13e16 - unit 2 - text analysis

8/18/2019 13E16 - Unit 2 - Text Analysis

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TEXT ANALYSIS

Group 1: Tôn Nguyễn Quỳnh Anh

Trần Lưu Ly

Nguyễn Thu Nhàn

Trịnh Thị Quế


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Outline

I. Warm-up: Quiz

II. Text analysis

III. Wrap-up


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QUIZ RULES

4 groups Follow the requirement of each question

Follow the instruction of presenters


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Question 1

Why is it important to analyze the source

Translability of the text

→ Riht !hoi!e of translation "etho#s

! Spe!i$! transferen!e


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Question 2. Fill in the "lan#

% $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ represents the %writer's attitu(e to the su")ect matter.*

The intention of the text


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Question 3. Fill in the "lan#

There are 4 types of text+ which are $$$$ $$$$$$$$$$+ $$$$$$$$$$$+ an( $$$$$$$$$$$.

narrat

description discussiondialogue


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Question 4

,ame types of rea#ership

the expert

the e#u!ate# lay"an

the unifor"e#


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I(entify the leel of for"ality an( transla

“If you need a friend, jus e! "e# If you n

a good $augh, jus gi%e "e a &a$$# If you ne

"oney, I'" no &ona&a($e))*

→ Infor"al

Question 5


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%&hinese people'

Translate this phrase into 0ietnamese in asways as possi"le

1onsi(ering the settin of the translation: u($ished in children’s textbooks, +hi&h

+i$$ you &hoose-

Question 6


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What is the e"otional tone of the passa

“There "ay (e $eny of .sh in he sea, (u

i &o"es o daing, (irds of a feaher /o&0

ogeher#* 21,,3

→ (a!tual

Question


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If you want I will afternoon you

I wanna toilet #iss you

now (ie now

5ou ugly "ottle excee( go(

,o ta"le

%ugar sugar a hero man

Question !. Translate into 0ietnamese


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If you receie a #o!u"ent+ most of whichthose+ will you agree to translate it Why

→ The )uality of the text

Question !


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TE*T +,+L-SIS


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Text 1

6oly 7i"leExo#us 1: 1 ./


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ing 8ames0ersion

Truy9n ;han h<

Truy9n thBCn?D

Exo#us 1: 0.1: ,ow therearose up a new #ing oer Egypt+which #new not 8oseph. > n( hesai( unto his people+ 7ehol(+the people of the chil(ren ofIsrael are more an( mightierthan we: =D come on+ let us (ealwisely with themG lest theymultiply+ an( it come to pass+that+ when there falleth out anywar+ they )oin also unto ourenemies+ an( Hght against us+

an( so get them up out of the


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*u2t 3.#ip.t4

"Jy giK tLi nMc mPt ua mMi ln quen "iSt i


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N-(Cp-t< ,[y 6_ chMc #h?@

Wor( choice

tterance


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kea(ership: ;eople in ?=st centrury

%au BO cO mPt ua mMi ln ng


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therrea(erships

Experts:

Theologist

ne(ucat

1hil(re


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kea(ership

counts`


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Text 7

Syria nee#s ne8 !onstitution9 saysRussias ;utin


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kussian ;resi(ent 0la(imir ;utin sai( %yria neewor#ing on a new constitution as a Hrst step political solution to its ciil war+ though he ac#noprocess was li#ely to "e (icult.;utin+ who has thrown kussias support "ehin( %yri7ashar al-ssa( with air stri#es+ also sai( in an inthe erman newspaper 7il( that the crisis in relatiregional rials %au(i ra"ia an( Iran woul( comsearch for peace in %yria.

I "eliee its necessary to moe towar( constitut2in %yria3. Its a complicate( process+ of course. non the "asis of the new constitution+ 2%yria shoul(presi(ential an( parliamentary elections+ ;utin interiew which was con(ucte( on 8an. . v


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+nalysis

"ntention of the text

news report "ntention of the translator

news for 0ietnamese rea(ers %ame intention

Text t#pes

narratie an( (iscussion short an( straight-forwar $eadership

general+ e(ucate( pu"lic easy-to-un(erstan( langwithout )argons


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%t#listic scales

Formality: semi-formal enerality: e(ucate(

Emotional tone: factual

%etting

newspapers Qualit#

well-written an( authoritatie

→ ,o nee( owery language+ o")ectie tone+ no at

a((e(


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Text <

;k8E1T {E%1kI;TI, ;ro)ect implementation status {is"ursemen

{is"ursement ;lan Q II|?D=4:


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1#1#2# A&i%iy 23 4ui$ding &aa&iy of "unis of 5A67 and roje& ro%in&es on 8ua$iy of (iogas $ans on $i%eso&0 +ase "a

1;} has organize( a training wor#shop on liestoc# waste management technology for6ai ;hong from D? to D@|=?|?D=.

}oreoer+ 1;} has complete( the proorganize D4 training courses for proincial tec

participate in supporting technology of "uil"iogas plants an( D? (issermination training for senior sta~s of }k{ on liestomanagement an( low car"on agricultural technology+ it is suppose( to organize D

wor#shops in }ay an( 8un ?D=4


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"ntention of the text

keport the Hrst quarter pro)ect implementatio"y &ow 1ar"on griculture %upport ;ro)ect+ g;ro)ect }anagement 7oar( + }inistry of grickural {eelopment 2}k{3

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1#1#2# A&i%iy 234ui$ding &aa&iy of"anage"en unis of5A67 and roje& ro%in&es on"onioring 8ua$iy of(iogas $ans on

$i%eso&0 +ase"anage"en#

6oLt BPng ?: cKng nng l•

cVc B\n qudn7P ,, ‚ ;T,T tƒnh tham gia 9 giVm sVt

l„ng qudn l€trYnh #hC sinh hqudn l€ to]n (iAthdi chn nu


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1;} has organize( atraining wor#shop on

small-scale liestoc#waste managementtechnology for ;;}sin 6ai ;hong from D?

to D@|=?|?D=.

7an Qudn l€ Trung \ng B

6Pi ngh tc


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}oreoer+ 1;} hascomplete( the proce(ureto organize D4 training

courses for proincialtechnicians to participatein supporting technologyof "uil(ing small "iogasplants an( D?

(issermination trainingwor#shops for senior sta~sof }k{ on liestoc#waste management an(low car"on agricultural

,go ra+ • \ng B ho]n tBˆ t… chc D4huJn cho #‰ tcVc tƒnh tham g#‰ thut xXy sinh hbc quy mD? hPi thdo ttuyn truy9n ch

lnh BLo thuPcnghiAp ] ;T,Tl€ to]n (iAn chn nu


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"ntention of the translator

The text was originally written in English

Translate( into 0ietnamese ‹ what for

Text t#pe{escription

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$eadership&

ll 0ietnamese ocers wor#ing in the &ow caagriculture support pro)ect+ agriculture pro)ecmanagement "oar( + }inistry of agricultural a(eelopment

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%t#listic scalescial ‹ formal

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Text = +uthor:

&eah kae }iller Genre:

5oung (ult+ Teen+ 5

1ontemporary Release >ate:

}ay ?D=


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'ontext of the excerpt

=Œ-year-ol( }a(elyne %ummers Faourite comic "oo#: The :uer ;nes

&onging to "uy The :uer ;nes >

kunning into a guy in front of The ?hoeni! + "oo#store→ ?a@in a #eal 8ith hi" for buyin The

(nes )4**

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jWhat (o you want*


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jI gie you money+ you go in there*I shoe a thum"ehin( mejan( "uy me a copy of The :uer ;nes Žthe change an( He extra "uc#s. {eal* I stare at him of my sunglasses.

jWhy (on't you "uy it yourself*jI )ust can't+ o#ay %o+ (o we hae a (eal*

j}a#e it ten (ollars+ plus the change.* 6e crosses his ahaggling at a swap meet.

}y mouth (rops open. j7ut I (on't hae any more c

(ollars+ three (ollars for the "oo#+ leaing seen (o1ome on`*

j,othin' (oin'.* 6e sha#es his hea( an( wal#s away.

The "ell rings as he goes insi(e+ an( I op against thethe store. What a )er#`

jIt's o#ay * I say out lou( j%omeone else will "e "y an


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+nalysis

Text t#pe&

narratie ‚ (ialogue %t#listic scale&

informal


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Want to give it a try?

+nalysis

%etting&

forum 2compilation of translate( "oo#s3 $eadership&

0ietnamese netcitizens | people intereste("oo#s...

j1< mun gY*


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AR+;.U;

In ?D secon(s+ list Œ main factors of textanalysis


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/ fa!tors of text analysis

=. The intention of the text

?. The intention of the translator. Text types

4. kea(ership

. %tylistic scopes@. %etting

Œ. The quality of the source text


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