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    How to Write an Essay About an Event

    by Jared Lewis, Demand Media

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    A narrative essay takes the reader to an event and tells him why it matters.

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    should ideally convey the details o the event to the reader in such a waythat the reader eels as i he is actually e$periencin% it irsthand. #he essayhas to be more than 'ust descriptive thou%h so it is necessary to write a%ood balanced narrative essay that tells the story o the event and alsoprovides ade(uate analysis.

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    Introduce the event. A stron% introductory para%raph that introduces thereader to the sub'ect matter includes a descriptive account o someelement or aspect o the event itsel . /or instance i your essay is aboutyour e$perience at the "emocratic ational Convention you would want to(uickly pull the reader into the convention by describin% the bu33 o thecrowd the cool crisp ni%ht air o the stadium and the aint smell o popcorndescendin% downward throu%h the bleacher seats rom the concessionstand above. #he introduction should in orm the reader o the event bein%described and establish the authenticity o the e$perience and should do

    so in a subtle manner.

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    "ecide what the point o your essay is. A %ood narrative essay will attemptto persuade or teach rather than simply describe. Perhaps your %oal indescribin% your e$perience at the "emocratic Convention is to inspirereaders to en%a%e in political action or teach them the shortcomin%s o theprocess. 5our essay should then move %radually toward that action in sucha way that by the end o the narrative the readers will be ready to act orwill clearly see the shortcomin%s o party politics. #his should notnecessarily occur because o lo%ical discourse but because you havepainted such a vivid picture o the event and its meanin% that emotionalappeal is enou%h to achieve the desired result.

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    7se the irst person point o view. #his practice is o ten re%arded asunacceptable in essays but when it comes to describin% an event in anarrative essay it can sometimes be a more e ective tool or invitin% thereader to participate. I you are writin% the essay or a school assi%nmentyou should check with the teacher or pro essor to make sure this isacceptable.

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    Include analysis o the event as you tell the story. 9ne e ective way to dothis is to include your own train o thou%ht as you observe the events takin%place around you. "escribe how the events are impactin% you as youobserve them. A%ain all o the elements o %ood storytellin% are necessaryhere. Include si%hts sounds smells and the like in order to convey a

    irsthand e$perience.

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    Conclude your essay by reiteratin% your main point. A%ain this can bedone very subtly but that it up to your discretion. 5ou can be very bluntabout tellin% the readers to take action or you can simply appeal to theiremotions by paintin% an e ective picture. 5our writin% should invite thereaders into the essay and walk them step by step throu%h a narrative o

    the event itsel invitin% them to participate in such a manner that they willcome away rom the e$perience with the same emotions and thou%hts thatyou did.

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    How to Write an Event Essay about amemory, place or experienceWhat are Event essays?

    Event essays can be personal memories about something that happened in our lives, or they can be essays that explain some one-time or reoccurring event like a football game, a museumopening, a college celebration or a trip.

    What do I Need to Know about Writing Event Essays?

    Essays which explain an event can be either Explaining Essays or Personal Experience essays.You can use Essay Basics !rgani"ing Essay for help with structuring your essay, as well as theinformation below. #he most important thing to remember about when you are writing an essayabout an event is that you need to

    Describe the experience so that the reader experiences the event alongsideyou.

    Lots of descriptive details. You need to make sure the reader sees, hears,feels, smells and experiences the event vividly.

    Use either a chronological (in the order things happened) or topical (parts ofthe event) organi ation.

    4 Points to Remember about Event Essays:!. Organize around a con ict which is reso!ved in some way" "he con#ict

    can be internal or external. "he climax of the paper $ill be the revelation andresolution of the con#ict.

    %. #our $a$er shou!d be written c!imactica!!y . "hat means that in the bodyof the paper, the least important events are &rst and the most important arelast. "he paragraphs of your paper should actually re#ect this climacticdevelopment. "he longest part of the paper should be the main point.

    '. !ow down and describe moments very vivid!y so that anyone $ho isnot there can picture themselves being there and experiencing that moment$ith you. ho$ ho$ you feel rather than telling about it. hat $ere youthinking* doing* saying* that $ould sho$ ho$ you feel* hat details of thesetting or of other people could sho$ the emotion*

    +. %owever& don't s$end so much time or s$ace on the detai!s that you(orget to te!! the signi)cance o( the memory" "hat is the main point ofthe paper. t might be that you $ill $rite these details do$n as you are

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    thinking about the event, but you $ill need to cut them out later in order tofocus on the main action.

    Event Essay *o$icstri$ with (ami!y activity you did with a $arent accident

    relationship $ithgrandparent

    hobby illness

    memories about specialgift

    event $hich $ent $rong$hen you lost trust insomeone

    emotional eventevent $hich $ent better thanexpected

    sports memory

    $hen you $onsomething

    family reunionfriend $ho taught yousomething

    disappointment embarrassing moment fearful moment

    unexpected -oy special aunt or uncle sibling

    doing something $ithfamily

    something you $ished couldhappen again

    collecting something

    vacation place moment in nature animal

    something you learned something you lost or found ob-ect you treasure

    *i$s (or E+$ository Essays

    unset on Lake. transcending moment in your life. /xplain the process of yourthoughts and ho$ this led you to think or act di0erently. Use concrete images1glittering light on the $ater1 rather than 1beautiful sunset.1

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    4hinese doption Day. n experience $hen there $as a ma-or change in your life,like $hen adopted a daughter from 4hina.

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    4omputer Desk. place $hich has meaning for you, like my desk $here $rite.

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    Dad and 9ids playing piano. reoccuring event is one $hich happened over andover, like this one $ith my husband playing piano $ith our t$o little girls. "ell this invivid detail to make it memorable.

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    :ossil 7unting. one5time event, like this fossil trip $e took to a special fossil richarea. "ell this in chronological order $ith rich details. lo$ do$n the time and addconversation to make it more real to the reader.

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    :ather and Daughter on 6each. relationship2 explain not only $hat happened but$hat it meant to you.

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    ,hrono!ogica! Event Essay Oraganization and Esam$!e

    Chronological $essay illustration % &merican 'hildhood% by anne (illard.

    Best for a single moment of time with intense action, whether that is internal or external action or for an event which unfolds in time--like a museum visit.

    "ells story in the order it happened "ells story suspensefully

    /xplains the meaning after the climax, or lets events sho$ the meaning, oruses another memory or analogy to illustrate the meaning (in ; merican4hildhood< the author uses a football illustration to talk about thro$ingsno$balls at cars and also directly tells you the meaning in a fe$ provocativesentences2 1 got in trouble thro$ing sno$balls, and have seldom beenhappier since1 (8ar. %) and 1...you have to #ing yourself at $hat you=re doing,you have to point yourself, forget yourself, aim, dive...1 (8ar. !'), 1nothinghas re>uired so much of me...1 (par %!).

    ?ight include a frame introduction $hich gives background for the mainmemory and then end $ith a conclusion $hich summari es the meaning(football intro and description of the setting and characters in ; merican

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    4hildhooduirrel, mother=s reaction, his reaction,continued fascination)

    ?emories told in chronological order, but are also climactic55the mostimportant memory (shooting the s>uirrel and the aftermath) is longer and

    told in more detail. "ie these memories together $ith a main theme (po$er55ho$ the hunger for

    po$er has shaped himB his po$erlessness to change the past55the man can=thelp the boy)

    E+$ectations 0n(u!)!!ed Organization o( Event Essay

    Expectations Unfulfilled $illustrations from essay /00 1iles Per 2our by *ick Bragg

    &lso called Expectations *eversed, this is good for any event which had an unexpected outcome,whether better or worse than you expected. #his can also be done as %expectations fulfilled% butthat is generally a weaker way to use this method.

    et up $ith a clear and vivid description of the expectation of a particularevent (getting car $ill ful&ll every desire)

    ?ay foreshado$ the disaster

    Ceality of $hat happens (the unexpected event) is the body of the paper55vivid description of $hat really happens (accident)

    Ce#ection on experience and $hat it means in conclusion (sometimes $ithironic ending as it is in this story)

    0se 1rame 2tory (or Event Essay Organization

    Frame Story --use of conflict3resolution $illustrations from student essay ) 'alling 2ome by4ean Brandt

    5otice that this story is also organi"ed as expectations unfulfilled--you might use more than oneorgani"ing tool in an essay.

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    6eginning frame of expectations (car ride to the mall) "his essay usesdi0erent car rides to frame the opening and conclusion55in addition, there is acar ride in the middle as $ell55a transition to the second half)

    :irst con#ictBresolution (should she steal buttonByes)

    econd con#ictBresolution (external con#ict $ith manager55he catches her andcalls police)

    "hird con#ictBresolution (external con#ict $ith authority55police and parents55resolution is her reali ation of her $rong choice)

    /nding frameB expectations unful&lled again (car trip home55t$ist in thiscon#ict is that she is forgiven. t isn=t -ust the mall trip $hich had anunexpected resolution@ her expectations of $hat her parent=s $ill say and doare reversed as $ell).

    2am$!e Event Essay Read with Pictures

    %ow to use a 1rame in your Introduction and ,onc!usion

    6rames are an excellent way to help you organi"e your intro and conclusion and make yoursignificance clear. #hey are a way to automatically improve your essay and make theorgani"ation a bit more sophisticated.

    6rame intros and conclusions are a good way for students to easily show the significance of anevent. +hile %'alling 2ome% uses frames of car rides to provide structure to the present memory,a more common use of frames is to use a present-day memory as the starting point forintroducing a past memory $which will be the main part of the paper . 6or example, a studentwants to write about a memory of a fight with her sister when she is young. #his fight and thelecture by her mother afterwards leads her to reali"e how much she really loves her sister. #heconflict3resolution of the fight will be the body of her paper. #o put the memory in context andshow significance, she can use a conversation with her sister now as the opening and theconclusion. 7t works something like this

    Intro 2 4onversation $ith sister55maybe the start of a &ght. "ransitionsentence $ould be something like551 suddenly remembered...1 t could bethat the conversation ends and then she re#ects on it and remembers thepast.

    3ody 2 story of the &ght and con#ict resolution

    ,onc!usion 2 /ither come back to the conversation $ith her sister and decideto end the coming &ght because of remembering this past event, or youcould possibly decide to call her up again. s an alternative, this could be are#ection on the present relationship and ho$ the experience of $hat $aslearned about sisterhood in the &ght $hen young has made them close no$.

    #he frame can be used in lots of situations--it can also be a way of starting in the middle of theaction and getting the reader8s attention, then flashing back to what caused that action. 6orexample, in an accident paper, you can start at the moment of the accident and describe it vividly,

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    then go back in the body of the paper and tell what led up to the accident. #he conclusion iseasy--tell what happened afterwards and what it meant.

    Editing and Revising Event Essays

    &fter you have completed your rough draft, get a friend to help you Peer Edit your paper andthen use my *evising #ips for editing your final paper. You might want to check out my 9entence 9tarters list for help in making your sentences clearer and more connected. 7n addition,many students need help with the : 'omma *ules and writing Parallelism in lists. 7f you haveincluded conversation in your Event Essay, you should also look at how to ;se Punctuation in'onversation.

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