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Page 1: E10 sept15 2010

September 15, 2010

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HousekeepingTextbooks• please pay your deposit by Monday. Pay me before or

after class, or pay at the office. • If you are experiencing financial hardship, please talk to

me before or after class about having the fee reduced or waived.

Parking• School parking lot is for the elementary school teachers• 2 hour street parking in front and behind school• Pay parking at Safeway, Coast Plaza Hotel, and the West

End Community Centre

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Freewriting

What is freewriting?• Writing on a specific subject for 5 or 10 minutes

What is the purpose of freewriting?• To explore your thoughts and ideas on a topic before

writing.

How to Freewrite:• Write whatever comes into your head about the

subject. Keep writing even if you get stuck.• Don’t worry about errors in grammar, spelling, or

punctuation.• Focus on getting your thoughts on paper.

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FreewritingParagraph

Poem

Letter

Story

Freewriting

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Example, p. 19

• Let’s look at the first freewrite the writer of the “My Job in an Apple Plant” did.

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Title: Freewriting Your Name: ____________

Topic: No topic! Write whatever is on your mind for 5 minutes without stopping.

• If you run out of things to say, just write “I am looking for something to say” until the next idea comes.

• Don’t worry about making mistakes or the the way the ideas are arranged (this is “free” writing!).

• Keep your pen moving.

• Write until the time is up!

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Title: Freewriting Your Name: ____________

Topic: Autumn

• If you run out of things to say, just write “I am looking for something to say” until the next idea comes.

• Don’t worry about making mistakes or the the way the ideas are arranged (this is “free” writing!).

• Keep your pen moving.

• Write until the time is up!

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The Writing Process

• Most good writers do not write a composition in one try.

• Most writers use a writing process, a series of steps to move from their first ideas to a focused, well-supported, clear, and correct composition.

• There is not one “right way” for everyone.

• We will use the basic writing process in the text to improve our writing.

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The Writing Process

• Prewriting• Drafting• Revising• Editing

• Look at the back of the first page in the book: “The STEPS in the Writing Process.”

• For more information, see “Chapter 2 The Writing Process.”

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Prewriting, p. 19

• Today we’re going to focus on prewriting.

• We will study the other steps of the writing process (drafting, revising, and editing) as we work on paragraphs and essays.

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Pre-Writing, p. 18

• Freewriting• Questioning• Making a List (Brainstorming)• Clustering• Scratch Outline• Detailed Outline

• Talk to your neighbour or another classmate about which of these activities you have done before.

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Pre-Writing, p. 18

• Some of these help you generate ideas, some help you organize your ideas, and some do both.

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In-class Activity

• TOPIC: the best or worst vacation

• Do some prewriting on this topic. Use at least one (1) of the prewriting techniques we’ve just looked at.

• Do NOT write a paragraph!!

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10 minute break

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Substantive Assignment

• New students need to complete this assignment today.

• A few of you who did it last time just need to do a little more work.

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Introduction to Class Website

• Follow the instructions on the handout• Help each other

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Homework

Do the review work on the website:• Parts of Speech review• Sentence Type review

Please complete so you are prepared for Monday’s class (there could be a short quiz!).