English ARC Work Sample Joe

Mid Stage 5 English – Persuasive Essay – Grade C

Conveys an understanding of Gothic genre

Describes and narrates. More analysis needed of film techniques

Lack of topic sentence

English ARC Work Sample Joe

Unconvincing attempt to persuade the reader through the listing of textual detail

Recognises the impact of the music but more detail needed about its effect

Grade Commentary

Joe’s response shows a sound understanding of genre and film techniques. It is highly descriptive with some understanding of how cinematic techniques can shape an audience’s response. A stronger structure and more sustained argument would enhance the response.

Joe’s response demonstrates characteristics typically produced by a student performing at a Grade C standard midway through Stage 5.