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HISTORY AND ENGLISH POL
Robbie ButzeHistory P2English P112/11/12
The Immigration Story
Immigration Tenement Housing Nativism Working Conditions Social Reforms
Immigration
“Inside the building, there were rails, and many people inline.”
Tenement Housing
“Our living area is very small. Not enough room for my family.”
Nativism
“The owner discovered I was an immigrant. He looked at me and kicked me out of his factory. I fell into a small depression.”
Working Conditions
“Working conditions are dangerous. It is very easy to poke yourself, and start bleeding.”
Social Reforms
“One of the reforms I experienced was more Tentement Housing.”
Essay Structure
Funnel paragraph Topic Sentences Evidence introductions &
explanations
Funnel Paragraph
Intro paragraph that funnels down all the information.
Intro, Hook, Bridge Thesis
Topic Sentence
The sentence in the paragraph that describes what the paragraph is about
Evidence introductions & explanations
Start by introducing a sentence then a quote.
Walk-through/Essay Thesis
The one sentence that tell the reader what the whole story is about
Purpose of supporting paragraphs
To defend your thesis. Backing the thesis up with information in the paragraph.
Evidence to prove my argument
Quoted sentences are evidence from the story
reflection