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Many1 countries all over the world have many methods2 to ban cigarettes and other

tobacco’s products; however, there are still many arguments that whether smoking should be

banned or not. Some people think that fume is personal authority3; however, in my opinion,

smoke4 must be made illegal as soon as possible.

Firstly, there are many reports 5of doctors or scientists about the bad6 effect of smoking. It

cause7 many serious illness8 such as lung cancer and heart disease. Fuming affects not only

smoker but also other people who are near them9. There are many description 10said that

passive smoke11 is more dangerous than active smoke, especially to children and pregnant

women.

Secondly, some man 12say that smoking can help them reduce stress and get over their

lonely13. However, they have never thought that fume may be disturb 14to another, especially

1 Repeat many 2 method

[C] a planned way of doing something, especially one that a lot of people know about and use traditional teaching methods I think we should try again using a different method. method of/for (doing) sth Today's methods of birth control make it possible for a couple to choose whether or not to have a child. effective methods for the storage and retrieval of information

[U] formal a well-organized and well-planned way of doing something There's no method in the way they do their accounts. 3 Check again 4 Smoke or smoking 5 Vary your structures, use so many structure: “ there are” 6 More academic 7 V-S agreement 8 Look at the word “many” ahead 9 More academic, use noun phrases 10 Plural nouns 11 Look at 4 12 Plural nouns 13 Check again

Hay thi- tuan 7- topic cigarette- 17-04-2014 | Huynh Le Quang De edited

in public places. Many cigarette companies and smoker claim that this is their right 15and it

must be respected. But, I think that social authority is more important. Because of public’s

right, many countries banned smoke in public places such as hospital, school, bus and

company. Moreover, many smokers think that the cost of treating diseases16 caused by

smoking will be paid by the government and community. 17

With many unfavorable influence 18to personal and community health, I totally agree that

anti-smoking is essential. Because that is not an easy fighting19, it requires the efforts of both

government and citizen. 20

14 What do you mean? Disturb or be disturb 15 Does it make sense? Check again 16 More academic 17 Good reduced relative clauses 18 Check again seriously 19 Fight or fighting 20 Not good conclusion