draft 3 part 4

Shot list Draft 1Shot Number

Shot Name Description Prop/Costume

1 Two Shot Lily and John sitting down in the cafe (having a date)

Cafe, smart clothes- jeans, polo, trainers, skirt, top, shoes, coffee

2 Over the Shoulder shot

John taking out the ring to propose to Lily

Ring in the box

3 Mid shot Nevaeh of her looking at John and Lily angrily

Black jacket, jeans, white top, boots, make up black lipstick

4 P.O.V Nevaeh’s POV of what she is seeing

Table, chairs, coffee, people, ring, clothes

5 Close up Opening of the box (ring) Box and ring

6 Mid shot Lily shocked and happy Make up

7 Close up Lily’s eyes crying of joy

Part L

Shot Number Shot Name Description Props/Costume

8 Extreme Close up

Him putting the ring in her finger

Ring

9 Long shot John and Nevaeh holding hands in park

Park, clothes- trousers, Hoody, trainers, jeans, jacket, hand bag

10 Mid shot Lily behind John and Nevaeh Tracksuit trousers, top, jacket, trainers, hair tied back

11 Close up Lily dialling the phone to call John

phone

12 Two shot (Mid shot)

Nevaeh and John Talking*Phone rings*

Clothes, phone

13 Extreme close up

Him declining the call phone

Part L

Shot list Draft 2Part L

Shot No.

Shot Name Description Prop/Costume

1 Long shot John is standing up waiting for Lily in the park (he stands up next to the bench)

John’s Semi formal clothes, park bench

2 Long shot Lily running towards John (camera is in front of her)

Lily’s semi-formal clothes

3 Mid shot Both John & Lily greet each other with a hug John and Lily’s semi-formal clothes and park bench

4 Two shot Both of them sitting down on the bench John and Lily’s semi-formal clothes

5 Over the shoulder shot & Reverse shot

Both of them started to talk, and he told her that her loves her and shows her his surprise for her

John and Lily’s semi-formal clothes

Resentful

Part L

6 Mid shot John taking out the ring out of his pocket John’s Semi formal clothes

7 Close up Him showing the ring John’s Semi formal clothes and ring

8 Mid shot John saying “Will you marry me?” to Lily while showing her the ring

John’s Semi formal clothes and ring

9 Close up Shows Lily’s face expressions of surprise, happy, and speechless – hand over mouth

Eye make up

10 Extreme Close up John putting on the ring to her finger Ring

11 Point of View Point of view of Lily following John John’s Non-formal outfit

12 Over the shoulder Lily is seeing both John and Nevaeh greeting each other

Lily, and John’s Non-formal outfit and Nevaeh’s outfit (all black)

13 Two shot John & Nevaeh are both in the park sitting down, talking and playing

John and Nevaeh’s Non-formal outfit

14 Close up Lily’s expression when she saw John and Nevaeh together (she doesn’t know who Nevaeh is) - Jealousy

No Make up

Shot List for Draft 2 of Opening SequencePart L

Quizzical

Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume

1 Mid Shot Mid shot of girl sitting down and looking through the Internet

Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring

2 Over the shoulder Girl in Facebook pictures, looking through them

Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring

3 Mid shot Girl looking very happy Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring

4 Point Of View Girl looking at a picture of her and boyfriend playing

Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket

5 Long shot Girl pushing her boyfriend and laughing pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacketTop

6 Long shot Girl running away from her boyfriend and he follows her

pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket, top

7 Mid shot Girl running pink hoody, jeans, shoes, top

8 Close up Boy’s hand reaching out of his girlfriend’s hand

Pink hoody and black jacket, top

9 Long shot boy got her arm after reaching out for her pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket, top

10 Mid shot Boy spinning around his girlfriendBoy: Got you!Girl: *Laugh*


Part L


11 Point of View Her clicking the next button to see the other picture of both of them holding hands while walking

Pink jumper, laptop, jeans

12 Long Shot Girl and boyfriend walking while the camera is filming them from the back

pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket

13 Long Shot Girl and boyfriend walking while the camera is filming across the road


14 Mid shot Girl clinging into him while camera will be in front of both of the characters while they walk


15 Point of View Her clicking the next button to see the picture of both of them close to each other and looking at each other’s eyes

Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, trousers, shoes, box, ring

16 Close up Female character looking very happy while looking at the picture


17 Close up Boy and girl looking at each other’s eyesJohn: Close your eyes.


18 Mid shot John taking out the box (with ring inside) while the girl is frozen with her eyes closed


19 Over the Shoulder + Reverse Shot

John opening the box in front of herJohn: Open your eyes



Ina saw the ring with a surprised faceIna: Really?



John will be smiling happilyJohn: Yes, will you marry me?



Ina will hug him as she accepted his proposalIna: Yes!


Part L


23 Close up Ina will be looking very happy while she’s recalling her memory


24 Point Of View Ina looking at the current picture while a chat box opensStranger: Hi.


25 Mid shot Female character looking confused of who the person isIna: Hi? Who is this?


26 Mid shot Ina thinking who this person is Pink jumper, laptop, jeans

27 Over the Shoulder Shot

Showing her thinking then the person on the other end of the chat repliedStranger: You don’t know me but I need to talk to you


28 Point of View She replied back to the strangerIna: Ok about what?


29 Point of View Stranger replied back to herStranger: Your boyfriend…

Shot List of Opening Sequence Draft 3 Part L

Quizzical Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume

1 Mid shot Ina sitting down and looking through the Internet Pink jumper, laptop, jeans

2 Point of View POV of Ina looking through Facebook pictures scrolling down to go to the newest picture


3 Close up Ina looking very happy and smiling Pink jumper, laptop, jeans

4 Point of View Ina looking at the 1st newest picture of her and her boyfriend playing about

Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket

5 Long shot Girl pushing the boy and laughing skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf

6 Long shot Girl running away while her boyfriend run after her skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf

7 Mid shot Girl running while the boy is running behind her [the camera will be in front]

skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf

8 Close up John’s hand reaching out for her hand skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf

9 Long shot John got her hand and pulling her skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf

10 Mid shot Boyfriend spinning her around and stops and said:John: Got you! (smiling)

skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf

Part LQuizzical Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume

11 Mid shot Ina smiling while looking at the screen Pink jumper, laptop, jeans

12 Point of View Ina looking at the 2nd newest picture of her and her boyfriend walking outside while camera will be at the back


13 Long shot Ina and her boyfriend walking outside while holding hands

pink hoody, jeans, shoes, grey hoody , top, scarf

14 Long shot Her boyfriend and her walking while the camera is across the road

pink hoody, jeans, shoes, grey hoody , top, scarf

15 Mid shot Ina and her boyfriend holding hands while walking pink hoody, jeans, shoes, grey hoody , top, scarf

16 Mid shot Ina looking at the screen Pink jumper, laptop, jeans

17 POV Ina looking at the picture of her and her boyfriend looking at each others eyes

Red and blue top, jeans, grey hoody

18 Full shot Both characters sitting down in the sofa looking at each other. John: close your eyes


19 Mid shot Boy taking out the box while her eyes are still closed Red and blue top, jeans, grey hoody

20 Over the shoulder John opening the box in front of her John: Open your eyes.


Part LQuizzical

Shot No. Shot Name Description Props/Costume

21 Extreme Close up Shot that shows the ring inside the box Ring and box

22 Close up Ina showing that she’s happy and have her hands over her mouthIna: Really?


23 Over the shoulder John smiling at herJohn: yes, will you marry me?


24 Over the shoulder She accepted his marriage proposal and hugs himIna: Yes!


25 Close up Ina looking very happy while recalling her memory


26 Mid shot Ina looking confused when she received a message from someone who she doesn’t know


27 Point of View Ina clicking the chat box to see the messageStranger: Hi

Pink jumper, laptop, jeanslaptop

28 Mid shot Ina looking confused Pink jumper, laptop, jeanslaptop

29 Point of View Girl trying to respond to the messageIna: Hi??


Quizzical

Shot No. Shot Name Description Props/Costume

30 Point of view Ina looking at the chat box when the person replied backStranger: I need to talk to you


31 Close up Girl looking so confused but wants to know who it was

Pink jumper, laptop, jeansLaptop

32 Point of view Girl typing her respond Pink jumper, laptop, jeansLaptop

33 Point of view The person replying back to Ina Stranger: You don’t need to know me, but I think you will be interested on what I’m going to tell you


34 Close up Ina looking interested but worried at the same time Pink jumper, laptop, jeanslaptop

35 Point of view Her typing down her respond to the personIna: Ok… What is it about?

Pink jumper, laptop, jeansLaptop

36 Point of view Girl looking down at the screen while the person replied to herStranger: Your boyfriend.


Script Draft 11. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY

Two shot, of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea.

2. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY

Over the shoulder shot, John taking out the ring to propose to Lily.

3. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW

Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and Lily angrily. Wearing a black jacket, jeans, white top, boots, and black lipstick.

4. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW

Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what she is seeing.


Close up shot, John’s hand opening the ring box

Part M


Mid-shot, Lily shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouth speechless.


Close up, Lily’s face crying as John propose to her.


Extreme Close up, John putting the ring on Lily’s finger.

9. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.

Long shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. John’s wearing gray trousers, red hoody, and trainers whilst Nevaeh wearing jeans, black jacket, and hand bag.


Mid-shot of Lily behind John and Nevaeh, wearing tracksuit, top, jacket, trainers, and hair tied back.

Part M


Close up shot, Lily dialling her phone to call John, she press the button hard as she cannot believe what she’s seeing.


Two shot and Mid shot, Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, the phone rings.


Extreme Close up shot, John’s hand and the phone. He declines the call.

BLACKOUT

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