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    ALTOR:The Shadow Rebellion

    For information about The Chronicles of Ageron, or to

    contact the author, please visit:

    www.ljdevet.com

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    The Chronicles of Ageron

    ALTOR:

    The Shadow Rebellion

    L. J. deVet

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    Copyright Notice:

    The Chronicles of Ageron

    ALTOR: The Shadow Rebellion

    Paperback Edition

    978 0 9873686 2 1

    L. J. deVethttp://www.ljdevet.com

    All rights reserved.

    This publication contains material protected by Copyright

    Laws. Any unauthorised reprint or use of this material is

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    permission of the author and publisher.

    Copyright L. J. deVet, 2012.

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    Dedication:

    For the three who inspire me,Khye, Halli and Avhaya,

    and for John, the one who is forever.

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    !PROLOGUE "

    Fear is not an emotion I feel very often. Not at all, really. I guess asituation in which it has proved necessary has never presented

    itself. Until now.

    I cant help but feel it surge through me as I stare helplessly

    into the ominous darkness that has engulfed me. Every part of my

    body, both inside and out, is beginning to feel as empty and

    lifeless as the endless shadow I now find myself a part. I feel nomore than an empty nothingness; unable to see, hear or feel

    anything but the emptiness that surrounds me. I might as well be a

    lonesome star, burning vibrantly in its dedicated place in the vast,

    endless universe, as though possessing some form of purpose

    within it, but illuminating absolutely nothing around me because I

    am surrounded by nothing but darkness. Alone.The idea of the darkness alone is not what causes me alarm.

    What type of Guardian would I be if that were the case? Instead,

    its unfamiliarity and apparent endlessness cause a sense of panic to

    surge through me; one I want nothing more than to disappear. I

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    can feel no greater urge than to free myself from that which has me

    so involuntarily helpless, but I am able to do nothing. I have

    become nothing.

    Unable to make any practical movement, and remaining at

    the absolute control of the lifeless atmosphere around me, I cease

    any further effort to free myself, knowing perfectly well that any

    such attempt would be futile at best, and allow for the darkness to

    consume me entirely. I release my mind from any further thought,

    and force my mind, body and soul to relax at my will, ready for

    the emptiness to take the control over me that it so desperately

    wants. Ready for my insides to fall into a similar abyss of

    emptiness to that which surrounds me.

    Somewhere within my increasingly hollow being, I can sense

    the panic growing uncontrollably; a sensation of which I am not

    too familiar with. I have never before had reason to feel fear, andthe onset of this new and unfamiliar feeling is beginning to

    frighten me more so than the darkness itself. I can sense the panic

    growing uncontrollably, prompting my breathing to assume a wild

    and irregular pattern. My heart is thumping erratically, and each

    beat sounds as though my heart is preparing to leap out from my

    chest, sick of ever having been contained within it. With each andevery breath that I draw, a short, sharp pain manifests within my

    lungs. Its like my body is trying to tell me something. To warn

    me of an imminent danger.

    As I am forced to stare helplessly into the endless darkness

    before me, my interest is captured by the most unexpected of

    flashes of tiny, almost indistinguishable light in the distance. Thesudden flash quickly subsides, revealing behind it two similarly

    tiny lights, but of differing colour; one blue, and the other red.

    Although only small in stature, their vibrancy is made more

    distinct due to the fact that they are surrounded by nothing but

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    complete darkness, forcing their emanating glow to multiply

    dramatically.

    Drawn into a trance of admiration at the new sources of light,

    I cant help but watch them. They posses an appeal that is almost

    hypnotising. As my gaze deepens, I notice that the lights are

    progressively growing in size, offering the impression that they are

    gradually advancing towards me. After only seconds, they double

    in size, and are continuing to grow with each passing moment.

    Watching them progress towards me, my one thought is that the

    glows are the oddly discoloured headlights of a car, travelling

    towards me with great speed; oblivious to the empty darkness

    before it, and unaware of my being in its immediate path.

    With each second that lapses, the lights continue to grow. I

    know full well they are gaining momentum, and within a matter

    of moments I will be met face to face with what unknownphenomenon is approaching me. Whatever its source may be it is

    headed in my very direction, increasing in velocity to now

    resemble the headlights of a bullet train, more so than a car. This

    is it, I cant help but convince myself.

    Within only seconds, less time than I am awarded to draw a

    final breath, the darkness surrounding me disappears. In its place,a bright, golden light appears, swallowing behind it the blue and

    red lights that had me transfixed only seconds before. Its vibrancy

    forces my eyes closed, and I raise my arm to protect my eyes. In

    one, instantaneous moment, the golden light has taken over.

    My one and only thought is that this is death, and I am its

    next victim.

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    !CHAPTER ONE "The Worst Day

    I spring upright, drenched in the flood of sweat that coats my bed.

    All other sounds are drowned out by the loud drum of my

    erratically beating heart, each beat resembling what sound you

    would expect a giants footsteps to produce.

    The world around me, consisting only of the contents of my

    bedroom at this point, is moving as I do. Everything thatsurrounds me rises and falls with each and every breath I draw. Up

    and down. Up and down. I know full well that my bedroom

    contents are not in fact moving, but they most certainly appear it

    from where I sit.

    With each breath comes an unbearably sharp burn that

    sprouts within my chest, feeling as though it is eating my lungs bitby bit. I can do nothing but sit and make every possible attempt to

    correct my breathing, hoping desperately that everything else will

    sort itself out.

    It takes only a matter of seconds for me to begin hearing the

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    thumping of my heart subside, eventually slowing to its almost

    regular rhythm. As the beating of my heart weakens, so too does

    the urgency for breath, allowing me to regain some control over

    my breathing, but not all.

    I cant help but notice my chest, which until this point had

    been bounding up and down, rising and falling at the command of

    each breath, now settling to a regular rhythm and movement.

    Whatever it is that is happening to me, it is beginning to correct

    itself, much to my relief.

    I can feel as my senses become my own again, my vision

    steadying and the drone of my heart reducing to a standard level.

    Only then do I allow myself to feel even remotely relieved. As

    much as I would love to feel entirely relieved, I cannot help but

    feel apprehensive about the entire ordeal. It was nothing, I try to

    convince myself. It was just a dream.A nightmare.Looking up from my sweat-drenched bed, I know that isnt

    quite the case. I am all too familiar with experiences beyond the

    ordinary, but never have I experienced a dream so vivid; so real.

    Even my strongest of premonitions has never been so detailed and

    lifelike. Thinking about the mysterious events of the dream only

    compounds what confusion I already feel. One that I cant seem toshake off, regardless of how hard I try. It was a dream, I further

    persuade myself. Nothing more.

    In an effort to distract myself from further thought, I decide

    its best to withdraw myself from the place in which the strange

    dream took place. I quickly leave what thoughts remain of my

    dream at bay, and twist my legs over the beds edge, using everyounce of strength that remains at my disposal to heave myself up

    and out of it.

    Every muscle within me aches, searing with intense pain as I

    rise. My joints and muscles feel as though they have just

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    undergone several hours of intense training, or at the very least,

    that they have been exposed to the torment of an unending

    marathon.

    Pushing through the sharp pain haunting every muscle of my

    body, I trudge dawdlingly towards my bedroom door. As I

    approach it, the periphery of my vision reveals that I have

    neglected to open my bedroom curtains and window. I first

    consider leaving them untouched, but know all too well that is a

    thought my grandmother would strongly disapprove of.

    As I motion to alter my direction, a severing pain sprouts in

    my legs, which then progresses violently to reach every other

    muscle in my body. The thought of causing any further pain by

    walking to the window is one that holds little appeal. The thought

    alone of doing so causes more pain than its worth.

    Instead, I choose the path of laziness and decide to use mytelekinesis to open them. I know I shouldnt, but what good is

    having all of this power and never being given the opportunity to

    use them at all? In a slow and steady motion, I raise my right arm

    and stretch it out in front of me. I open my palm, and turn it

    vertically so it now lines parallel to the divide in the centre of the

    curtains two halves. Whilst standing several metres away from thecurtains, I slowly slide my outstretched hand to the left, the very

    direction my palm is facing, and force the left half of the curtain to

    open steadily without ever touching it. As though an invisible

    force is causing it, the left curtain is drawn open entirely, allowing

    what light lies beyond the window to stream through it

    effortlessly.I repeat the very same for the opposite half of the curtain, and

    within seconds my entire bedroom is illuminated by the suns

    radiant light, changing in colour as it passes through the different

    colours of the ornately stained glass.

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    Staring at the lock that secures the window, I concentrate

    with all my might, carefully imagining my opening it by hand. As

    though knowing exactly what I am hoping to achieve, the lock

    snaps open with a reasonably loud click, allowing for me to levitate

    open the window using a similar technique I did the curtains.

    The very moment the window opens, I can feel the gentle

    breeze that forces itself inside, delicately whisking across my face,

    bringing with it the scent of freshly cut grass from outside. As I

    stand admiring both the scent of the grass and the result of my

    telekinetic ability, I cant help but feel smug with myself. Practice

    really does make perfect, I cant help but think.

    Practice is something of which I am all too familiar. In fact,

    much of my life has been spent practising. Not so much

    practising, but training. As a Sorcerer, particularly one assigned the

    role of protecting the rest of my kind as a Guardian, I am requiredto train endlessly in order to gain complete control over the three

    abilities I have developed to date; my telekinesis, premonitions and

    envelishment, the ability for us to teleport instantly to any desired

    location. Although seemingly impressive, I should have developed

    further abilities by now. I can only hope that they will present

    themselves soon.My favourite ability is my telekinesis. It is also one of my

    more useful powers. Not that that means much, considering

    theres never really been reason to use it. The only reason I am

    given to use it is for the smallest, petty things, like opening

    windows and doors. I am still developing my telekinesis. At first I

    was only able to lift that which I could physically carry, but sincethen my strength has improved, and I am now able to levitate far

    heavier objects, such as people and cars.

    My kind, Sorcerers, particularly those who are Guardians like

    myself, are not exactly supposed to use our powers for personal

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    gain. The use of our power is intended only for fulfilling our

    obligations to our people, and protecting all others within our

    world, Ageron, and those on Earth, who we call the Earthly.

    Such opportunity, however, has never presented itself. For as

    long as I can remember, all those who dwell within Ageron and on

    Earth have lived harmoniously, with not much excuse for us to put

    our power into practice. Of course, there have been occasions in

    our history where great evil has dwelled alongside us and

    threatened to take over our land, but I have never been told of all

    the details. Its as though everybody has chosen to put it behind

    them, and that nobody ever considers future threats a possibility.

    At times, I actually hope for something to happen. That way, I

    would be able to use my powers for something other than just

    training, for once.

    As much as I would love to use my power for everything, mygrandfather, Cassaius, constantly reminds me of my greater duty;

    all great strength and power can be attributed to an even greater

    cause. As much as I dislike hearing of it, I know it is true. Using

    my abilities for my own benefit is something I dont particularly

    enjoy doing, simply because I know its not really the right thing

    to do, but at the very same time I cant help myself. Not using mypower would mean that my abilities are going to waste completely.

    Something I never want to see happen. Ever.

    I know I was given my power for a greater purpose than to

    open curtains, but I cant live my life knowing I have such great

    power and will never see an opportunity to use them for anything.

    My destiny has provided me with power to protect my people, andas much as I dont want to take advantage of that, I cant sit by

    and allow for my power to weaken and remain undeveloped.

    With that thought, I use my telekinesis to open my bedroom

    door with a wave of my hand. It opens immediately, revealing

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    behind it the previously darkened hallway that is now illuminated

    by the light streaming through my bedroom window.

    As I leave my bedroom and enter the hallway, all the while

    feeling my muscles as they adapt to the pain of each progressive

    step, I cant help but notice the photographs that adorn the wall to

    my right. Normally I would continue down the corridor without

    ever having paid attention to them. The pain they cause every time

    I look is all too much to bear. Im not sure exactly what makes me

    look on this occasion, but the very moment my eyes meet them, I

    cant bear the thought of looking away. Its as though, for some

    peculiar reason, I am particularly drawn to them.

    Staring vacantly back towards me is my father, Lucillius, but

    whom everybody called Lucas for short. Judging by the

    photograph, he looks to be quite different in appearance to myself.

    His thick, dark hair is neatly parted to one side, allowing for everyvisible part of his scalp to remain adequately covered. Although he

    has similarly piercing eyes as I, his are a slightly softer tone. They

    are not necessarily a lighter colour, but are not quite as vibrant as

    my own. Like in every other photograph I have seen of him, his

    square-shaped face, which features a strong, slightly hooked nose

    at its centre, is covered generously with facial stubble, hidingbehind it the faint skin that is universal amongst our kind.

    Although his skin appears slightly darker than my own, it remains

    very pale nonetheless.

    As I stare carefully at the photograph, I notice my own

    reflection on the glass panel of the photo frame, made possible by

    the background light that enters the corridor via the lightstreaming violently through my bedroom door. My every feature,

    with the few exceptions of my skin and eyes, is completely

    opposite to that of my father. My eyes are a more vibrant blue

    than my fathers, and are more piercing than any others I have

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    seen, made to look even more that way due to my pale, almost

    glowing skin. Although my hair matches my fathers in colour,

    mine is not quite as thick, and is far scruffier, made worse by the

    fact that I have only just woken up. My face is relatively long and

    defined, and adorns a small button-like nose in the centre. I really

    couldnt look any more different to the man staring at me in the

    photograph.

    Stealing what attention Id been giving my own reflection is a

    beautiful woman standing directly beside my father; my mother.

    Long, dark hair, not quite as dark as my own, dangles graciously

    from her head and almost reaches her waist. Like my father and I,

    her eyes are a sapphire-like blue; not quite as piercing as my own.

    In the centre of her perfectly symmetrical face sits the most

    elegant, straight-edged nose I have seen before, which only adds to

    her beauty and makes her even more deserving of her name,Mirabelle.

    As my eyes move towards the final figure of the photograph, I

    cant help but flinch, knowing full well whom my eyes will last

    gaze upon. My baby sister, Anabelle, the only one of us I would

    have considered to have a remotely normal name, lay peacefully in

    her gleaming mothers arms. My gleaming mothers arms. She isthe only one I barely had a chance to meet. I have often overheard

    people commenting that she looked exactly like my mother, but

    how anybody can draw similarities in appearance between a baby

    and a full grown adult, I will never understand. Whatever

    comparisons people might make, she looks nothing but beautiful

    and content in the photograph.The gaze I have been offering to the photograph of my family

    is abruptly interrupted by a slight tickle racing down the side of

    my face. As I motion to flick whatever its cause away, I feel the

    warmth of a moist drizzle, only then realising that I have been

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    crying. For how long I cannot say, but I most certainly know the

    cause.

    My parents and sister died in a fatal accident when I was only

    five years old. On my fifth birthday to be precise. My parents were

    both twenty-six when they died, and Anabelle only six months old.

    Their lives had been prematurely stripped away from them. From

    me.

    Id always thought of my parents as invincible, a thought I

    know perfectly well is impossible, but its how I considered them

    nonetheless. I dont remember much at all about that night.

    Instead I must rely on what information I am told. The story I

    have always been provided is that there was an explosion caused by

    a gas leak, but Ive never believed that for a second. No gas leak

    could have killed my parents. Of that, Im sure.

    My grandparents raised me from that night, and every time Iquestion them about what happened they either repeat the same

    story, or refuse to explain it again. It has become quite the touchy

    subject, as any topic involving lost loved ones is. But I have

    promised myself I will find the answers to the questions that haunt

    me. One way or another.

    Unable to bear looking at their smiling faces a momentlonger, I begin to move off. As I walk away, I turn around a final

    time and take one last glimpse of the family I once belonged. The

    moment I do, a crushing thought strikes me. Today is my

    birthday. My fifteenth birthday. Ten years to the day my family

    was so undeservedly taken from me. A once happy occasion, now

    overcome by sadness and loss. A day I have grown to hate.As I distance myself from the photographs, I straighten one of

    the crooked frames using my telekinesis, before turning right way

    round and bowing my head, allowing the tears to fall freely down

    my face. I dont look up until I can feel the tears disappearing, and

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    when I do I find myself standing at the bottom of the grand

    staircase, not noticing I had walked down it.

    I continue down the hallway that leads off the staircase,

    relieved that the pain that had been haunting my muscles has now

    almost disappeared completely.

    Aurellius, I hear the familiar voice of my grandmother

    emerge from the dining room Id just passed.

    I carefully backtrack the few steps Id overshot the dining

    room, and turn into it, where I find my grandparents sitting at the

    table, sharing a pot of their daily morning tea.

    Ajay, Gran, I correct her.

    Only my grandparents ever refer to me by my birth name,

    despite my making it perfectly clear how much I hate it being

    used. My full name is Aurellius Jay Samuels. Who has a name that

    bad? I do. Everybody who is not my grandparents knows me asAjay; a name I much prefer.

    My birth name isnt exactly something Im entirely proud of.

    That being said, it does hold meaning, as do all other names for

    Guardians. A meaningful name is said to set us apart from those

    Sorcerers who do not bear the added responsibility of protecting

    our people. According to my grandparents, my name means TheGolden One. Something I am yet to see for myself.

    We thought youd never wake up, my smiling grandfather

    says sarcastically.

    I look a lot more like my grandfather, and even my

    grandmother for that matter, than I do my parents. Judging by the

    photographs, at least. Although he only stands slightly taller thanI, he has a presence about him that makes him appear ten times

    larger than he actually is. As with any other Sorcerer, he has

    piercing, almost glowing eyes; his a vibrant shade of blue like

    mine.

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    Although the colour varies between each of us, we all share a

    similar piercing-quality to our eyes. Much like humans, though,

    our eyes are entirely unique to us. No two Sorcerers have identical

    eyes, no matter how similar they may appear, and our eyes, as well

    as the paleness of our skin, clearly set us apart from the Earthly.

    Happy birthday, my grandmother interrupts the silence I

    hadnt realised developed.

    However greatly I despise being wished a happy birthday,

    purely because I could never be happy on such a day, I force a

    smile to show at least some gratitude. No matter how obvious I

    make my displeasure of my birthday, my grandparents never allow

    it to stop them from doing the one thing I wish they wouldnt.

    Making a fuss.

    Thanks Gran.

    I walk over and offer her a hug, at which she smilesappreciatively. My grandmother, Mildred, is always smiling. I refer

    to it as her trademark feature. Her eyes are also unique, even as far

    as our own kind is concerned. They are an emerald-like green;

    deep and mesmerising, unlike any others I have seen. As they gaze

    into your own, you can sense that she doesnt just see into your

    eyes; she sees what lies behind them. It feels as though she isreading your every thought, which proves difficult to hide

    anything from her.

    Everything else about her is not quite so unique. Her dark

    hair, which is a few shades lighter than my own, is always held in a

    neat bun at the rear of her head, revealing a youthful looking face

    as pale as my very own, appearing only forty, although aged sixty.Both my grandparents look much younger than they really are. Its

    a quality our kind possesses. Our life span extends to one hundred

    and fifty, and at our eldest we can appear as young as fifty to those

    who wouldnt know any better.

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    How are you holding up, kiddo? my grandfather asks

    concernedly, and the very moment the words leave his lips, I know

    exactly what he is referring to.

    Im fine, I lie. As good as I could be, I suppose.

    A short silence fills the room. A silence I wish would

    disappear immediately. I despise silences on days like today,

    regardless of how brief they may be. They allow for nothing more

    than the one thing I am so desperately seeking to avoid today;

    time. Time to think and remember about what it is that I lost. Its

    not at all that I want to forget my family. That is something I

    would never allow myself. Its that I want to forget the fact that I

    ever lost them.

    So, whats on the agenda for today? my grandfather asks,

    clearly understanding my uneasiness based on the expression Id

    produced.Uh, I guess Ill invite some friends over?

    The way I say it sounds as though I am answering, and asking

    permission at the same time.

    Just as well we wont be here to get in your way, then, my

    grandmother says.

    Why? I ask. Where are you going?Some of the other Altor have decided to call a meeting about

    new Ageronian Legislation they are wanting to introduce, so were

    needed at Sgon, my grandfather answers.

    My initial reaction leaves me wanting to join them, but at the

    same time Im not quite fond of the idea of attending a meeting

    today. Sitting in silence will provide far too much time to thinkthan Id like.

    Sgon is a building within Ageron that is used as the base for

    governing our land, almost like a house of parliament. A place so

    dull and uneventful would surely leave me with more thinking

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    time than Id like.

    The rulers of our land are given the name Altor, and consist

    of all members of seven separate family groups that are direct

    descendents of the very first Altor elected to govern our land. Its

    much like a royal family, only there are seven of them.

    My family is one of those seven. I am an Altor. Not only do I

    possess the responsibility of protecting my people, I have the

    added responsibility of governing them when I become of age. In

    three years to this very day, on my eighteenth birthday, I will

    become an active member of the Altor, and will be required to

    attend these boring meetings my grandparents so often visit Sgon

    for.

    As an Altor, I will be responsible to make sure all Guardians

    are fulfilling their obligations, and will be required to uphold the

    law of our land; the many laws my ancestors had helped to create.Although a daunting prospect, there is comfort in knowing that

    Altor are said to be amongst the most powerful of our kind.

    Something I am yet to see for myself.

    Dont let me stand in the way of your fun, I say sarcastically.

    Try and stop us, my grandfather says, prompting a slight

    pause. No, seriously. Please stop us.I cant help but laugh. I know the meetings are dull, and I

    know my grandparents would rather be at home with me today,

    but we all know how important they are to all of Ageron.

    My grandparents stand, and leave the dining room for the

    kitchen with their empty teacups. I am left alone for a few short

    moments, but am joined once more as they return to the diningroom. As they return, they both approach me and offer a hug,

    before whispering a final happy birthday in my ear, and walking

    to the opposite side of the room, where they turn and face me.

    Dont you have too much fun while were gone, my

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    grandmother says with her trademark smile.

    Ill try, I add jokingly.

    Before I have a chance to do or say anything more, a gentle

    breeze fills the room, and my grandfather offers a wink before his

    entire body is replaced with nothing more than a bright, blue

    light; one that complements the colour of his eyes, and illuminates

    every corner of the dining room we stand. The shape of the light

    still matches that of his body, but it is beginning to reduce in size,

    as though sucking itself in at his chest.

    With each progressing moment the light is drawing itself

    inward, now becoming no more than a diminishing glow of light

    hovering unaided in the air, continuing to decrease in size as it

    progresses inward. In less time than I have to realise what is

    happening, the entire glow that has replaced my grandfather has

    become nothing more than a ball of blue light, still hovering of itsown accord in the air. With a soft slurping sound, the light is

    sucked out of the air, removed from it as though being sucked in

    by a vacuum cleaner, leaving nothing behind but the empty space

    my grandfather had stood only seconds before.

    Although Ive witnessed an envelishment many times before,

    and perform it almost daily myself, it is still a concept that I findabsolutely remarkable. Not all of my kind has the ability to

    envelish, but those of us who do are able to roam freely between

    both Ageron and Earth. Those who lack the ability to envelish are

    unable to leave Ageron, and are forced to remain within it for life.

    Our envelished form, or how our envelishment looks from

    the outside, depends on what Ageronian species we are. AllSorcerers take form of light, one that complements the colour of

    our eyes, but other species can simply vanish, or are replaced with

    a shadow. This makes it easy for us to identify who it is that is

    envelishing.

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    Although not an entirely pleasant experience, having your

    body break down into tiny pieces of light just to have it sucked out

    of the air and be reassembled moments later, it is one of our most

    vital. I have grown used to it with more use of it, and it has now

    become second nature.

    Just as the glow of blue within the room vanishes, it is

    replaced by a bright, green light that begins to swallow my

    grandmother behind it, bringing with it the familiar gentle breeze

    that whisks through the air. Within seconds, my grandmother is

    replaced entirely by her blindingly green light, which then begins

    to reduce in size, eventually becoming no more than a ball of light,

    just as had been the case with my grandfather. A fraction of a

    second later, the ball of light is sucked out of the air, and I am left

    alone in the room that had seconds before been occupied by three

    people.The very moment I know I have been left alone, rather than

    stand in absolute silence, I leave the dining room in search of a

    suitable distraction. The only place I can think of that could offer

    such a distraction is the living room, which I find myself entering

    only a few moments later.

    In the corner of the room, in front of the generously sizedwindow that dominates the front of the house, I notice a small

    table adorned with several candles and gemstones, each carefully

    allocated a special place of its own. Instantly, I know its the

    memorial my grandparents set up every year in remembrance of

    my family.

    At the rear of the table stands two tall candles, both a deepblue. The candles are placed meticulously behind two beautiful

    gemstones of complementing colour, the flickering flame of the

    candles reflecting somewhat weakly on their surface. At their front

    sits a much smaller candle and gemstone, one that is a lighter

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    shade of blue than those behind it. I know straight away what the

    gemstones are.

    All Sorcerers, even those who are not Guardians, are each

    presented a gemstone at our birth. We call this an illuminatem. It

    is not known where they come from, or how they are able to

    appear out of thin air as they do, but they arrive in much the same

    way as we envelish at our birth.

    It is said that Usellius, one of the very first Altor to have

    existed, and who is allegedly one of my earliest of ancestors, saw

    need for each Sorcerer to possess a symbol. A tool of guidance that

    assists us in the process of developing our power. Some have even

    claimed that the stones are the source of our power and that, if

    destroyed, will see no possibility of any future powers presenting

    themselves. To this day, no illuminatem has ever been destroyed,

    so it merely remains a theory. That being said, we do guard themas though they are our most valuable of possessions.

    The illuminatem themselves complement the colour of our

    eyes; our most unique feature, and the feature that sets each of us

    apart. The stones remain with us for life and grow as we do, not in

    size, but in ability. With time, and with the bond that is formed

    between each Sorcerer and their stone, it gradually develops astrong glow that illuminates whenever we touch it, and when we

    are in the process of developing a new power. Its like it warns us

    when we are about to develop a new ability.

    Standing before the memorial my grandparents had set up, I

    run my fingertips gently across the surface of each of the stones;

    my fathers first, then my mothers and lastly my sisters. I canthelp but shudder at the thought that my sister never had the

    opportunity to see her illuminatem, or even understand what

    significant purpose it had to her. The thought is enough to

    produce yet another tear to form in the edge of my eye.

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    I reach up to stop it from falling down my face, but I am too

    slow. It slides gently down my cheek before plummeting towards

    the ground below me. I stare helplessly at the falling tear as it

    approaches the ground, plummeting ever so slowly, as though

    trapped in a world of slow motion.

    Before the tear makes contact with the ground below me, the

    entire room, and everything in it, is illuminated by an intense

    green light, one that I know not to be my grandmothers. I raise

    my head at the interruption, staring blankly at the wall in front of

    me, and immediately a sense of panic begins to swell within me,

    much like that I had experienced in my dream.

    A gentle breeze whisks through the air, and I feel my hair

    fluttering involuntarily, as though in its grasp. Standing still, not

    wanting to turn and face whoever or whatever has invited itself

    into my home, I remain facing forward, looking away from it andhoping that it is nothing to be afraid of. Whether it is from fear or

    carelessness, I simply cannot bring myself to look.

    Within moments, both the light and breeze subside, and I am

    left exactly as I was prior to the interruption. Only this time I can

    sense something. I can sense someone. A lengthy silence fills the

    space around me, only this time it is a silence of uncertainty andfear. I cannot bring myself to speak. I cannot bring myself to

    move.

    I slowly prepare myself to turn, hoping desperately that I am

    ready to face whoever is standing behind me, the fear forcing my

    heart to beat so violently I can hear it in my mind.

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    !CHAPTER TWO "The Consor

    With one fluid movement, I jump on the spot, twisting midair

    and landing in the same place Id left the ground, only this time

    facing the opposite direction. I throw my hand out in front ready

    to use my telekinesis, only I stop as I notice the familiar face of the

    figure before me. One of which I am relieved to see.

    Before I have the chance to do anything more, I can feelmyself being hoisted off the ground, hovering helplessly above the

    floor of my living room. Standing with one arm outstretched, the

    person in front of me offers a single, undisturbed laugh, almost as

    if to say is that all youve got?

    I roll my eyes in my head, and steady their gaze back on the

    person in front of me.Did you really think you had a chance? he says smugly.

    Zaniel, if you dont let me down now Ill be sure to return

    the favour next time we train, I say threateningly, although I

    know it wont be enough to convince him.

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    Zaniel Richards is my best friend. My Consor. Each

    Guardian is allocated a fellow Guardian so that the two, together,

    can develop and master their abilities as they grow, and fulfil their

    destiny to protect Ageron and its people. These Guardians are

    referred to as a Consor. I am Zaniels Consor, and he is mine. We

    will remain that way for life.

    We dont get to choose who our Consor is. It is something

    nobody has any control over. Much like destiny. When a

    Guardian is ready to be matched with a suitable Consor, often just

    before the first of their powers presents itself, their illuminatem

    will begin to flash, almost like a beacon. The flashing does not

    stop until the paired Consor and illuminatem is found. It is a

    process that often takes months. I found Zaniel within a week.

    Consors always remain the closest of friends, and sometimes

    even more than that. Often the bond that ties the two Consorstogether can be so strong that they eventually wed and remain

    together for life, almost like soul mates. My grandparents are one

    of those couples, as too were my parents. Its for this reason that I

    am glad my Consor wasnt a girl. There would have been far too

    much expectation if that were to have happened. Either way we

    remain paired for life; either the best of friends, or soul mates.And thats supposed to worry me how, exactly? he asks,

    clearly unworried about the threat Id made.

    I dont justify his question with a response. Instead, I raise my

    eyebrows and stare at him, and allow for the lengthy silence to

    indicate just how pathetic I think his doubt of my ability is.

    Happy birthday, he breaks the silence, the smirk stillplastered across his face.

    I offer him a stern look, knowing he is well aware of just how

    greatly I despise my birthday.

    Yeah, I know, he responds remorsefully, understanding

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    exactly what the look had meant. Im sorry.

    With every ounce of care possible, he slowly lowers me to the

    ground and releases me from his telekinetic grasp. Before a second

    passes, I raise my arm and lift a nearby pillow without touching it,

    hurling it towards him with the flick of my wrist. It collides

    directly into his face, messing up his neat, brown hair.

    Zaniel looks nothing like I do. He has the standard pale skin

    and piercing eyes of any other Sorcerer, but he is tall and thin.

    Everything about Zaniel is narrow; his face is relatively thin, and

    he has a narrow and pointy nose that meets at its top with the ends

    of his two thin eyebrows. He has an almost fragile look about him,

    but I know all too well nothing could be any further from the

    truth.

    Dont mention it, I say in effort to make him feel less guilty.

    Besides, it gives me an excuse to kick your keister next time wetrain.

    A wide, arrogant grin produces across his face, one I am all

    too familiar with. He does have an arrogant quality to him, but

    thats just Zaniel.

    Wheres Milly and Cassaius? he asks curiously.

    Sgon.Another meeting? he asks, knowing perfectly well how

    tedious and overbearing they can sometimes be.

    I nod.

    Although not an Altor himself, he knows almost as much

    about it as I do. That is the one of the pros of being Consor to an

    Altor, I suppose.So, what mischief are we going to get up to, then?

    Zaniel always has been the more rebellious of the two of us.

    Ive always gathered it is due to his arrogance.

    That depends, I say. What mischief would you like to cause

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    today?

    He takes a moment to think about it, raises his hand as

    though he has an idea to share, but lowers it again, suggesting the

    thought he had has passed.

    The continuing silence is one that is beginning to disturb me,

    and I can feel myself beginning to do the one thing I so

    desperately dont wish to; think.

    How about we just train? I suggest, hoping to evade any

    further awkward silences.

    As much as training has become more of a chore than

    anything else, purely because of how frequently we actually do it

    and what few abilities I have to use, I know it is the perfect

    distraction for me. Training will keep my thoughts from haunting

    me.

    He offers a slight nod.Ill meet you there, he says approvingly.

    I can tell the thought of training has him excited. Zaniel loves

    training. He loves any chance to use his abilities. For some reason,

    he has himself convinced that he is more powerful than I, but deep

    down I know he knows that isnt the case. Im an Altor. Im far

    stronger than hell ever be. I just may not appear it yet.Before I have the chance to say anything more, he is engulfed

    in his green light, sucking itself in at its centre just as I had seen

    my grandparents do moments before. The familiar breeze whisks

    through the room, and the light quickly begins to decrease to no

    larger than a ball. In an instant, following yet another gentle

    slurping sound, he is gone; nothing left but the empty space beforeme.

    Without a second thought, I prepare myself for my travels.

    There is only one thing we really need to do when we envelish. In

    order for us to reach our destination, we simply must think

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    carefully about where it is we are, and where it is we want to go.

    Once we do this, our bodies do the rest for us.

    I picture my destination in my mind, describing the location

    to myself as though I am drawing a picture, and within an instant

    I can feel a tingling sensation as it overwhelms every part of my

    body. Everything in my presence becomes stained with a tint of

    blue, matching the colour emitting from my now glowing body. I

    can feel myself progressively shrinking in size, the world around

    me appearing to tower around me as I shrink.

    As I begin to shrink, my vision gradually widens to provide a

    complete 360-degree panoramic view of the living room, nothing

    within the room remaining hidden from my view. Before I am

    given an opportunity to admire the view before me, a violent flash

    of bright, blue light swallows everything around me. I am

    simultaneously thrown forward with a forceful jolt, similar ineffect to that experienced following the slamming of a cars brakes,

    and I know the air has sucked me in, and is ready to spit me back

    out at a different location, just as I would if being sucked into a

    small black hole.

    In the instant following, the bright light that had swallowed

    my every surrounding begins to subside, revealing behind it anentirely new surrounding that remains tinted with the same shade

    of blue as my living room had been. I catch a brief panoramic view

    of my new surroundings, before my vision begins to narrow,

    gradually returning to its standard function as I feel my body

    growing back to its complete form. The tingling sensation that has

    remained with me during the entire process is beginning to lessen,and as the blue tint around me begins to fade I can feel myself

    assuming my normal form once again. Just as quickly as the light

    had appeared, it disappears entirely and I know I have been

    revealed in my complete form, but this time in a completely

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    different location to that which I had disappeared.

    Although the process feels as though it takes several moments,

    it is in fact almost instantaneous, taking only a few seconds at

    most. I have always considered it a useful tool in battle, but have

    never really been provided an opportunity to test that theory out.

    The new surroundings I now find myself are not in fact new

    to me. In fact, I am very well aware of precisely where I stand.

    This is the place Zaniel and I frequent whenever we choose to

    train within Ageron. There are places back on Earth that we are

    able to train, but the use of our abilities is limited due to the

    presence of nearby Earthlies. The place I now stand is safely

    tucked within Ageron, away from any prospective humans, which

    is for their own safety as much as it is for our privacy and

    convenience.

    Earth is twice as large as the Earthly know it. An ancient,heavily enchanted barrier that stretches across half of the planet

    conceals the half that forms Ageron, leaving behind it the half that

    the Earthly have grown to know as Earth. At its outskirts, the

    barrier meets with several separate masses of land that, as a result

    of the many enchantments of the barrier, make it appear to the

    Earthly as though they have been merged together to form a singlemass of land. This single landmass is what the Earthly know as the

    United Kingdom.

    The Earthly are unable to see, hear and feel anything within

    Ageron. To them, its simply as though absolutely nothing exists

    where Ageron lies.

    The barrier is the only thing separating both worlds, allowingonly those who can envelish the freedom to pass through it, and

    leaving those who cannot trapped within its confines. Even if an

    Ageronian who cannot envelish is carried in a shared

    envelishment, whereby they are piggybacked with another who can

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    envelish, the barrier will force anybody who cannot envelish back

    into their physical form on contact with it, almost filtering them

    from passing through it as though knowing they cannot leave.

    Agerons protective barrier possesses a number of

    enchantments, each cast upon it so that Ageron remains oblivious

    to the Earthly. The most significant of these charms is that which

    conceals it from view of the Earthly. It also possesses other sensory

    incantations to make it feel as though nothing exists where Ageron

    lies. Should an Earthly walk into the barrier, which is something

    they quite frequently do, they will simply pass straight through it

    with no feeling at all, and end up on the opposite side of the

    barrier without ever having entered Ageron, almost as though

    theyd taken a giant leap over it without ever knowing they have

    left the ground.

    Its a good thing that Ageron is hidden from the Earthly.Although it appears remarkably similar to any other place on

    Earth, with the exception that it is far cleaner and more appealing

    than any other place Ive seen on Earth, the people that dwell

    within it are far different to the Earthly that dwell outside it.

    My surroundings look much like any other place Ive been,

    only neater and more inviting. I am standing in the centre of anenormous field, which is lined at three of its edges with thick,

    green forestry, and a line of houses across its fourth. Behind the

    row of houses looks exactly like any other neighbourhood on

    Earth, only there are no roads. There never really has been a need

    for them within Ageron.

    I now find myself standing directly beside Zaniel, who I haveonly just noticed out of the corner of my eye, on one of the

    farthest outskirts of Ageron. Immediately behind us, just beyond

    the forest that lines the rear of the field we now stand, is an

    enormous, almost transparently glowing light that forms the

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    barrier protecting our world, wavering gracefully as though being

    prompted by a gentle breeze.

    From within Ageron, the faint contents of the world beyond

    it can be seen through the barrier, almost like looking through a

    wall of glowing, golden mist. It is particularly funny when

    watching humans walk straight into the barrier, unaware of its

    being there. They disappear the moment they make contact with

    it, and reappear instantly on the opposite side, continuing as

    though nothing ever happened.

    So, are we going to do this, or are you just going to stand

    there like an absolute idiot? I hear Zaniel taunt, distracting me

    from my admiring trance of Agerons barrier.

    Although hes a year older than I, I am far more powerful

    than he, solely due to my being an Altor. That being said, he is a

    very worthy opponent, even if Im not able to use my power to itsfull potential when training with him. He knows it, too. Hes

    always hurling insults at me in hope that I might actually become

    more of a challenge for him, but I know very well that if that were

    to ever happen, it could lead to devastating results.

    On very few occasions, as much as I do regret them, I have

    lost my sense of better judgment and left Zaniel more bruised andbattered than I would have liked. On one occasion his relentless

    insults became so much of a distraction that I raised him a few

    metres from the ground using my telekinetic ability, and hurled

    him towards the nearest tree. It left him with three cracked ribs, a

    broken arm and a gash so deep even the most skilled of Sorcerers

    with healing abilities was unable to heal it entirely. Although hewas quick to ever forget it had ever happened in fact, he was so

    amazed by how much damage Id done to him he felt almost

    proud of me for having done it it took some time for me to

    forgive myself. His taunts have since been to no effect.

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    As is normal for any day of training, Zaniel makes the very

    first move. He extends his arm and raises a nearby rock as though

    being suspended by an invisible force.

    Watch yourself, he says with a grin.

    Within seconds, the generously sized rock is hurling directly

    towards me. With a single fluid movement, I raise both my hands,

    even though I could just as easily do it with one, and flick my

    wrists in the direction of the advancing rock. Mid-flight, the rock

    is redirected, sent soaring uninterruptedly towards a large boulder

    to my right, where it collides and crumbles to create several smaller

    rocks.

    Come on, I say as I stare at the rocks that now lay crushed

    beside the boulder. Youll have to do better than that!

    I turn back to face Zaniel, only then realising that he is

    speeding towards me at such speed, it appears the world is movingaround him. Before he comes within reach of me I jump in the air,

    throwing all of my weight forward and flipping midair,

    plummeting gently towards the ground once Id known Zaniel

    had passed by below.

    All Sorcerers possess great athletic and inter-combat abilities.

    Zaniel and I have developed ours to be able to jump several metresin the air. Paranormal athletic ability is something almost all

    Ageronians possess. Its the only ability that is shared amongst all

    of us, regardless of what species we belong to. Zaniels combat

    skills are highly developed. Even more so than mine. But knowing

    so is one of his greatest weaknesses; one of which I constantly use

    to my advantage.You have to be kidding me, I laugh.

    I notice myself sounding as smug as Zaniel normally sounds,

    but Im trying as hard as I can for him to think strategy, more so

    than rely solely on his strength. As I turn to face him, I cant help

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    but grin. Not in arrogance, but to show disbelief that he couldnt

    have seen that coming. To my surprise, he too shares a grin,

    although unlike mine, his is of overconfidence; one he shares all

    too frequently.

    Are you going to come and say it to my face, or are you

    going to stand all the way over there and hide like the girl we both

    know you really are, he says mockingly, to which I cant help but

    laugh.

    With a roll of my eyes, I race intrepidly towards him,

    charging at him like a stampeding bull. Just as I am within arms

    reach of him, he jumps swiftly into the air at a forty-five degree

    angle, almost parallel to the ground, where he spins rapidly several

    metres above the ground. He spins so fast he looks like a tornado,

    spinning rapidly at a peculiar angle, not knowing where to go.

    Having predicted he would somehow dodge my approach, Itoo jump in the air after him, grabbing him by his spinning ankles

    and throwing him to the ground. The very moment I motion to

    throw him to the ground, he grabs hold of my torso, and I am too

    late to stop. We are both sent crashing towards the ground,

    wishing we were able to fly, but knowing full well we are not.

    Mere seconds from impact with the ground, I raise my handsto my chest, and outstretch my hands so that my palms face the

    ground below me. Using my telekinesis, I create a force between

    the ground and myself that prevents me from colliding with it,

    and am stopped midair, suspended only by my telekinesis just

    centimetres from the ground. The moment I come to a complete

    stop, I throw my arm in Zaniels direction and do the same tohim, catching him mid-fall and only centimetres from colliding

    with the ground below. He is so close to the ground, his nose is

    actually touching the grass.

    He turns to face me, and smiles thankfully.

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    I think this is the part where you release me? he asks

    sarcastically.

    Taking advantage of my control over Zaniel, I release myself

    and allow my body to fall to the ground, colliding with it so gently

    it feels as though Ive landed on a mattress, all the while focusing

    on leaving Zaniel suspended helplessly in the air.

    Come on, he urges me. Thats not fair!

    Not fair? I ask rhetorically. This doesnt need to be fair.

    This is payback.

    Payback? What for?

    For charging at me when my back was turned, I answer.

    I can see him close his eyes as if regretting ever having done it,

    but then he produces a smile that I know means hes expecting a

    challenge; a challenge Im not willing to give him.

    I turn the palm controlling Zaniel towards me, and with abackward flick of my wrist, he is sent soaring across the ground,

    bouncing helplessly with every moment he collides with it. He is

    brought to a stop beside the boulder that had crumpled the rock

    Zaniel had thrown at me earlier, and he stands slowly, dusting

    himself off as he does.

    Barely able to see Zaniel due to the distance he stands awayfrom me, I instantly reduce myself to my bright glow, and vanish

    from my spot, reappearing instantly only a few metres in front of

    where Zaniel stands. I arrive to find him leaning arrogantly against

    the boulder with one leg resting on its side, his elbow resting on its

    edge and supporting the weight of his head as it lay on his hand.

    With a laugh, I race towards him, preparing myself for thehand-to-hand combat I am expecting to follow. Within seconds of

    having begun running, Zaniel pushes himself from the boulder

    and extends both hands in front of him, overturning them so his

    palms face upright. With a gentle flick upwards, I begin to feel the

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    ground below me shake violently, trembling at the request of

    Zaniel.

    In the midst of trembling, the soil and grass begin leaping

    violently from the ground, as though small explosions from below

    are forcing it up. Before I have time to react, partly due to my

    shock of witnessing Zaniels newly developed ability I had known

    nothing about, I am thrown forcefully into the air, forced up by

    the explosion underneath the ground below me.

    Without so much as another second passing, Zaniel appears

    midair, his arm raised above his head. With one sudden and fluid

    movement, he slams his elbow into my stomach, and I am sent

    falling to the ground once more, this time winded and unable to

    stop myself from falling.

    Plunging helplessly towards the ground, I can do nothing but

    watch as the sky above me distances itself from me. I can see theclouds above me, which are only just visible through the wavering

    barrier of light, getting smaller and smaller as I further myself from

    them. As I feel myself nearing the ground, I am stopped midair

    with a powerful jolt, and am lowered gently to the ground below

    me. My only thought is that Zaniel has stopped me from falling,

    knowing he has emerged as the winner for this training session,and not wanting to cause me any further harm. Or humiliation.

    As I lay, still winded, on the ground, staring blankly through

    the barrier at the sky above me, Zaniels face appears staring down

    at me. At first, it looks as though his head is hovering above me,

    but as I catch my breath I realise he is simply leaning over me, his

    outstretched hand gesturing for me to take it.Sorry, he says as he hoists me up.

    What was that? I ask enquiringly, confused at not having

    known of his latest power.

    My most recent ability, he responds, clearly impressed with

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    himself. It only arrived yesterday, but Ive already been able to

    control it.

    Abilities can often take weeks, or even months to master. I

    have been relatively lucky with mine. The longest it has ever taken

    for me to master a power was a week, and that was for

    envelishment, but I have never been able to control a power within

    a single day.

    Why didnt you tell me?

    I was going to, but I didnt think the timing was right, he

    says. Besides, I wanted to surprise you by kicking your butt.

    I offer a laugh, but it emerges as more of a cough than

    anything else.

    That you did!

    You dont need to tell me that, he responds with a smile

    wider than I have ever seen him produce.I cant help but laugh. Its not often that I am taken by

    surprise during training, but today has most certainly been an

    exception.

    I really am sorry, he offers, interrupting the short silence that

    had filled the space around us.

    Dont mention it. Youll get yours! I say.But, I dont understand? he asks mockingly, prompting a

    short-lived silence. How am I supposed to defend myself against a

    girl?

    I reach out to grab him and place him in a headlock, but

    before my arm reaches him he reduces himself to a ball of green

    light that vanishes instantly from in front of me.Just as I prepare myself to envelish and join him back home,

    the hairs on the back of my neck stand suddenly, and immediately

    I know I am about to have a premonition. My premonitions are

    far unlike those the rest of my kind experience. I do not really see

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    anything in my premonitions. Instead, I feel it. In some ways, it is

    more reliable than a vision. What can be seen may be easily

    changed, but what is sensed is far more reliable and unchangeable.

    Ive often found that those who have visions rely far too much on

    what they see. I guess its for this reason that my premonitions are

    more reliable.

    Opening my mind to my imminent premonition, I close my

    eyes and block out everything but the thoughts that now fill my

    mind. Instantly, I am overcome with a flood of sensations that are

    not my own. I have become somebody else, and am feeling his or

    her every thought. I am sensing their every feeling. Emotions of

    varying kind bombard my mind; fear, anxiety, relief, arrogance

    and finally triumph. Alone, they are nonsensical, and I know I

    must concentrate harder to make sense of it all.

    Determined to further understand its meaning, I concentrateharder than ever before, releasing any other thoughts from my

    mind and focusing on what sensations are to follow. The moment

    I empty my mind, I can sense far more than I had been presented

    before. I can sense a cold, dark atmosphere. An atmosphere filled

    with emptiness and despair, much like that I had experienced in

    my dream last night.Slowly, I can feel my thoughts beginning to fade, my senses

    becoming less and less with each progressive moment. Knowing

    my premonition has revealed very little detail of any sense at all, I

    use every ounce of mental strength I have to search for one final

    detail; one that might help make sense of everything. It takes a

    couple of moments, but I can feel my mind become as one withthe person in my premonition. I am now thinking what they are

    thinking. I am now feeling what they are feeling. I have become

    them entirely.

    It wont be long now, I hear their thoughts. They will be here

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    soon, and when they are, nothing will stop me. I will be freed, and

    once I am, I will take all that is rightfully mine. Nothing will stop

    me. Nothing.

    The thoughts leave me there.

    I am released from the premonition, and regain control over

    my thoughts. Immediately I know something is wrong; all is not

    well. I know a danger is looming, and it is my responsibility to do

    everything within my power to prevent it, whatever it may be,

    from ever happening.

    With that final thought, I reduce myself to my ball of blue

    light, and depart Ageron for home quicker than I ever have before.