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Page 1: Writing Tip--Write Concisely

Tip 3WRITE CONCISELY

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EASY TRICK TO MAKE YOUR WRITING MORE CONCISE

Don’t use pronouns that have no noun referent (words such as “it” and “there” that don’t take the place of nouns)

Original: There is no reason for us to go.

Rewrite: We have no reason to go.

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USE THE “REAL” VERB

Changing verbs into nouns adds unnecessary words!

“Consider” versus “take into consideration”

“Tends” versus “tendency to”

“Pressured” rather than “under pressure”

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AVOID INTERPRETIVE WORDS

Words that can’t be (or aren’t) quantified

“small”

“large”

“very”

“relatively”

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WORDS WITH SIMPLER EQUIVALENTS

In order to = to

In the event that = if

Utilize = use

On the other hand = however

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TAKE AWAY Pronouns must take the

place of nouns

Use the real verb

Avoid interpretive words

Use simplest word or phrase possible

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