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Jenna Rolf

Professor Jan Rieman

English 1103

February 6, 2011

I felt pretty good about this essay after I had it reviewed by my peer editing group. They

all seemed to enjoy it and they said it was well written. After I revised it this time I added a few

more examples in the paragraph about church and I fixed a few grammatical errors and I cited

Brandt where I forgot to in the original paper. I am still not sure if my opening and closing

paragraphs are exactly where they need to be at this point; but if they do need some work I am

having a hard time deciding what I should make different. Also, I felt at times while writing this

essay that I had too many sponsors that I am writing about, should I cut a few out or should I

leave them all in the paper?

L iterate L ife and its Sponsors

L iteracy, though often taken for granted in most cultures in todays society, is one of the

greatest accomplishments that a person could ever achieve in their lifetime. Becoming literate

seems so simple to most because people are being taught at earlier ages to understand and

interpret ideas and information given. However, any agents, local or distant, concrete or

abstract, who enable, support, teach, model, as well as recruit, regulate, suppress, or withhold

literacy- and gain advantage by it in some way, according to Deborah Brandts Sponsors of

L iteracy, are all sponsors that help every person become literate. So, in fact, literacy and the act

of becoming literate or not is determined by an extremely large number of places, people, and


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events that most do not even realize. Parents, teachers, myself, and even children younger than

me have all taught me or taken away from me different types of literacy in many different places

while using many different resources. I never noticed how wide the variety is of all the people,

places, and resources that have helped me achieve literacy throughout the years. And although

there are not as many suppressors of my literacy, I have come to recognize a few times when I

could have learned more and failed to do so.

The two people who I look up to more than anything, my parents, are the greatest

sponsors of my literacy. Ever since I was a baby there were plenty of books around my house

for me to read. Books may not seem important for children to have who cannot yet read, but just

looking at the words repeatedly without knowing what they mean still helps to generate the

beginning stages of literacy in a small childs mind. Ever since I was a little girl, I loved books.

One of my favorite activities was to go sit alone in my house with a pile of books, and just go

through them for hours. If my parents had not made these books accessible to me at such a

young age my passion for books then and now would most likely not be the same. As I continued

to grow and began to learn how to read in kindergarten and first grade, my parents would sit

down with me every night and help me read the books that I had brought home from school.

They were extremely patient with me and never made me feel bad or as though I was a burden

when I needed help with my reading. A strong support system is very important when a person

is trying to become literate in a new way; it makes the process much easier. Not only did they

help me with my reading, but also with my writing. I remember sitting on the living room floor

with my parents as they were teaching me to write my name. The overwhelming delight and

satisfaction we all had when I wrote my name completely by myself was one of the best feelings

I have ever experienced, we were all so proud.


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Not only did my parents help me with educational literacys, but they also helped me

with social literacys; which I am still continuing to learn today. Manners and being polite were

always expected in my household growing up. I would very much consider this literacy because

it affects the way we communicate with other people. These social literacys started with the

simple phrases such as yes sir and no maam, please and thank you and became more

advanced, such as speaking up and talking loud enough when giving a response to a question

someone had asked me. My parents are still reminding me of social literacy now as it pertains to

my changing and growing world. For instance, they will sometimes coach me on how to speak

during a job interview or remind me how important it is to talk with my professors if there is anissue. These are great thoughts for me to keep in mind as I become more socially interactive

with older people of a higher status than myself. These skills that my parents have taught me

prove that literacy does not have to be only written, but it also has the ability to be verbal.

Teachers in my community have also taught me a great deal towards my literacy. Of

course there were always an abundance of books in every school that I attended, but what I have

learned about computers throughout my years of schooling has been extreme. I have had a

computer at my house since I was a small child, but my parents could not teach me how to do

everything on it that my teachers have been able to show me. In fact, I usually have to help my

parents when it comes to computers because it is not a technology that they grew up becoming

literate towards. From elementary school all the way through high school I was forced to take

computer classes. I actually disliked these classes very much because I am not too computer

savvy. However, I now realize that if I was not made to take those computer classes, then I

would have no idea how to do anything at all on computers; and that would be detrimental to my

being able to function adequately in college right now because almost everything in college


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revolves around computers. Also, once I make it to the workforce computers will still be

extremely prominent in my everyday activities. My teachers were preparing me for one of the

greatest literacys in my life before I even realized what they were doing.

Church has also been an important part of my life from the time I was born. The teachers

at my church, who helped me to understand my religion and faith at Sunday school every week,

have helped a great deal to make God so special to me throughout my life. Without their

willingness to help me understand the Bible, my literacy of it would not be as great as it is today.

In Sunday school my teachers taught me new prayers and we took notes on different books and

people in the Bible. Actually having to memorize and write down prayers and names helped me

a great deal to understand and remember all the important biblical information that I was

receiving. Becoming literate about the word of God and everything that he stands for has truly

been a blessing to me, and I am so thankful to all the parent volunteer teachers at my church who

spent that one hour a week teaching me about the most important part of who I am. Although I

have learned about the Bible and God for most of my life, I still feel as though my faith is

something that can never discontinue evolving and becoming stronger. Becoming more literate

towards my faith, I believe, is something that I will continue for the rest of my life. I feel secure

in my faith and with what I know about it, but when it comes to something so great, there is

always more to be learned and understood. I will rely on my sponsors of faith forever to become

more literate towards God.

People who have been my sponsors in acquiring new literacys have not always been

older than me. In fact, three children who are considerably younger than me have taught me a

great deal about being literate. Elena, Mark, and Paul are their names and they are six, five, and

three years old now. I began babysitting for these children about three years ago and realized


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that not only do they speak English, but they can also speak Portuguese and Spanish. And Elena,

the six year old is in a school that is teaching her to learn French. It was amazing to me that

these children could learn so many languages at such a young age. I know that languages are

easier to learn when people are younger, but I had never seen that theory being used to such a

great degree. I realized that these children had great people in their lives who were teaching

them to become extremely literate in many different cultures, so they would have more

opportunities in the future. I now know that their family members and teachers who are giving

them such a huge opportunity are their sponsors, and these children actually became my

sponsors. When I would babysit them they would teach me new words in all the languages thatthey knew and I found it to be a very educational experience. I learned a considerable amount

from listening to them talk and read books that were in Portuguese, Spanish, and French. That

experience, looking back on it now, makes me see how one sponsor teaching a person can lead to

a new sponsor teaching someone else and then the chain continues and many people become

educated in all different ways.

As well as people and places, different events and activities can also lead a person to new

found literacy. When I began playing soccer in fourth grade I learned so many new phrases and

terms that I had never heard of before in my life. There were goal kicks and corner kicks and

midfield and forwards and defenders. At first it seemed very overwhelming because I really had

no idea what my coaches were trying to say to me when they used all of that terminology.

Jumping into new situations and roles, completely different from anything you have formerly

experienced can be exhausting and daunting. Even though my experience was just with soccer, I

can relate and somewhat understand how Dwayne L owery felt in Sponsors of L iteracy when

he had to learn all new business tactics and procedures that he had never been accustomed to


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before. However, unlike L owery; who was forced to retire because he could not keep up with all

the literacy changes, I continued with soccer and it did not take long before I knew what all the

names meant and really began to enjoy playing the game. There have been many events in my

life that have taken place and caused me to become literate in ways that I never would have

imagined.

Although most of my sponsors have taught me how to be more literate than I ever even

noticed, there have been a few times in my life when literacy has been withheld from me. The

first time was learning how to speak a foreign language fluently. The first time I took a foreign

language class was in sixth grade and it was for only one semester. Then I continued to take

Spanish classes from seventh grade through eleventh grade. However, I was never able to grasp

all the information as well as I wanted to, especially when it came to the upper level classes in

high school. If I would have been exposed to Spanish in elementary school, or possibly even

before that, I would have had a much easier time learning the language. More schools and

parents need to start teaching their children how to read, write, and speak in another language

before they enter elementary school. This would be extremely useful in todays world where it is

much easier to be successful if you are bilingual. While I did eventually get a foreign language

education, I feel as though it was not adequate because I was not given the education soon

enough.

L earning how to play and read music is another literacy that was suppressed in my life.

However, I have no one to blame for that except myself. I believe that a person is the greatest

suppressor of literacy to themselves if they are not willing to learn. And that is exactly what

happened to me. My parents paid for me to go to band camp for a week over the summer when I

was in elementary school and after one day of being at the camp I refused to go back. Playing


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the flute was a great deal harder than I thought it was going to be, so I got frustrated the first day

and quit. After that I never tried to play another instrument again, even when my parents asked

me if I wanted to try. Now that I am older, I wish that I could play an instrument because it

seems like such an uplifting experience. I was an extremely foolish sponsor to myself that time;

I missed out on learning a literacy that could have been very beneficial to me now and in the

future.

L iteracy is something that I will no longer take for granted as I progress and continue to

learn even more. Now that I have come to recognize all the sponsors who have played a major

role in shaping my literate life, I am greatly looking forward to meeting new sponsors and

hopefully becoming a sponsor myself for people some day. The people, places, resources, and

events that have happened during my life are much greater than what can be seen from just the

surface. All these connections have given me the understanding and intelligence that I have

today.

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