Taking into consideration feedback from Facebook , Trumblr and class mates ( who are the target

market ) I have developed my advert .

Need to make text more readable

Using boxes to add colour behind looks good however still very flat and not eye popping and in keeping with the druggy look like I wanted

“Do like the use of bright colours, can this be enhanced”

Using rainbow effectAreas still unclear

“looks too much like gay pride logo therefore lose the grunge image”

“Again looks too topical and not cold and acidy like the image”

Text now stands out a lot more however I feel the intensity of the image is now lost and you don’t get the feeling of uber-reality which was achieved thought the high contrast colours of the face

I really like this effect as I feel it incises the grunge hardcore night out look

Font looks bold and still connotes the nightclub feel to the image