Introducing a New Product

Writing 2

DESCRIPTION of a PERSON

INDEX

1. BRAINSTORM2. PLAN3. WRITE4. REVISE

1. BRAINSTORM
Look for new words in the dictionary!

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE:Eyes: shape, colour...

Hair: lenght, colour, shape, style...

Build

Height

Weight

Skin

(...)

PERSONALITY:Positive aspects: generous, open-minded...

Negative aspects: impatient, moody...

2. PLAN

INTRODUCTION -paragraph 1- WHO / WHY

CORE -paragraphs 2, 3, 4- PHYSICAL APPEARANCE - PERSONALITY

Paragraph 2 (face)

Paragraph 3 (body)

Paragraph 4 (personality)

CONCLUSION -paragraph 5- OPINION IMPORTANCE

3. WRITE
Decide the main VERB TENSE of the composition.
Make a list of the LINKING WORDS for each paragraph.

INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH 1

Say who you are going to talk about.In this composition I am going to talk about my best friend...

Explain why you chose that person.I chose this person because he/she has been a very important person in my life...

3. WRITE

CORE (PARAGRAPHS 2, 3, 4)

Physical appearancePARAGRAPH 2: faceMy friend has a round face. She has got big bue eyes and thick lips.

PARAGRAPH 3: bodyNria is not very tall. She is about my height. In fact, I think she is more or less 1m 55 cm

Personality and interestsPARAGRAPH 4 (give examples).She loves music and theatre. She is a very intellectual person. She started playing the piano when she was a child.

3. WRITE

CONCLUSION (PARAGRAPH 5)Give your opinion: - give a balance of positive and negative aspects.All in all I can say Nuria is a very sensitive person and very generous. On the other hand, she is sometimes a bit impatient and doesn't listen to you for a long time.- explain why is that person important to you.Nevertheless, I really love her as a sister. In difficult times she has always been close to me.

4. REVISE

1. Grammar: Verb tenses.

Subject + Verb + Object2. Structure:

One idea per paragraph

Linking words3. Vocabulary:

Choice of words3. Spelling4. Presentation