writing an effective thesis
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Elements of a Thesis
Thesis: A statement that presents the main claim that your are working to prove.
Strong Thesis Statements are… Clearly Stated Focused & Narrow Debatable Supported by Evidence
Clearly Stated
Generally, your thesis is the last sentence of the introduction paragraph.
Your thesis should directly answer the prompt or questions your are trying to answer.
Question: Is America’s Capitalistic system good for the nation?
Focused & Narrow
Your thesis must be focused on not just your topic, but what you hope to prove about your topic.
Unfocused: Capitalism is the best economic system.
Focused & Narrow: As recent developments in technology have shown, capitalism strengthens the United States’ economy by creating an environment which fosters innovation.
Debatable
Your thesis must be debatable…someone should be able to disagree with your statement.
Not Debatable: Capitalism in America has both strengths and limitations.
Debatable: The limitations of capitalism are shown by the United States’ inability to dramatically slow down carbon emissions.
Supported by Evidence
You must have evidence that supports your claim. Use a variety of types of evidence (Ethos,
Logos, Pathos) Topic sentences must relate to your thesis
statement. Include a counterclaim paragraph (see
counterclaim PowerPoint)
Four Types of Claims Claims of Facts or Definitions.
Claims of cause & effect.
Claims of value.
Claims about solutions or policies.
Claims of Facts or Definitions
Claims that argue what something means or if it is a fact.
Example: A free market economy allows for
individuals the freedom from government regulation to run their businesses as they see fit.
Claims of Cause & Effect.
Claims that argue that two things are related.
Example: The lack of government regulations
placed on automobile emissions has led to an environmental disaster in the United States.
Claims of Value.
Claims that argue the worth that we place on something.
Example: While capitalism allows for individual
liberties, it creates an unfair and costly system of inequity in our society.
Claims about Solutions or Policies.
Claims that argue what steps should be taken to solve a problem.
Example: The government must create laws
requiring all automobiles to increase fuel efficiency to at least 40 mpg by 2020.