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<p>Writing Effective Essays</p> <p>Why Colleges Ask For Essays</p> <p>College admission committees read thousands of applications, and most of the content reduces the applicant to mere numbers: GPA, test scores, class rank, etc. Even extra curricular activities become impersonal and repetitive lists that dont really tell them who you are. As such, colleges that ask for essays are extending you an invitation an opportunity to let them get to know the real you. This is an invitation you should graciously accept and take very seriously.</p> <p>Essay Goals Demonstrate that youve mastered the English language. Prove that you can write clearly and well, as this is a strong indicator of college success. Personalize your application give the inside view of you. Ensure that the admission staff get to know you a bit by telling a story that only you could tell. Show something else about you and/or how you see yourself. Present a vivid portrait of you that will help you stand out and be unique. What will you contribute to the college? Reveal your preferences, your aspirations, your values and how you think. Show what is important to you, what has impacted you in other words, what makes you YOU.</p> <p>General Advice Research application deadlines and essay questions for your colleges early. Sometimes the colleges post their applications on line early so you can get a jump start. Give yourself plenty of time to develop your essay(s) weeks, not days. Read examples of successful college admission essays found in books or on the internet. Be mindful of essay length requirements and other specific instructions. Remember, the goal is to tell the admissions officers something about who you are through the essay. Dont try to do too much. Keep your focus narrow and personal be specific. Use your own voice. Dont try to say what you think they want to hear and dont try to be someone you arent. Be cautious if you are trying something risky poems, humor, gimmicks and taboo topics dont often work. Do the work yourself. Others can help by proofreading and critiquing.</p> <p>Two Types of Essays</p> <p>The Personal StatementThis is the general Tell us about yourself type of essay</p> <p>Specific Topic or PromptRespond to a quote or write about an individual, event, situation etc. Sometimes you are given choices, which makes it easier.</p> <p>The Four StepsWe believe that writing effective essays is a four step process and that each step is essential. Though you can use different words to describe them, the steps really boil down to the following:</p> <p>1.Brainstorming or Pre-Writing 2.Rough Drafting 3.Editing and Critiquing 4.Polishing</p> <p>The 4 Step Cycle</p> <p>4. POLISHING</p> <p>1. BRAINSTORMING</p> <p>3. EDITING</p> <p>2. DRAFTING</p> <p>Pre-Writing or Brainstorming Make a list of your strengths and positive personality or character traits not what youve done but what you are. Time this for 15 minutes if you wish that works for some, but is not required. You can use Post-It notes if you wish one idea or thought per note. Get input on your list from others who know you well. Next to each trait, list several things that youve done that illustrate that trait. Organize, sort and group your list(s). Look for threads or stories that tie your list together. Develop a theme if one hasnt already emerged.</p> <p>More General BrainstormingStill not satisfied? Try a different approach ask yourself these questions and jot down whatever comes to mind: What am I passionate about? What sets me apart from others? How do I view the world? What are my aspirations? What major life lesson(s) have I learned and how? From whom? How have I grown and from what experience(s)? Where or when have I made a difference? What were the circumstances? Did I overcome a hardship? (Dont just say what happened show how it felt and what it taught you.) Do I need to explain something about my academic record? (like a dip in grades) </p> <p>Brainstorming for a Specific Topic</p> <p> Read the quote or question MANY times. Jot down whatever comes to mind as you read it let your mind flow freely. Review your general brainstorming. Are there any ties to this specific quote or question? Can you tell a story or show the reader something about yourself while answering the question?</p> <p>TF r ll b t t v ry s rt typ f ss y, t</p> <p>r ftf ll win str ct r w rks w ll:</p> <p>L k t y r t m nd s c pl f s nt nc s s n intr d cti n t t r bs t r d r m k t m w nt t r d n. Try t st t r ll d t y r t m . C pt r t ir int r st. v l p s pp rtin p r r p s t t r w ll r niz d nd d v l p y r t m r s pp rt y r p ints. 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Showing appeals to all the senses and can make even a dry topic come to life. Related to the point above, dont stress the what but rather the how and why. Demonstrate what impact the person, event etc. had on you. How did you grow? How did you change? Be mindful if there is a strict word count have you checked? Make adjustments as needed.</p> <p>Polishing Your Essay Give it a break. Put the essay away for a few days and come back to it. Look it over again and make adjustments. Remove excess words that dont add value. Dont forget to be mindful of the length requirement. Most word processors have word count features (in Word, pull down the Tools menu, Word Count), which makes this easy. Dont worry about getting an exact word count match. Being over or under by a few words is not a problem. If they give a page length, assume they mean double spaced. Give it the So what? test. Read your essay as if you are an admissions officer trying to learn more about you. Would they finish your essay and say So what? Be sure you have shown that you will make a unique and valuable contribution to their school. Does the real YOU come through? If not, refine until it does. Ask someone you trust to read your essay, if you havent already, and determine if your intended message/theme comes across. Consider a parent, teacher, counselor or adult friend. Discuss improvements with them. Proof it again and again looking for spelling and grammar errors. Dont rely only on spell-checkers.</p> <p>Showing vs. TellingTelling (the bad) Last summer I was fortunate enough to go to Costa Rica on a community service project where we helped rescue the nearly extinct Lora Sea Turtles. However, the trip had some unexpected results, for the late night hiking caused me to get horrible blisters all over my feet. Showing (the good) The pain was excruciating and I could barely walk. Mosquitoes found their way in, penetrating the netting surrounding my thin mattress. The air was motionless, exaggerating the oppressive heat and humidity in our open-air shack. As I watched the sun go down, I knew it would soon be time to make a decision about my last night in Costa Rica. See the difference? Which one grabs you? Which one evokes feelings or sensations?</p> <p>Dos and Donts - DO Allow weeks, not days, to work on your essay. Find a topic that is not too broad and narrow it further. Show, dont tell. Use specific examples such as how you felt, how you changed, etc. Provide the evidence for your point or thesis. Avoid unsupported generalizations and clichs. Focus on yourself make sure you dont inadvertently talk about another person, group or place too much. Be sure its all about YOU. Have a strong first sentence or paragraph. Whether you write it first or last, just be sure the first part of your essay grabs attention. Its the hook. Follow all the instructions. Answer the question, if applicable. Be accurate. Write in your voice, your style. The essay needs to sound comfortable. Watch spelling, grammar and punctuation. Dont rely only on spell checker. Take the essay seriously - the admissions committee will.</p> <p>Dos and Donts DONT Dont be intimidated by the task just start. Thats the hardest part. Dont repeat information that is elsewhere on the application. Dont pick trite or risky topics unless you are very sure you can pull them off. Similarly, avoid topics that are too big for a 500 word essay, such as death, world hunger, peace, etc. Dont use excess words be concise and succinct. Remember - sharp, focused detail. Dont use big, impressive words straight from your word processors online synonym or thesaurus function. Doing so destroys your own, individual voice. Dont use videos, poems or other gimmicks. Even humor is risky. Dont create a McEssay like fast food, its predictable and often boring. Dont have someone else do your essay. It will show.</p> <p>A Note about Ethics</p> <p>This wouldnt be complete without our saying something about honesty in the essay process. It is just as important here as in the rest of your application. Remember, the essay is intended to be a reflection of who you are. Purchasing an essay on line or having someone else write it for you certainly makes a statement about you but is it the one you want to make? Like any other form of cheating, it will generally be discovered and is never worth the price. Some colleges ask you to sign a statement indicating that the work is yours. But whether they do or not doesnt really matter. Do your own work and dont make things up. Its about doing the right thing.</p> <p>You Can Do It!We hope that the suggestions contained in this presentation will prove to be helpful to you. Believe it or not, the hardest part is just getting started. So go on, you CAN do it. Best of luck with your college essays!</p>