The titles on screen match well

with the backing track as well as

the dialogue matching well with

the shots that I created. This was

due to good editing.

What went well...

There is a good use of a shot

reverse shot, this records the

conversation between the two

characters at the beginning of the

trailer remake. This establishes

the conversational relationship

between the pair.

The shots appear to be nicely put

together, with no jumps between

them. Good use of cross dissolve

techniques and slow motion.

Even better if...

The change of shot at 2:07 from

the man in the boat to the tiger in

the boat could have perhaps been

a zoom in- zoom out, or pan this

would not only have helped with

the movement of the camera

which was needed but would

make it appear less jumpy. A

more obvious cross dissolve too

may have been useful.

The shot of the purple starry sky

at 01:37 was not obviously

repeated. Perhaps the music

could have been cut or another

shot created or used even

lengthened using slow motion.

The shot at 01:37 was cut a little

earlier so we do not see the

persons hand pushing along the

boat towards the camera lense.