errors in technical writing
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WELCOME
GROUP MEMBERS
• ZAIN ALI BUTT
– 2010-BT-MECH-14
• ALI RAZA
– 2010-BT-MECH-33
• NATIONAL FOOD INDUSTRIES
• SHEZAN INTERNATIONAL
• MURREE BREWERY
• MITCHELL'S FOODS
• UNILEVER INTERNATIONAL
HOME PAGE
• STYLE
– US English formal
• Use of words
– total 211
– Semi technical wording
• Sentence length
– 75% above 20 words
– 25% below 20 words
• Paragraph
– 3 paragraphs
– Font size 11pt
– Black font color with white background
• Content
– Mix
• Conciseness
– Highly shortness in last paragraph
• Passive words
• Confused words
• Complex words
• Extra use
• Errors
HISTORY
• Style – Us English , semi formal
• use of words– 177 words– Semi technical wordings
• Sentence length– 50% above 20 words– 50% below 20 words
• Paragraph
– 1 paragraphs
– Font size 11pt
– Font color black with white background and headings are red.
• Confused words
• Misused words
• Errors
• Language
– US English formal
• Use of words
– 255 words
– Technical words
• Sentence length
– 80 % above 20 words
– 20% below 20 words
• Paragraph
– 4 paragraphs
– 11pt font size
– Light brown font color with dark brown whiskey color back ground
• Content
– Truly written
• Conciseness
– Fully short and to the point
• EXTRA WORDS
• COMPLEX WORDS
• PASSIVE VERBS
• CONFUSED WORDS
• ERRORS
ABOUT US PAGE
• Style– US English, formal
• use of words– 170 words
– Semi technical wordings
• Sentence length– 50% above 20 words
– 50% below 20 words
• Paragraph– 3 paragraphs
– Font size 15pt
– Font color black with sky-blue background
DATA ANALIZATION
• Content
– Mix
• Conciseness
– Highly shortness in last paragraph
• Passive words used
• Misused words
• Complex words
• Informal
• Hidden verbs
Cont…
• Style – Us English , semi formal
• use of words– 599 words– Semi technical wordings
• Sentence length– 25% above 20 words– 75% below 20 words
• Paragraph– 6 paragraphs and bullet
style– Font size 11pt– Font color black with white
background and headings are blue.
• Content
– Mostly true but some where pleasures.
• Conciseness
– Semi concise
• Passive words used
• Misuse words
• Complex words
• Other Errors
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