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August 24‐25, 2015

SWBAT: Create persuasive essay

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AgendaBellwork (20 minutes)

Agenda (3 minutes)

Team building (10 minutes) All In

Workshop (45 minutes)You Are Your Words6 Word MemoirEducational Summary

Peace/Out (5 minutes)

Bellwork1. I pose question

2. 30 seconds of thought.

3. EVERYONE will write a response.

4. Two will go to Oration Station

http://cultivatingthought.com/author/jonathan‐safran‐foer/

Pam HomanHomanEnglish 3August 18, 2015

George Bernard Shaw once said, “Progress is impossible without change, and those who cannot change their minds cannot change anything.” I believe my mind changes faster than my body. As a teacher, every day I am faced with new decisions—whether to run a lesson the same way I ran it the period before, for example. Each decision I make is like a ripple, and with each ripple, comes different knowledge for both myself and my students. I hope that the changes I make each day makes changes

August 24, 2015B/Chipotle CupTopic=Change

Holy cow—already

introducing the quote?!?

August 24‐25, 2015


UPCOMING‐ EVEN DAY

THIS WEEK8/24

YAYW project‐ peer editing

AoW beginsYAYW educational

paragraph

8/26YAYW project‐ peer

editingTyping material‐LAB

8/28“Free Write Friday”YAYW workshop

NEXT WEEK9/1

YAYW DUEYAYW REFECTION

AoW begins

9/3AoW in class summary

NOTE:9/7 NO SCHOOL

Put this in your Agenda

August 24‐25, 2015


UPCOMING‐ ODD DAY

THIS WEEK8/25

YAYW project‐ peer editing

Intro essayAoW begins

8/27YAYW project workshop‐LAB

NEXT WEEK8/31

YAYW Project DUEREFLECTIONAoW begins

9/2AoW in class summary

9/4FREE WRITE FRIDAY

Workshop

NOTE: NO SCHOOL 9/7

Put this in your Agenda

August 24‐25, 2015


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Bellwork (20 minutes)

Agenda (3 minutes)




The year is just beginning …are you ALL IN?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OWbK6kvquyY

August 24‐25, 2015


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Agenda (3 minutes)

Team building (10 minutes)

All In



Why is this funny?Yes, it is.

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Agenda (3 minutes)




Project: You are Your Words

Micrography

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Agenda (3 minutes)




Narrative Voice—

Who is telling the story/how

1st person— “I, me, my, we…” I am

2nd person– you, your

3rd person– use your name, he she, they, one, it

You are going to try to use more than an immediate reflection of you in this exercise.

August 24‐25, 2015

SWBAT: Create persuasive essay”

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Agenda (3 minutes)





Prep work: Grammar/Figurative LanguageSection: NOTES

TEACHER

Mind racing like a cheetah, students are her prey– she has to stay one step ahead in order to set traps of knowledge

With hair like springs, Einstein’s by the last period of the day, her expended energy is visual; a good day looks big

and crazy, bad is flat and dull.

7:00PM is cut off, time for her actual family, and they sit doing homework until late, until brains are no longer

processing words of their own, and still there are always more from someone else because “knowledge is power.”

And she is the source..

Narrative voice changed

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Agenda (3 minutes)




Project: You are Your WordsPrep work: Six Word Memoir

Section: NOTES

Ernest Hemingway“For sale: baby shoes, never worn.”

What six words describe your educational story?

http://www.smithteens.com/

August 24‐25, 2015


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Agenda (3 minutes)


All In




Prep Work: Persuasive writing

Prove you are interesting5 paragraphs

Intro: Hook/ThesisBody Paragraphs

Conclusion

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Agenda (3 minutes)


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Assume adults do not like/respect teens1. Arrogant2. Loud

3. Obnoxious4. Dangerous5. Illegal

Prove them wrong

Informal poll

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Agenda (3 minutes)


All In





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All In





Hook (NO RHETORICAL ?)Thesis: I am worth knowing

Reason 1Reason 2Reason 3

Conclusion

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Agenda (3 minutes)


All In





Hook=How you interest audience

Quotes (about teens?)One word statement

StatisticsSound effect

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Agenda (3 minutes)






Thesis: What you are fighting

I am worth getting to knowI am unique

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Hook (invite me in)+

Topic (remind me why we are here)+

A big idea (needs to be universal)+

Thesis What you are fighting

= INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH

INTRO HAS STRUCTURE

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Agenda (3 minutes)


All In





Body paragraphs: Why are you interesting? What are you about?

PICK THREEEducation?Family?Hobbies?

Afterschool activities?


Keep the thesis in mind

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Agenda (3 minutes)


All In





Conclusion: Mic Drop

Remind me of the topicRemind me of your thesis

Mic Drop out


Keep the thesis in mind

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Agenda (3 minutes)




HOMEWORK

1. 5 paragraph essay—introduce yourself

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Agenda (3 minutes)




Write on a piece of scratch paperName/Teacher/Class/Date

Can you write one adjective about yourself using first

person?(really answer)

What type of sentence is that?

PLEASE USE MLA HEADING

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