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Prompt Attention Writing About Literature From Topic to Thesis Dr. Sue Gilmore Martin Luther King Magnet School Nashville, TN Barry Gilmore Lausanne Collegiate School Memphis, TN Brenda Robinette Lausanne Collegiate School Memphis, TN

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Prompt Attention Writing About Literature From Topic to Thesis

Dr. Sue GilmoreMartin Luther King Magnet SchoolNashville, TN

Barry GilmoreLausanne Collegiate SchoolMemphis, TN

Brenda RobinetteLausanne Collegiate SchoolMemphis, TN

Prompt Attention Writing About the Classics—in 40 Minutes

5 Ideas for Writing-on-Demand Essays about the Once and

Future Classics

orWhat I have learned from my

AP Seniors

Prompt Attention Writing About the Classics—in 40 Minutes

1. Responding to an on-demand prompt is a skill that develops

• 8th grade expository• 10th grade state assessments• AP social studies classes• Literary analysis

Prompt Attention Writing About the Classics—in 40 Minutes

2. It matters who is demanding:know your audience

• TCAP for grades 7-11• AP social studies exams• College applications essays• AP Language• AP Literature / IB exams

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3. They want some strategies that work.

DO:• Circle the tasks in the question• Plan before you write• Make your essay readable• Notice how the punctuation (or lack of it) helps

DON’T:• Underline the thesis• Use first person• Rely on stream of consciousness

Writing About the Classics—in 40 Minutes

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For example…

Writing About the Classics—in 40 Minutes

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4. Humor is hardest.

• Tone?• Theme?• Point of view?• Diction?• Detail?

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5. Favorite “once and future” classics

Special Topics in Calamity Physics

(Pessl)

Going After Cacciato(O’Brien)

God of Small Things

(Roy)

The Importance of Being Earnest

(Wilde)

Prompt Attention Copy That!—the Student-Created Prompt

Copy That!

Reducing Plagiarism and Increasing Engagement

Through Student-Created Prompts and Theses

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Showing engine-uity

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Getting off track

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Showing engine-uity

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Puck:If we shadows have offended, Think but this and all is mended,That you have but slumber'd hereWhile these visions did appear.And this weak and idle theme,No more yielding but a dream,Gentles, do not reprehend:If you pardon, we will mend.And, as I am an honest Puck,If we have unearned luckNow to 'scape the serpent's tongue,We will make amends ere long;Else the Puck a liar call:So, good night unto you all.Give me your hands, if we be friends,And Robin shall restore amends.

(A Midsummer Night’s Dream V.i.)

Copy That!—the Student-Created Prompt

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Puck:If we shadows have offended, Think but this and all is mended,That you have but slumber'd hereWhile these visions did appear.And this weak and idle theme,No more yielding but a dream,Gentles, do not reprehend:If you pardon, we will mend.And, as I am an honest Puck,If we have unearned luckNow to 'scape the serpent's tongue,We will make amends ere long;Else the Puck a liar call:So, good night unto you all.Give me your hands, if we be friends,And Robin shall restore amends.

(A Midsummer Night’s Dream V.i.)

Copy That!—the Student-Created Prompt

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Puck:If we shadows have offended, Think but this and all is mended,That you have but slumber'd hereWhile these visions did appear.And this weak and idle theme,No more yielding but a dream,Gentles, do not reprehend:If you pardon, we will mend.And, as I am an honest Puck,If we have unearned luckNow to 'scape the serpent's tongue,We will make amends ere long;Else the Puck a liar call:So, good night unto you all.Give me your hands, if we be friends,And Robin shall restore amends.

(A Midsummer Night’s Dream V.i.)

Copy That!—the Student-Created Prompt

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Sample student-generated questions (prompts)

• Does the play suggest it is okay to lie?• Why is it called a “dream?”• Why do both Theseus and Puck use the word “shadow”?• Why are some people “pardoned” in the play?• Why do only Puck and Bottom break the fourth wall?• Is Puck ultimately benevolent or malicious?

Copy That!—the Student-Created Prompt

Prompt Attention Copy That!—the Student-Created Prompt

A process for developing prompts(without the need to plagiarize)

• Create topics• Go back to the text—find examples• Discuss in pairs or groups• Write a thesis• Share and discuss (PINE)• Write an essay

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Sample student introduction

When Puck asks us to “pardon” him at the end of A Midsummer Night’s Dream, he points out the deep irony of the play: there is no justice in Shakespeare’s comedy, poetic, legal, or otherwise. We have no more power over Puck than the humans have over the fairies, their own fates, or love itself. Shakespeare’s world seems to include justice, but it can be seen that events in MSND are decided by power, not right and wrong.

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The process in more detail…

Copy That!—the Student-Created Prompt

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Prompt Attention Prompts for literary text pairings

And now, Brenda…