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Writing is Not CaughtWriting must be Taught –
Anita L. Archer, Ph.D. Alaska Staff Development Network
March 6, 2018
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Writing is Not CaughtWriting must be Taught –
February 15, 2018 One Sentence at a Time
March 6, 2018 Coherent Paragraphs
March 29, 2018 Powerful Essays
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Hochman, J. C. & Wexler, N. (2017) The writing revolution: a guide to advancing thinking through writing in all subjects and grades. Jossey‐Bass.
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Textbook for Webinar
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Archer, A. L., & Hughes, C.A. (2011). Explicit instruction: effective and efficient teaching. The New York: Guilford Press.
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Textbook Reference for Webinar
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Big Ideas of Explicit Instruction
Curriculum• Focus on critical content.
SentencesParagraphsEssays
• Break down complex skills and strategies into smaller instructional units
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Big Ideas of Explicit Instruction
Lesson Design• Design organized and focused lessons.
• Begin lesson with a clear statement of lesson’s goal and your expectations (Learning Intensions/Success Criteria).
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Big Ideas of Explicit Instruction
Lesson Design• Provide step‐by‐step demonstrations. I do it.
• Provide guided and supportive practice. We do it.
• I do it. We do it. You do it.
• Help students organize knowledge.
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Big Ideas of Explicit Instruction
Lesson Delivery• Require frequent responses.• Monitor student performance closely.• Provide immediate and affirmative corrective feedback.– Teacher feedback– Peer feedback– Self feedback
• Deliver the lesson at a brisk pace.
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Big Ideas of Explicit Instruction
Practice
• Provide distributed and cumulative practice. Distributed practice refers to multiple opportunities to practice a skill over time.
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Topics for Webinar
• Concept of a paragraph• Use of a “think sheet” for planning single paragraphs
• Creating powerful topic sentences and concluding sentences
• Planning a single paragraph • Drafting a single paragraph• Revising a single paragraph• Editing a single paragraph
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Concept of a Paragraph
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Concept of a Paragraph
1. Introduce the meaning of the concept.
Paragraph– Group of sentences– That includes details– Supporting a specific point
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Concept of a Paragraph2. Illustrate with examples.
Panama, a small country connecting Central America to South America, was another logical option for a canal. It is located a little farther south than Nicaragua. At its narrowest part, Panama is barely 50 miles wide. The Atlantic Ocean is on the eastern side of Panama, and the Pacific Ocean is on the western side. With a canal in Panama, the trip from New York to California would be about 8,000 miles shorter than sailing around South America. Travel time could be three months instead of eight months.
Is this a group of sentences?Do the sentences include details about a specific point? Is this a paragraph?
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Concept of a Paragraph3. Check understanding.
In 1879, France began to build a canal across Panama. This project was led by Ferdinand de Lesseps. He was the builder of the Suez Canal in Egypt. He was experienced, and the French government felt that he could get the job done.
Is this a group of sentences?Do the sentences include details about a specific point? Is this a paragraph?
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Concept of a Paragraph
3. Check understanding.
Unfortunately, problems began as soon as construction started.
Is this a group of sentences?Do the sentences include details about a specific point? Is this a paragraph?
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Characteristics of a Paragraph
Structure– Sequenced to ensure clarity for the reader
Coherence– Sentences are logically connected
Unity– Every sentence supports a main idea
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Types of ParagraphsOne type of paragraph at a time!
Informative– Explains or informs
Narrative– relates a process or event in chronological order– uses signal words (first, next, then, later)
Descriptive– describes something, drawing on 5 senses
Opinion or Argumentative– Opinion – attempts to change reader’s thinking, often
without evidence or opposing views– Argumentative – attempts to persuade using logic,
evidence, and reason
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Use of a “think sheet” for planning single paragraphs
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S.___________________________________________________________________________1. .........................................................................2. .........................................................................3. .........................................................................4. ..........................................................................C.S.___________________________________________________________________________
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Creating Powerful Topic Sentences and Concluding Sentences
Expanded from Chapter 4The Writing Revolution
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Topic Sentence (page 88)
A. Students can distinguish a topic sentence from supporting details.
Task: Select the topic sentence.
1. Gandhi attended law school in Great Britain.2. Gandhi was born in India.3. He practiced law in South Africa, another British territory,
for twenty years.4. Gandhi was a product of the British Empire.5. He lead a struggle for independence and civil rights in
India.
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Topic Sentence (page 89) B. When given a topic sentence, students
can generate supporting details.
Topic Sentence: Gandhi’s dedication to nonviolent protest did not begin in India, but rather in South Africa.
Student generated details‐ sat in first class seat on train until thrown off‐ refused to sit on dirty footboard of a stagecoach ‐ organized fellow Indians living in South Africa
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Topic Sentence B. When given a topic sentence, students
can generate supporting details.
Topic Sentence: The best time of year to visit Alaska isduring its short summer in June and July.
Student generated details‐‐‐‐
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Topic Sentence B. When given a topic sentence, students
can generate supporting details.
Topic Sentence: The best time of year to visit Alaska isduring their short summer in June and July. Feedback
Student generated details‐ high temperatures between 60° to 80°‐ long days ‐ 18 to 21 hours of sunshine‐midnight hikes
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Topic Sentence (page 90) C. When given a topic sentence, students can determine
matching supportive details.
Task: Select the supporting details that match the topic sentence. T. S. Professionally, Gandhi was an attorney. 1. ............................................................................................2. ............................................................................................3. ...........................................................................................4. ...........................................................................................
a. went to law school in Great Britainb. refused to get off trainc. was known for love of enemiesd. was unsuccessful in establishing a law practice in Indiae. was very shy in court during early daysf. used his legal knowledge throughout his lifeg. went to South Africa to practice law
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Topic Sentence (page 93)Students can use one of these strategies
to construct a topic sentence.
1. Use one of the sentence types (statement, question, exclamation)
T.S. Gandhi dedicated his life to nonviolent protest against Great Britain.T.S. Why is Mahatma Gandhi so well‐known seventy years after his assassination?
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Topic Sentence (page 93)Students can use one of these strategies
to construct a topic sentence
2. Include an appositive.
T.S. Gandhi, an iconic civil rights leader, lead nonviolent protests in South Africa and India.
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Topic Sentence (page 93)Students can use one of these strategies
to construct a topic sentence
3. Start with a subordinating conjunction.
before although aftersince if whilewhen unless even thoughwhenever
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Topic Sentence (page 93)Students can use one of these strategies
to construct a topic sentence
3. Start with a subordinating conjunction.
TS. While Gandhi is known for his nonviolent, civil rights actions in India, he is less well‐known for his work in South Africa.
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Topic Sentence (page 93)
e. Students can create a topic sentence when given supporting detail notes.
Task: Write a topic sentence that matches this set of supporting details. T.S.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1. organized citizens who disagreed with Great Britain’s rule..........2. wrote pamphlets and petitions.....................................................3. made speeches.............................................................................4. lead nonviolent actions against government agencies ...............
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Topic Sentence (page 93)e. Students can create a topic sentence when given supporting detail notes.
FeedbackStatement: As a civil rights leader in South Africa and India, Gandhi employed numerous non‐violent protest procedures.
Appositive: Mahatma Gandhi, the civil rights leader of India, believed that non‐violent actions should be used to gain human rights.
Subordinating Conjunction: Since Gandhi was an advocate for non‐violence, he adopted peaceful methods of protest.
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Topic Sentence (page 99)
F. Students can deconstruct a paragraph, creating a single‐paragraph outline.
Initially, the expansion of the British Empire in the 17th century was based on mercantilism, or trade. England did not have enough resources. It needed to look to other lands for raw materials, such as cotton and sugar. The empire began with the acquisition of lands on the eastern coast of North America and in the West Indies, a chain of islands stretching from Florida to South America. The English brought slaves from Africa to the West Indies to provide the labor for growing sugarcane. They also took slaves to the American colonies for growing cotton, rice, and tobacco. In return, England sold goods to the colonies, including clothing, dishes, food, metal tools, and other things that the colonists needed. Thus, trade was the compelling factor leading to the expansion of the British Empire across the continents.
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Guide Students.We do it.
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Topic SentenceF. Students can deconstruct a paragraph,
creating a single‐paragraph outline.
T.S. Initially, the expansion of the British Empire in the 17th century was based on mercantilism, or trade.
1. not have enough resources..............................................................................2. needed raw materials ‐ cotton and sugar. ......................................................3. east coast of N. America + West Indies ...................................................4. African slaves to W. Indies = labor sugarcane ...............................................5. Slaves to American colonies > cotton, rice & tobacco ................6. sold goods > colonies (clothing, dishes, food, tools) ..........................
C.S. Thus, trade was the compelling factor leading to the expansion of the British Empire.
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Planning a Single Paragraph
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Writing Process
Plan* Plan your writing.Draft Write your first draft.Revise* Change your writing to make it
better.Edit Check your spelling, capitals, and
punctuation.Publish Share your writing.
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S.___________________________________________________________________________1. .........................................................................2. .........................................................................3. .........................................................................4. ..........................................................................C.S.___________________________________________________________________________
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Planning (page 102)
Students can create a plan for writing a single coherent, well‐organized paragraph.
Steps for developing a single paragraph outline.(page 102 of The Writing Revolution)
1. Identify the topic, purpose, and audience.2. Brainstorm or relate details.3. Generate a complete topic sentence.4. Select, categorize, and sequence details.5. Write notes for the detail sentences on the dotted lines.6. Generate a complete concluding sentence.
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Planning
Learning Intention: Students can create a plan for writing a single coherent, well‐organized paragraph.
Success Criteria: Topic Sentence____ My topic sentence is clearly stated.____ My topic sentence is interesting.Supporting Details____ My supporting details support the topic.____ My supporting details are in the best sequence.Concluding Sentence____ My concluding sentence is clearly stated.
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Clear statement of goal
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Planning 1. Identify the topic, purpose, and
audience.
Prompt: How do penguins obtain food from the sea?
Topic: How penguins get food from seaAudience: Readers who know little about penguinsPurpose: To explain
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Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
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Planning2. Brainstorm or relate details.
• flightless birds• flippers to help them swim• live in the Southern Hemisphere• eat fish and other sea life• drink sea water• dive deep for fish• stay underwater for minutes• feed in groups• feed on krill and small shrimp• spend around half their time in water
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Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
Help students organize
knowledge.
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Planning3. Generate a complete topic sentence.
Use one of the sentence types (statement, question, exclamation)
Penguins are skilled “fishermen.”
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Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
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Planning3. Generate a complete topic sentence.
Include an appositive.
Penguins, the flightless birds of the Southern Hemisphere, live on fish and other creatures from the sea.
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Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
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Planning3. Generate a complete topic sentence.
3. Start with a subordinating conjunction. before although after wheneversince if whilewhen unless even though
Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen.
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Planning3. Generate a complete topic sentence.
Task: Which one is your favorite?
1. Penguins are skilled “fishermen.”
2. Penguins, the flightless birds of the Southern Hemisphere, live on fish and other creatures from the sea.
3. Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen.
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Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. 1. .......................................................................2. .......................................................................3. .......................................................................4. .......................................................................5. ......................................................................C.S.___________________________________________________________________________
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Planning 4. Select, categorize, and sequence
details.
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Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
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Planning 4. Select, categorize, and sequence
details.
• flightless birds• flippers to help them swim• live in the Southern Hemisphere• 1. eat fish and other sea life• drink sea water• 4. dive deep for fish• 5. stay underwater for minutes• 2. feed in groups• 3. feed on krill and small shrimp• spend around half their time in water 47
Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
Help students organize
knowledge.
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Planning5. Write notes for the detail sentences on
the dotted lines.
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Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. 1. eat fish/sea life...............................................2. feed in groups ...............................................3. eat krill & small shrimp..................................4. dive deep > fish...............................................5. stay underwater for minutes.........................C.S._________________________________________________________________________________
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Planning6. Generate a complete concluding
sentence.
Penguins rely on the creatures in the sea for their survival.
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. 1. eat fish/sea life...............................................2. feed in groups ...............................................3. eat krill & small shrimp..................................4. dive deep > fish...............................................5. stay underwater for minutes.........................C.S. Penguins rely on the creatures in the sea for their survival.
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Learning Intention and Success Criteria
Success Criteria: Topic Sentence
____ My topic sentence is clearly stated.____ My topic sentence is interesting.
Supporting Details____ My supporting details support the topic.____ My supporting details are in the best sequence.
Concluding Sentence____ My concluding sentence is clearly stated.
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Preparing for Writing Draft
Have students verbally retell the paragraph using the plan.
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. 1. eat fish/sea life...............................................2. feed in groups ...............................................3. eat krill & small shrimp..................................4. dive deep > fish...............................................5. stay underwater for minutes.........................C.S. Penguins rely on the creatures in the sea for their survival.
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Planning1. Identify the topic, purpose, and
audience.
Prompt: What makes penguins a unique bird species?
Topic: Audience:Purpose:
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Planning1. Identify the topic, purpose, and
audience.
FeedbackPrompt: What makes penguins a unique bird species?
Topic: Why are penguins uniqueAudience: Readers who do not know about penguinsPurpose: To explain
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Planning2. Brainstorm or relate details.
• flightless birds• flippers to help them swim• live in the Southern Hemisphere• eat fish and other sea life• drink sea water• dive deep for fish• stay underwater for minutes• feed in groups• feed on krill and small shrimp• spend around half their time in water
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Planning 3. Generate a complete topic sentence.
Use one of the sentence types (statement, question, exclamation)Task: Write a topic sentence using a question.
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Planning 3. Generate a complete topic sentence.
Use one of the sentence types (statement, question, exclamation)
Question ‐ Feedbacka. Why are we fascinated by penguins?b. Why are penguins unique within the world of birds?c. Why are penguins the most interesting type of bird?
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Why are penguins unique within the world of birds?1. .......................................................................2. .......................................................................3. .......................................................................4. .......................................................................C.S.___________________________________________________________________________
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Planning4. Select, categorize, and sequence
details.Task: Select (highlight or underline) attributes that make penguins unique. • flightless birds• flippers to help them swim• live in the Southern Hemisphere• eat fish and other sea life• drink sea water• dive deep for fish• stay underwater for minutes• feed in groups• feed on krill and small shrimp• spend around half their time in water 61
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Planning4. Select, categorize, and sequence
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Planning4. Select, categorize, and sequence
details.• flightless birds• 1flippers to help them swim• live in the Southern Hemisphere• eat fish and other sea life• 4 drink sea water• 3 dive deep for fish• stay underwater for minutes• feed in groups• feed on krill and small shrimp• 2 spend around half their time in water 63
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Planning 5. Write notes for the detail sentences
on the dotted lines.
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Why are penguins unique within the world of birds?1. no wings – only flippers for swimming..........2. ½ on land + ½ time in sea + no time in air......3. dive deep > underwater for minutes.............4. drink sea water5. C.S.____________________________________
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Planning6. Generate a complete concluding
sentence.
Concluding Sentence– Echoes the topic sentence BUT does not repeat it– May use words such as finally or in conclusion
Task: Complete this sentence. Even though penguins are birds, ...
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Planning6. Generate a complete concluding
sentence.
Task: Select your favorite concluding sentence.
1.Even though penguins are birds, they have very little in common with other birds.
2. Even though penguins are birds, they act very differently from fellow birds.
3. Even though penguins are birds, they are very different from other birds.
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Why are penguins unique within the world of birds?1. no wings – only flippers for swimming..........2. ½ on land + ½ time in sea + no time in air......3. dive deep > underwater for minutes.............4. drink sea waterC.S. Even though penguins are birds, they have very little in common with other birds.
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Planning Success Criteria
Topic Sentence____ My topic sentence is clearly stated.____ My topic sentence is interesting.
Supporting Details____ My supporting details support the topic.____ My supporting details are in the best sequence.
Concluding Sentence____ My concluding sentence is clearly stated.
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Preparing for Writing Draft
Have students verbally retell the paragraph using the plan.
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Drafting a single paragraph(translating a plan into a single paragraph)
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. 1. eat fish/sea life...............................................2. feed in groups ...............................................3. eat krill & small shrimp..................................4. dive deep > fish...............................................5. stay underwater for minutes.........................C.S. Penguins rely on the creatures in the sea for their survival.
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Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
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Drafting a single paragraph(translating a plan into a single paragraph)
Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen.
Step by Step Demonstration
I do it.
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Drafting a single paragraph(translating a plan into a single paragraph)
Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. Penguins fish in the ocean for fish and other sea life.
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Drafting a single paragraph(translating a plan into a single paragraph)
Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. Penguins fish in the ocean for fish and other sea life. They don’t fish alone, but in groups. Penguins eat krill and small shrimp found near the surface.
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Drafting a single paragraph(translating a plan into a single paragraph)
Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. Penguins fish in the ocean for fish and other sea life. They don’t fish alone, but in groups. Penguins eat krill and small shrimp found near the surface. However, penguins also have the ability to dive deep into the water and stay underwater for a number of minutes, allowing them to eat larger fish.
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Drafting a single paragraph(translating a plan into a single paragraph)
Even though Penguins can not fly, their flippers allow them to be skilled fishermen. Penguins fish in the ocean for fish and other sea life. They don’t fish alone, but in groups. Penguins eat krill and small shrimp found near the surface. However, penguins also have the ability to dive into the water and stay there for a number of minutes, allowing them to eat larger fish. Penguins rely on the creatures in the sea for their survival.
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Single‐Paragraph Outline p. 247
T.S. Why are penguins unique within the world of birds?1. no wings – only flippers for swimming..........2. ½ on land + ½ time in sea + no time in air......3. dive deep > underwater for minutes.............4. drink sea waterC.S. Even though penguins are birds, they have very little in common with other birds.
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Drafting a single paragraph(translating a plan into a single paragraph)
Feedback Why are penguins unique within the world of
birds? Unlike other birds, penguins do not have wings, only flippers that they use to move through the water. Penguins spend about half of their time in the water and the rest on land, but never in the air. Penguins can dive deep in the ocean water and even stay underwater for a number of minutes. Strangely enough, penguins can even drink ocean salt water. Even though penguins are birds, they have very little in common with other birds.
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Revising a single paragraph
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Writing Process
Plan* Plan your writing.Draft Write your first draft.Revise* Change your writing to make it
better.Edit Check your spelling, capitals, and
punctuation.Publish Share your writing.
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Revising and Editing
“Revising means clarifying or altering the content or structure of the draft.” p. 112
Editing “involves identifying and then correcting errors in grammar, punctuation, capitalization, syntax, and spelling.” p. 112
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Revising
Teach revising with unelaborated paragraphs.
‐ a bare – bones paragraph‐ with no sense of ownership
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Revising Improve
Topic SentenceConcluding SentenceSupporting Detail Sentences
HOW‐ Expand sentences‐ Combine sentences‐ Use
‐ transition words‐ appositives‐ subordinating conjunctions‐ vivid words ‐ varied vocabulary
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Guided Revision
Lyndon Baines Johnson was our 36thpresident. He served as Vice President until the assassination of John F. Kennedy. LBJ had served in the Congress. Under his leadership many laws were passed. While his administration made gains on creating the Great Society, his inability to bring peace in the Viet Nam conflict marred his presidency.
sentence.
Add an appositive to the topic
sentence.
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Guided Revision
Lyndon Baines Johnson, a long time Democratic politician from Texas, was our 36th president. He served as Vice President until the assassination of John F. Kennedy. LBJ had served in the Congress. Under his leadership many laws were passed. While his administration made gains on creating the Great Society, his inability to bring peace in the Viet Nam conflict marred his presidency.
sentence.
Add an appositive to the topic
sentence.
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Guided Revision
Lyndon Baines Johnson, a long time Democratic politician from Texas, was our 36th president. He served as Vice President until the assassination of John F. Kennedy. LBJ had served in the Congress. Under his leadership many laws were passed. While his administration made gains on creating The Great Society, his inability to bring peace in the Viet Nam conflict marred his presidency.
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when.
Expand the
second sentence answering when.
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Guided Revision
Lyndon Baines Johnson, a long time Democratic politician from Texas, was our 36th president. On November 22, 1963, the day John F. Kennedy was assassinated, Vice President Johnson was sworn in as the next President, a position that he held from 1963 to 1969. LBJ had served in the Congress. Under his leadership many laws were passed. While his administration made gains on creating The Great Society, his inability to bring peace in the Viet Nam conflict marred his presidency.
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when.
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second sentence answering when.
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Guided Revision
Lyndon Baines Johnson, a long time Democratic politician from Texas, was our 36th president. On November 22, 1963, the day John F. Kennedy was assassinated, Vice President Johnson was sworn in as the next President, a position that he held from 1963 to 1969. LBJ had served in the Congress. Under his leadership many laws were passed. While his administration made gains on creating The Great Society, his inability to bring peace in the Viet Nam conflict marred his presidency.
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Guided Revision
Lyndon Baines Johnson, a long time Democratic politician from Texas, was our 36th president. On November 22, 1963, the day John F. Kennedy was assassinated, Vice President Johnson was sworn in as the next President, a position that he held from 1963 to 1969. For most of his political career, LBJ had served in the US Congress, first in the House of Representatives and then as a leader in the US Senate. Under his leadership many laws were passed. While his administration made gains on creating The Great Society, his inability to bring peace in the Viet Nam conflict marred his presidency.
Expand the third sentence answering what.
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Guided Revision
Lyndon Baines Johnson, a long time Democratic politician from Texas, was our 36th president. On November 22, 1963, the day John F. Kennedy was assassinated, Vice President Johnson was sworn in as the next President, a position that he held from 1963 to 1969. For most of his political career, LBJ had served in the US Congress, first in the House of Representatives and then as a leader in the US Senate. Under his leadership many laws were passed. While his administration made gains on creating The Great Society, his inability to bring peace in the Viet Nam conflict marred his presidency.
Expand the fourth sentence answering what.
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Guided Revision
Lyndon Baines Johnson, a long time Democratic politician from Texas, was our 36th president. On November 22, 1963, the day John F. Kennedy was assassinated, Vice President Johnson was sworn in as the next President, a position that he held from 1963 to 1969. For most of his political career, LBJ had served in the US Congress, first in the House of Representatives and then as a leader in the US Senate. Under his leadership as President, extensive legislation was passed including the Voting Rights Act, the Civil Rights Act, Head Start, and Medicare. While his administration made gains on creating The Great Society, his inability to bring peace in the Viet Nam conflict marred his presidency.
Expand the fourth sentence answering what.
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Guided Revision of Alaska is an interesting state. It is the largest state in terms of land. It is most known for its vast outdoors. It has many mountains. It has glaciers and ice fields. The state of Alaska is often called “The Last Frontier”.
Sentence 1. Add an appositive. Use more vivid vocabulary.
Sentence 2. Add a subordinating conjunction.
Sentence 3. Expand.
Sentence 4. Expand.
Sentence 5. Expand
Sentence 6. Expand answering why.
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Guided Revision
Alaska, the 49th state in the Union since 1959, differs greatly from other states. While the population of Alaska is sparse, its immense land is twice the size of Texas. What draws visitors to Alaska is its vast wilderness. Grand mountains blanket Alaska including the highest peak in North America, Denali. It has more glaciers and ice fields than rest of the inhabited world. The State of Alaska is often called “The Last Frontier” for it still has unexplored land within its borders.
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SCORE Strategy Archer, A., Gleason, M., & Issacson, S. REWARDS Sentence Refinement
S= Sound good? (Does your paragraph sound good? Do your sentences sound good?)
C= Combine (Are there sentences that you should combine intoone sentence so that you would have a more complete and interesting sentence?)
O= Omit (Are there words or sentences that you should omit because they don’t go with the topic or addto quality of your paragraph?)
R= Replace (Are there overused words, less precise words, or grammatically incorrect words that should be replaced?)
E= Expand (Can you create more complete, interesting sentences by answering some of the following questions in your sentence: when, where, why, and how.)
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Editing a single paragraph
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Edit
EditCheck your spelling.Check your capitals.Check your punctuation.
Fix up your writing.
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Edit ‐ COPS Strategy
CapitalizationOverall AppearancePunctuationSpelling
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Capitalization: ______ First letter of a sentence______ First letter of a proper noun
people (Jason Martin)places (Sumner)holidays (Valentine’s Day)days (Monday)months (February)
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Edit ‐ COPS
Overall Appearance:
_____ LegibleLetters are carefully writtenLetters are written on the linesSpace between words and sentences
_____Neat overall appearance
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Edit ‐ COPS
Punctuation: ______ Punctuation at the end of each sentence• . Period at end of a telling sentence• ? Question mark at end of asking sentence• ! Exclamation mark if sentence shows excitement
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Edit ‐ COPSSpelling:______ Words spelled correctlyIf you think a word is misspelled, underline the wordand try to correct the spelling.
*Look and copy *Say the sounds and write the letters*Say the syllables and write the syllables*Ask someone how to spell the word*Look it up* Try another word
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Edit ‐ COPS
Capitalization: ______ First letter of a sentence______ First letter of a proper noun
people (Jason Martin)places (Sumner)holidays (Valentine’s Day)days (Monday)months (February)
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Edit ‐ COPS
Overall Appearance:
_____ LegibleLetters are carefully writtenLetters are written on the linesSpace between words and sentences
_____Neat overall appearance
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Edit ‐ COPS
Punctuation: ______ Punctuation at the end of each sentence• . Period at end of a telling sentence• ? Question mark at end of asking sentence• ! Exclamation mark if sentence shows excitement
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Edit ‐ COPSSpelling:______ Words spelled correctlyIf you think a word is misspelled, underline the wordand try to correct the spelling.
*Look and copy *Say the sounds and write the letters*Say the syllables and write the syllables*Ask someone how to spell the word*Look it up* Try another word
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Writing is Not CaughtWriting must be Taught –
February 15, 2018 One Sentence at a Time
March 6, 2018 Coherent Paragraphs
March 29, 2018 Powerful Essays
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