General Essay Format!

How Do I Write an Introduction?• First, you want to start by

introducing the topic in a general way (1-2 sentences).–Make sure to do this in a way that grabs

your reader’s attention!

How Do I Write an Introduction?

• Next, you want to start narrowing down your topic and getting more specific

(1-2 sentences).

How Do I Write an Introduction?• Then, you want to state your main

point about your topic. This is your THESIS STATEMENT! (1-2 sentences)

How Do I Write an Introduction?

• If you want, you can then: state the supporting points you will use to support your thesis statement.

Example of an Effective Introduction

Most readers look at a short story and think that only the most literal interpretation of its events is valid. In “Swaddling Clothes” by Yukio Mishima, students tend to think that the story is about the birth of a child in Japan in the 1960’s because of the references and descriptions. However, this story actually takes place a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away. This is made clear by Toshiko’s numerous references to light-sabers, The Empire, and X-Wing fighters.

What’s Next???

Body Paragraphs!

How Do I Write a Body Paragraph?

• Start with: a topic sentence that clearly states what that paragraph is going to be about.

How Do I Write a Body Paragraph?

• After your topic sentence, give plenty of:details and examples!– Examples from what you have observed “Most readers don’t see the connection between

‘Swaddling Clothes’ and ‘Star Wars’”– Examples from what you have read if you are

responding to a reading “Mishima clearly states that Toshiko’s husband was

a Jedi.”– Information from outside sources if you are doing

research“Time Magazine wrote that, “Swaddling Clothes is

obviously just ‘Star Wars’ in a different context.”

Am I Done Yet???

How Do I Write a Conclusion Paragraph?

• First: Remind the reader what the topic was. “Swaddling Clothes”• Then: Remind the reader what your position

is/what your thesis statement is. “Swaddling Clothes = Star Wars”• Conclude with: some new insight on the topic

or look to the future. “I hope the next “Star Wars” movie has Toshiko

in it.”