introductory Summary Include three essential pieces of information
Purpose for the report Scope statement Summary of essentials
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General Guidelines for Informal Reports
Put Important Details in the Body Use headings generously Precede subheadings with a lead-in passage
Move from general to specific in paragraphs
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General Guidelines for Informal Reports
Focus Attention in Your Conclusion Briefly restate your conclusion or recommendation to reinforce importance
Give more detail if not covered earlier
Use Attachments for Less Important Details
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Letter Reports
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Letter Reports
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Memo Reports
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Memo Reports
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Formal Reports
Formal Report Covers complex projects and is directed to readers at different technical levels.
Usually contains at least 6 to 10 pages of text, not including appendices.
Directed to either inside or outside your organization.
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Strategy for Organizing Formal Reports
Write different parts for different readers
Place important information first
Repeat key points when necessary
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Strategy for Organizing Formal Reports
Follow ABC Format for Formal Report Abstract
Cover/title page Letter or memo of transmittal Table of contents List of illustrations Executive summary Introduction
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Strategy for Organizing Formal Reports
Follow ABC Format for Formal Report Body
Discussion sections Appendices – appear after text but support Body section
Conclusion Conclusions Recommendations
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports
Cover/Title Page Letter/Memo of Transmittal Table of Contents List of Illustrations Executive Summary Introduction Discussion Sections Conclusions and Recommendations End Material
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports Cover/Title Page
Project title Client’s name (“Prepared for…”) Your name and/or the name of your organization (“Prepared by…”)
Date of submission
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Title Page
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports
Letter/Memo of Transmittal Place Letter/Memo Immediately after Title Page
Include a Major Point from Report
Acknowledge Those Who Helped You Follow Letter and Memo Conventions
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Letter of Transmittal
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports Table of Contents
Make It Very Readable Use the Contents Page to Reveal Report Emphases
Consider Leaving Out Low-Level Headings
List Appendices Use Parallel Form in All Entries Proofread Carefully
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Table of Contents
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports
List of Illustrations Number Title Page number Tables and figures may be listed separately
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List of Illustrations
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports Executive Summary
Put It on One Page Avoid Technical Jargon Include Only Important Conclusions and Recommendations
Avoid References to the Report Body
Use Paragraph Format Write the Executive Summary Last
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Executive Summary
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports
Introduction State Your Purpose and Lead into Subsections
Include a Project Description Include Scope Information Consider Including Information on Report Format
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Introduction
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports
Discussion Sections Move from Facts to Opinions Use Frequent Headings and Subheadings
Use Listings to Break Up Long Paragraphs
Use Illustrations for Clarification and Persuasion
Place Excessive Detail in Appendices
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DiscussionSections
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Guidelines for the Nine Parts of Formal Reports
Conclusions and Recommendations Conclusions
Convictions or beliefs based on the findings in your study
Recommendations Actions you are suggesting based on your conclusions
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Conclusions and Recommendations
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End Material Appendices Glossary Bibliography Index
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Specific Guidelines for Four Common Reports
Equipment Evaluations Provides objective data about how equipment has, or has not, functioned
Progress/Periodic Reports Summarizes your work over a specific period of time or on a specific project
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Specific Guidelines for Four Common Reports
Problem Analyses Presents readers with a detailed description of problems
Recommendation Reports Presents readers with specific suggestions that affect personnel, equipment, procedures, products, services, etc.