4s4 slide- essay a robbery

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English SPM ESSAYWRITING.

About Q. 5 in SPM English itis narrative writing. Youare often required to writeessay in these 2 ways.

Write a story ending likethis:

1...They looked at each

other and smiledmeaningfully.(SPM 2011)

or

Write a storybe innin with:


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This type of story/narrativewriting is popular with candidatesas they can

memorize anystory and use them in writing.

However, if the narrative ismemorized work & writing is

really good compared to the 1stessay(Directed) then the essaymarks will be adjusted to reflectthe true/fair writing ability

Story must be INTERESTING andDescription vivid/ accurate

with details.


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incident Iever

experienced.

Many people haveexperienced all kinds ofscary incidents orsituations. I wish torelate the scariestincident I have ever

experienced.It all started one fine

afternoon when .. dadasked me .. go to the

bank to get .. money.

When I arrived, there were

only few people in...


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Every thing lookednormal and I could

not imagine even inmy wildest dreamwhat was to happen

next!

I quickly queued up at

a counter to carry outmy transaction andget home.

My dad expected me


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Scene: Robbers burst into bank

Soon the bank wasquite empty. It wasnear closing time so

Suddenly, there wasa commotion and aloud bang. Turningaround I was shockedto see


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Everyone lied faced down on floor

Get down on the floor

now.. Or I will blast yourhead off! screamed oneof the men who looked

like he was in charge. Very quickly, every one

obeyed ..

We were all terrified to

see a shotgun pointed.

I started to pray that ..


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oThen the leader walkedright up to the manager

and pointed the gun athis head!

He shouted Give me

all the money or youcan kiss your wifegoodbye.

Although I was lyingon the ground, I could

see that the situationwas very serious.

One of the man wasready to shoot at any

one who tried toescape or scream forhelp


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Put in all the moneyhere, now or

He sounded very nervousand we were sure he wasgoing to shoot

However while all this wasgoing on the police

already knew about ..A patrol car was on its way

to


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Within minutes, thepolice were outside thebank. We could see therobbers getting morenervous.

Come out with yourhands up! a voiceboomed from a policehailer.

The robbers were nowarguing and eventhreatened to kill us all if

..


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After a while, therobbers decided to

surrender because.

They did not want todie. We were all so.

Soon the policedkicked down the door

and ..

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