Qiushi Experimental Middle School---Nina

Give suggestions on how to stay fit

Writing

1,What’s daddy pig’s problem?

2,What did he do to solve the problem?

1,What did he do to solve the problem?

He is too fat, he can’t even touch his toe.

1,What’s daddy pig’s problem?

It’s ________ for him to stay fit.important

Because he gave up easily.

3,Did he succeed? Why?

Exercise

MindHabit

Food how to stay fit

★Tips: when you are writing a composition,

try to think out some phrases first.

How to give suggestions

★Tips: Then you can put them into

sentences.

Sentence patterns

Write some suggestions on how to stay fit. (At least 5-6 sentences)

firstly, secondly, thirdly, fourthly/ finally, on (the)one hand,on the other

hand and, besides, what’s more…for example, such as…

because, so, so that, although…

★Tips: Use linking words and transition words to join your sentences together.

Beginning

Main part

Ending

Purpose,

Introduction （总起全文）

Conclusion （总结）

Elucidation

( 阐述，说明）

How to stay fit ?

Purpose and IntroductionBeginning

It’s ________ for sb. to do.

If…

Here are some suggestions

Ending Conclusion

In a word, Above all ( 总之）

There is a saying/As the saying goes:“…”

1. Where there is a will, there is a way.

2. Happiness lies first of all in health.

3. Health is better than wealth.

4. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

5. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。

幸福首先在于健康。

★Tips: Choose a saying for your composition.

Beginning

Main part

Ending

How to stay fit

It’s important for you to…

Here are… If

Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Fourthly/Finally

for example, such as

besides, what’s more

in a word, above allAs the saying goes…

because, so, in order to

Daddy pig:

Best wishes to you!Yours,

xxx

Handwriting ○excellent

○average

○weak

Structure

(3 parts)

Mistake

○ complete

○ not complete

○ no mistake

○ few mistakes

○many mistakes

Good sentence ○

Linking words ○○ Excellent ○ Average ○ Weak

Homework1.Exchange your composition with your

partner and try to evaluate the composition.

2. Write another composition like this one (two topics for you to choose)

How to learn English well?

How to protect the environment?

It's important for you to stay fit. Here are some suggestions that can help you.

There are many ways to stay fit. First of all, you should take some exercise every day, such as running and riding a bike. Secondly, you’d better eat more healthy food instead of junk food. Thirdly, don’t watch TV for too long, it’s bad for your health . Fourthly, try to keep a good state of mind.

In a word, it’s not so difficult to stay fit, if you put your heart into it. As the saying goes, “ where there is a will, there is a way.” I wish you to be healthy in the future.

It's important for you to stay fit.

There are many ways to stay fit.

In a word, it’s not so difficult to stay fit,

★Tips: Write a topic sentence for each part, and try to use some good sentences.

Here are some suggestions that can help you.

Try (not) to

Doing …is a good way to do…

smile as often as possible

spend some time with …

keep up a good state of mind

Don’t …

You’d better (not ) do…

get enough sleep

…or …

Doing …is a good way to do…

Why not /Why don’t you do…

Don’t give up easily.

It’s a good idea to do…

You’d better (not) do…

instead of

fried food

Evaluate ( 评价）

A good composition should be…be complete 内容完整be grammatical 无语法，拼写错误be formal 书写规范be fluent and graceful 语句流畅优美

1. In a word, it’s not so _________ to stay fit, if you put your heart into it.

2. In a word, if you _______________

______________, you can stay fit

In a word,…

1. If you are not healthy,

you ’ll ___________________.

2. If you want to stay fit, I’ll _______________________.

become ill easily

If…