social media essay.docxby Lolita Muratova

Submission date: 17-Feb-2020 10:51AM (UTC-0500)Submission ID: 1258931267File name: social_media_essay.docx (22.81K)Word count: 1401Character count: 7739

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Format appropriately

provide full namesof authors

Format appropriately

Add citation toquotation

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gives them

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good but provide directquotes too

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makes

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Analyze further

quote

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excellentconclusion

Lolita, overall this is an excellent essay. However, work on providing more direct quotes from the articles.You engage nicely with the argument and display a strong understanding of the articles, but there shouldbe more direct material used. Work on including citations.

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FINAL GRADE

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social media essay.docxGRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

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Text Comment. v. good

Format appropriatelyUse referencing and formatting tools to suit the context of the task. Review the expectations for thisassignment to be sure that the format, citations, and references are properly presented.

Text Comment. provide full names of authors

Format appropriatelyUse referencing and formatting tools to suit the context of the task. Review the expectations for thisassignment to be sure that the format, citations, and references are properly presented.

Add citation to quotationThis quote does not give credit to the original author. When quoting a source, credit the originalauthor with an appropriate citation. Cite the author properly at the end of this quote.

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stay focused on teenagers

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Add citation to quotationThis quote does not give credit to the original author. When quoting a source, credit the originalauthor with an appropriate citation. Cite the author properly at the end of this quote.

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Text Comment. good but provide direct quotes too

Text Comment. v. good

Add citation to quotationThis quote does not give credit to the original author. When quoting a source, credit the originalauthor with an appropriate citation. Cite the author properly at the end of this quote.

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Text Comment. makes

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Text Comment. provide direct quotes

Analyze furtherThis section is not as strong as other parts of your analysis. Be sure to balance each example fromthe source(s) with a thorough analysis of how it supports your claim.

Text Comment. quote

Add citation to quotationThis quote does not give credit to the original author. When quoting a source, credit the originalauthor with an appropriate citation. Cite the author properly at the end of this quote.

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too informal

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Text Comment. excellent conclusion

Text Comment. Lolita, overall this is an excellent essay. However, work on providing more

direct quotes from the articles. You engage nicely with the argument and display a strongunderstanding of the articles, but there should be more direct material used. Work on includingcitations.

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