March 1, 2010

Housekeeping

1. Hand in questions for “The Possibility of Evil.”

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Grammar Assessment Feedback• Handouts

– Marked Grammar Assessments

– List of Class Topics

• Topics not on list

– You should work independently on any topics not covered in class in which you did not get a perfect score.

• Newer students

– you are welcome to complete the grammar assessment outside of class time if you wish to know their strengths and weaknesses.

*Brief* Review of Sentence Structure

1. Simple Sentence = S + v (plus variations)• Independent Clause

Ex: The students shouted.

The students asked questions.

Teachers give homework to their students.

*Brief* Review of Sentence Structure

2. Compound Sentences = S + v, and s + v.

• Two or more independent clauses joined together with a coordinate conjunction.

Ex: The teacher finished the lesson on Thursday, so she gave a test on Friday.

I asked the teacher a question, but she didn’t know the answer.

*Brief* Review of Sentence Structure

3. Complex Sentences = S + v because s+ v.= Because s + v, s + v.

• Independent clause plus a dependent clause (any order)

Ex: The students stopped talking when the teacher entered the room.

When the teacher entered the room, the students stopped talking.

Fragments

A fragment is a word group that might look like a sentence, but is not because

• it lacks a subject or a verb, and

• it does not express a complete thought.

Ex: To cash his paycheque.

After I stopped drinking coffee.

Four Kinds of Fragments

1. Dependent Word Fragments

2. “-ing” and “to” Fragments

3. Added-detail Fragments

4. Missing-subject Fragments

Dependent Word Fragments

Certain words can make a group of words dependent:

• after, although, as, because, if, since, unless, what, when, which, who, etc.

(more on p. 19 of handout)

Dependent Word Fragments

Starting a sentence with these words can result in a fragment if you do not take care. Ex: After I stopped drinking coffee.

When I was young.During the class.If I were rich.

These are dependent clauses because they do not make sense all by themselves.

Dependent Word Fragments

To correct this type of fragment, join the dependent clause to an independent clause.

Ex: When I was young, I liked to ride my bike.If I were rich, I would buy a house.During the class, we should not talk.

Dependent Word Fragments

When correcting these types of fragments in your own writing you can

• try joining them with the sentence that comes before or after the fragment (p. 20)

• rewrite the sentence without the dependent word (p. 21)

Practice, p. 22

1. After I finished work on Friday, I went to Robson Square to skate.

. . . I went to play badminton with my friend.

. . . I joined my friends at Harrison Hot Springs.2. Because the class was cancelled, the students

left the building.. . . .I couldn’t give my homework to the teacher.. . . my brother and I drove to Whistler to go

skiing.

Practice, p. 22

3. When my car stalled on the highway, I called BCAA for assistance.

. . . I got so nervous.4. The supermarket that I went to was not open

until 10 a.m.. . . has a very nice bakery department.5. Before I left the house, I finished my work.. . . I locked the door.

“-ing” and “to” Fragments

When an “-ing” word or “to” phrase appears at the start of a word group, a fragment may result:

Ex: I spent all day in the employment office. Trying to find a job that suited me. The prospects were bleak.

Ex: To remind people of their selfishness. Otis leaves handwritten notes on cars that take up two parking spaces.

“-ing” and “to” Fragments

The easiest way to correct these types of fragments is to join them to another sentence.

“-ing” fragments can usually be joined to the sentence before or after it.

Ex: I spent all day in the employment office. Trying to find a job that suited me. The prospects were bleak.

Ex: I spent all day in the employment office trying to find a job that suited me. The prospects were bleak.

“-ing” and “to” Fragments

“To” fragments should be joined to the sentence that comes after it.

Ex: To remind people of their selfishness. Otis leaves handwritten notes on cars that take up two parking spaces.

Ex: To remind people of their selfishness, Otis leaves handwritten notes on cars that take up two parking spaces.

“-ing” and “to” Fragments

Another way to correct “-ing” fragments is add a subject and change the –ing word to the verb form that agrees with the new subject.

Ex: I spent all day in the employment office. Trying to find a job that suited me. The prospects were bleak.

Ex: I spent all day in the employment office. I was trying to find a job that suited me. The prospects were bleak.

Practice, p. 26

1. Glistening with dew, the gigantic . . . .The gigantic web . . . of the tree. It was glistening

with dew. The spider. . .The gigantic web . . . , glistening with dew.

2. Martha is pleased with . . . kitchen, claiming. . . Claiming . . . . , Martha is pleased . . . .Martha is pleased . . . . kitchen. She claims that . . .

Practice, p. 26

3.Removing the kinds he didn’t like, Ron picked through . . . . Ron picked through the box . . . chocolates. He removed. . . Ron picked through the box of chocolates, removing the kinds . . .

.

4. The grass I was walking on . . .squishy because I had. . .The grass I was walking on . . . squishy. The reason was that I had.

. . . [It was due to the fact that]Because I had hiked into a marsh, the grass I was walking on . . . 5. Steve drove quickly to the bank. He cashed his paycheck.bank to cash his paycheck. [Canadian spelling: paycheque].

Break

The Tell-Tale Heart

• What does the title suggest to you?• What does “Tell-Tale” mean?– revealing, giving a signal or clue

• We say “there was a tell-tale sign”• How might a heart be revealing?

The Tell-Tale Heart - Vocabulary

• *acute (adj.) – sharp, keen • death watches (n.) – small destructive beetles that live

in wood and make ticking sounds; they were once believed to be omens of death

• *derision (n.) – mockery, scorn

• dissemble (v.) – conceal one’s real motives or emotions by pretense; conceal the truth; cover up; deceive

The Tell-Tale Heart - Vocabulary• dissimulation (n.) - the act of dissembling – deceit,

pretense

• *Evil Eye (n.) - an old superstition based on the idea that harm or bad luck might be caused by someone looking at you in an odd way. – a type of curse

• gesticulations (n. pl.) – body language, gestures

• *reposed (v. past) – rested, lay

• sagacity (n.) – wisdom, sharpness or keenness of mind,

The Tell-Tale Heart - Vocabulary

• *stealthily (adv.) – secretly, [clandestinely ] quietly, carefully

• suavity (n.) – smooth politeness

• tattoo (n.) – drumming or beating

• *vehemently (adv.) – showing very strong feelings, especially anger; passionately, excitedly

Homework• Write sentences for the following vocabulary words from “The

Tell-Tale Heart.” – acute– derision– Evil Eye– reposed– stealthily– vehemently

• Make sure your sentences– use the correct form of the word, and – that they show the meaning of the word (as used in the story.– Due Wednesday, March 3rd.

• Re-read the story on your own. We will discuss it in more detail on Wednesday.