slides from sept 9
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BNL to bring: • Syllabus • Printout of Topic sheets with BNL notes.
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BNL reviewed the following: 14 student draBs. These generally seemed like they were on the right track for the stage of draBing they were in. Three were really brief, about half or a liFle more of the expected length, which Larson suggested was 1200 words. Three had very long paragraphs; essenJally each secJon was a single paragraph. Try to use paragraph breaks to organize your wriJng; each paragraph should present a single point and its supporJng informaJon. One paper used bullet-‐point style of organizaJon, which I’d like you to avoid here. One did not use the memo formaPng recommended in the assignment descripJon; easily remedied.
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Do not even consider Levels 3 and 4 unJl you have reviewed Levels 1 and 2. At levels 3 and 4, you can do markup directly on the other student’s paper. Among the peer reviews: Of the six I’ve looked at so far, four of them failed to provide much review at levels 1 and 2. Try very hard during the next opportunity to do that. (Everyone gets full “credit” for this peer review, whether they provided feedback at those levels or not.)
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Deadlines on next slide
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How long does ABO say abstract/execuJve summary should be? In business, I’ve hardly ever seen anyone use an “abstract.” Usually just an execuJve summary. Though someJmes folks effecJvely put a paragraph of abstract-‐like text on the cover or Jtle page.
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