Many Japanese young people work part-time while they attend college (Let's) take a female (college) student for example. She works for a fast food shop .What made her decide to work there?If you asked her about her decision, she would say all she wants is (to) earn some money for herself.However, she doesn't need to work because her parents "pay for her college education"Attending college might be a good option(choicewhen you should choose something) for most students to spend thir pleasantest days in their lives(=each .

You should aim at expressing naturally in foreign languages when you write in it.Some writers prefer complex phrasing in their own languages all right, but non-native ones ought to use plain expression.

Mother's love towards their children is the most altruistic. Their unselfish love, however, does not necessarily fit their nurture of their children best.

At the airport in Paris, a man sat on his trunk, absent-minded, with his chin on his hand.{looking somewhere aimlessly.}I said to him, "What's the matter with you? Aren't you feeling well?/sick)Then he said to me, "Well, I've arrived here from far away(a distance). I'm with my body, leaving my heart behind. I'm just waiting for it."

Baseball is one of the national sports in America.Many American children grow (up), playing baseball on the fields in the neighborhood in their childhood."Covered in dirt( mud includes water), they learn how to get along with other people in their life, saying "Somebody has become a better player or somebody not."We can also say that they keep training themselves to accept humiliation, (when discouraged(/disgraced /humiliated), beaten by others.

"Congratulations on (your) winning the award. Could you please tell me why you wanted to become a film director?" Well, it is a little difficult to answer. I got a camera somebody bought me at the age of seven. That made me have an interest in movies. I think it was a start.{it started me having an interest in movies, I suppose.}My grandfather ran a movie theater. I think it was one of the factors that made me familiar with movies I felt in the air."

When a human being landed on the moon for the first time, quite(not) a few people thought that they had no dreams because science (advanced)was too far ahead for us to have a romantic dream.But no such dreams have ever been gone just because it has been proved that there exists no rabbits on the moon.{The existence of rabbits on the moon has been proved to be denied}Children, on the contrary, have had greater and greater imagination --- "What's the world of one sixth the gravity of the earth? "- "Can we play badminton there(/ on the moon)?"and the like(etc.)"

After living abroad, I feel that people are all the same. I surely feel that way when I have (personal)contact with (/get to know ) British people. So Japanese are the way they respond to sadness and joy and the way they put themselves in others' place. I find them so shy that I cannot make friends with them (too) easily. But once I do, we are able to touch each other's hearts.

I was deeply impressed by the book written by Kenichiro Mogi. The title is "can we live life beautiful( live a beautiful life)?"The main theme(subject -too logical) in the book was about keeping your heart beautiful.While I spent my monotonous, busy(/hectic) daily life, I stopped to think about my life, and this made me feel as if time stopped.

I didn't know why, but I tried thinking (about) how the world will(/would) change. Among serious problems in the world today is a food shortage caused by population explosion(growth/increase).Some people might think that(/it) doesn't concern them{Some people might think that(/it) doesn't concern them}. I know how they feel. I don't know what to do with this problem.{I feel at a loss when I face such a}