Xheni

Sanel and Kaya

Feedback we received from our target audience

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Sayana

Sanel and Kaya

Feedback we received from our target audience

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Sanel and Kaya

Feedback we received from our target audience

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Sanel and Kaya

Feedback we received from our target audience

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Overall most of them do enjoy watching thriller films as they like the thought of being scared. Also they find it interesting to see what the spirits will do next to the character in while film. Also none of our audience thought that our opening sequence was complicated and they liked our theme concept. However some said that would like us to film in the dark.

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Characters How have you developed your characters since draft 1?

• We developed our character to be less dark and a lot more relatable to a wider range of our target audience

• We made the character one age rather than a variety so its less confusing

• The clown and doll have been developed into a spiritual characters who rather than look like the dolls to 2 girls with a doll and clown toys.

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Characters Kaya

Actor 1:Sanel Homer

Age:17

Character 1:Laura Hibbitt

Age:19

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Tired eyes

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Clothes that don’t stand out

CharactersInspirational pictures

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CharactersCostume and props

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Pale skin

Messy hair

Mascara

Tired eyes

Coloured top

Blush

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Blue jeans Brown cardigan

CharactersMise –en-scene

Kaya

Name – Laura Hibbit

Gender – Female

Age – 19

Costume – Brown cardigan, jeans, top

Props – None

Make-up – Mascara, tired eyes, blush

Stereotype – Normal smart girl, average

Facial expression – Scared, shock

Body language – Gentle, awkward

Representation – Typical teenage youth. A smart girl who’s abit popular around her area

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Actor 2:Gia Alveranga

Age:17

Character 2:Cilia Elizabeth Carter

Age:104

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Pale white face with black circles around eyes

Kaya

Plain white dress little girls used to wear

CharactersInspirational pictures

CharactersCostume and props

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£3.19- White

£1.99

CharactersMise –en-scene

Kaya

Name – Cilia Elizabeth Carter

Gender – Female

Age – 104

Costume – White dress

Props – None

Make-up – Pale black eyes

Stereotype – Little girl

Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling

Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face

Representation – A dead little girl from the 1800’s

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Characters Kaya

Actor 3:Rahel Fasil

Age:16

Character 3:Mary Elizabeth Carter

Age:105

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Pale white face with black circles around eyes

Kaya

Plain white dress little girls used to wear

CharactersInspirational pictures

CharactersCostume and props

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£3.19- White

£1.99

CharactersMise –en-scene

Kaya

Name – Mary Elizabeth Carter

Gender – Female

Age – 105

Costume – White dress

Props – None

Make-up – Pale black eyes

Stereotype – Little girl

Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling

Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face

Representation – A dead little girl from the 1800’s

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LocationKaya

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What is this location?This is where the whole opening sequence will be filmed

Is it always accessible?This location is always accessible as its one of the group members home and will always be open for filming

Health and safely.• Getting to bus to the house• Road safety when crossing roads• Walking to the house• Getting run over• Bus crash

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