Personal-Reflective essay feedback (draft 1)

November 2013

Key

MD= go into more detail.STO= too much storytelling.DFT= describe your thoughts and feelings.ETF= explain your thoughts and feelings.

Remember!

Length must be between 650-1300 words.

You must separate your ideas using paragraphs.

You must use a good standard of English with a wide range of vocabulary.

You must use a high standard of spelling and punctuation.

Next steps

• Read the comments that you have been given; and

Read the marking grid.

• Identify which improvements you have to make.

• Have another look at exemplars.

• Redraft your first draft accordingly.

Black ink.12 pt.Times New RomanDouble Spaced.Justified.Title. Your name.Title of essay.Page numbers.Word count.Two drafts.

If any of this is not done, I will not accept your essay.

Your final draft must be handed in on:

Wednesday November 27th