english 350/355 wednesday, february 26, 2014 melissa gunby
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English 350/355
Wednesday, February 26, 2014Melissa Gunby
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Quick Write
• Write a paragraph the contains instructions to build the best peanut butter and jelly sammich ever.
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Quick Review
• Independent Clause (IC) does what?• Dependent Clause (DC) does what?• Phrases are what?• Where can the subject of a sentence never
be?• What does every sentence have to be a
grammatically correct sentence?
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More Quick Review
• What is an easy way to test sentence for a fragment?
• What are the common fragment triggers?• How can you repair sentence fragments?
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RUN-ON SENTENCES
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Two Types of Run-On Sentences
• Run-on or fused sentences (RO)– A run-on or fused sentence happens when two
complete sentences are joined without appropriate punctuation• She went to the gym I had iced cream.
• Comma Splices (CS)– A comma splice occurs when two sentences are
joined with a comma instead of a period or semi-colon• She went to the gym, I had iced cream.
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Practice!
• Please do 24-1 (pp 456). Identify the sentences as RO or F, CS, or C (correct).
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Correcting Run-Ons
• The way you fix run-ons is the same way that you join ICs together to create compound sentences:– Add a period– Add a FANBOYS– Add a semi-colon– Add a transitional word with semi-colon
• You can also add a dependent word to create a compound sentence
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Practice!
• Please do 24-8 (pp465-466). We’ll review as a group.
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WRITING ASSIGNMENT: PROCESS PARAGRAPH
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Volunteer?Can I get someone to read their paragraph about making the best peanut butter and jelly sandwich?
While the volunteer reads, pretend to follow along.
How easy are the instructions to follow?
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Process Paragraph
• Think of an “art,” one you practice yourself—for example, the art of creating a perfect CD mix or using computer software to edit your photos. Write a set of instructions for this process.
• Explain the process of preparing a meal or dish that is traditional in your culture or in your family. You may need to start with a paragraph of background to help readers to understand what the preparation process means to you.
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A Few Guidelines
• 1. You should order your steps, but it should not just be a list.
• 2. Remember to use list words and addition words to guide the reader through the instructions.
• 3. You should not use “you” anywhere in your paragraph.
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Process Paragraph
• First Draft Due Weds 3/5• We will be adding an introduction and
conclusion to this paragraph after the first draft, but it won’t be a complete essay just yet
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Paragraph Review
• What does every paragraph have to have?
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Process Paragraph Topic Sentence
• Your topic sentence for your process paragraph should show how many steps you’ll be giving, as well as presenting the topic that you’ll be directing.
• For example: There are three simple things needed for a perfect cup of tea.– What’s the topic?– How many steps?