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Shifting from Research to Prewriting
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Feeling frustrated or confused after yesterday’s class?
The hope is at the end of class you’ll feel like this (besides it is such a beautiful day):
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Now we have finished the research process we are now moving onto the prewriting phase of the
essay.
Prewriting entails two parts:
1. Essay Brainstorm
2. Outline
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Essay Brainstorm
• The essay brainstorm is a chance for you to organize ideas in a logical way so we can write about it.
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Consider the Subtopics: Define, Describe, Evaluate
You need to generate your ideas around our three subtopics:
1. Define: What is the topic?
2. Describe: What does the topic look like or what does it do?
3. Evaluate: How can you apply the topic to the outside world? How you can apply this knowledge to make good choices?
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Use Ms. Robin’s Task Sheet to Guide You
If you fall into A Category:• Define: Topic• *Describe: Symptoms Types
Evaluate:Treatment PreventionIf your fall into the B category:• Define: Define• Describe: Benefits Drawbacks Effects• Evaluate: Action Plan
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So, how do I apply this to the Brainstorm? Example 1: Disease
If my topic was measles, I need to include six subtopics that include Define, Describe, Evaluate:
Six original Subtopics: Definition of TopicSymptoms, Types, TransmissionTreatment, PreventionThree Subtopics:Define: Definition of TopicDescribe: Symptoms, Types, Transmission Evaluate: Treatment, Prevention
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So, how do I apply this to the Brainstorm? Example 2: Disorder
If my topic was bipolar disorder, I need to include six subtopics that include Define, Describe, Evaluate:
Six original Subtopics: Definition of Topic
Treatment, Prevention, Prevalence, Health Effects
Three Subtopics:
Define: Definition of Topic
Describe: Diagnosis, Prevalence, Health Effects
Evaluate: Treatment, Prevention
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So, how do I apply this to the Brainstorm? Example 3: Activity
If my topic was Yoga, I need to include six subtopics that include Define, Describe, Evaluate:
Six original Subtopics: Definition of TopicTypes, Background/History, Practice, Health
Effects, Action PlanThree Subtopics:Define: Definition of TopicDescribe: Types, Background/History, Health
Effects Evaluate: Practice, Action Plan
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The Steps to make your Brainstorm
Step 1: Choose Six Subtopics, using Ms. Robin’s task sheet, that include topics relating to: Define, Describe, Evaluate.
Step 2: Take your Six Subtopics group them together into categories of Define, Describe, Evaluate
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Task 1
Work with your neighbor and do one of the following:
1. Help each other organize your brainstorm.
2. Give a Tellback how you organized your Brainstorm.
3. Discuss how your Brainstorm can be converted into an Outline.
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The Outline
Once you have completed your Brainstorm you are ready to create an Outline.
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The Organization of Your Essay
I. Intro Paragraph: Includes Hook, Thesis, Subtopics
II. Subtopic 1: Define Topic
III. Subtopic 2: Describe Topic
IV. Subtopic 3: Evaluate Topic
V. Conclusion: Restate Thesis, Subtopics, and So What?
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Whoa…Isn’t this essay 4 – 6 pages.
• How do you make a 5 paragraph essay 4 – 6 pages?
• Remember our friends: Describe, Define, Evaluate?
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Three Subtopics to Six Subtopics.
• Using your Brainstorm you categorized six subtopics to three.
• This means each subtopic can be more than one paragraph.
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Three Subtopics to Six Subtopics: Example
Intro: paragraph 1Define Topic: paragraph 2Describe Topic:-Symptoms: paragraph 3-Diagnosis: paragraph 4-Risks: paragraph 5Evaluate Topic:-Treatment: paragraph 6-Prevention: paragraph 7Conclusion: paragraph 8
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Remember the In-Text Citations
• Because this essay includes 5 sources, you need 5 in-text citations.
In-Text Citations: References to your sources within your essay.
MLA Citations: References in your Works Cited Page.
*Remember all citations in the essay have to be in your Works Cited Page
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What does that look like?
• Hook: Citation 1
• Define: Citation 2
• Describe: Citation 3
• Evaluate: Citation 4
• So What?: Citation 5
Can you have more than 5 citations? Yes, but make sure all sources are in your Works Cited Page.
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Convert your research question into a statement.
• Research Question: How does one who suffers from asthma treat the problem and live a healthy lifestyle.
• Thesis: People who suffer from asthma can treat the problem and live a healthy lifestyle.
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Your Task 2:
1. Complete your Brainstorm.
2. Use your Brainstorm and your notes to work on your outline.
3. Your brainstorm and outline are due on Monday May 19th!
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Now let us check where we at now.
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