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1) I have taken the image from my original third page and added it to the left hand side of my new page, I feel that this looks more effective and gives the reader a clear image of whom the story is about.

2) I added a Blue Drop Cap to the start of my story, I decided to do this because this will show the reader where the article begins, and also having it as a different colour to the text helps it stand out more.

3) I moved my introduction to the top left of the page in order to give my main text more room, and so it looks like more of a professional magazine.

4) I created a pencil style separator to separate my introduction from the main text, and to tie in my Pencil more with the piece.5) I made some of my text wrap around my main image in order to fill the page more and make it look more professional.6) I changed the colour of my quote text to a Grey style to link it in with the Pencil.7) Instead of having only one Polaroid image, I added another five to make my page look more interesting and more scrapbook

like.8) I added a zigzag style sketch next to the point of my pencil, to once again link the pencil more with the theme of the page.9) I moved the pencil from the left of the page to the right in order to create room for my main image, I also placed it on top of

my smaller image of Beth to five the impression that the pencil had just been left on top of the page.