English ARC Work Sample Kim

Mid Stage 5 English – Persuasive Essay – Grade A

Engages with question demonstrating strong personal voice

Perceptively integrates knowledge of genre

English ARC Work Sample Kim

Applies knowledge of genre and film techniques

Attempts to sustain evaluative language

Relevant discussion with evaluation

English ARC Work Sample Kim

Grade Commentary

Kim demonstrates extensive understanding of genre and film techniques and shows a high level of competence in analysis. There is a strong sense of personal voice, and expression is fluent and appropriate to audience and purpose.

The persuasive essay is well structured demonstrating a strong personal analysis integrating judicious choice of textual evidence.

Kim’s response demonstrates characteristics typically produced by a student performing at a Grade A standard midway through Stage 5.