view v ocabulary i nstruction and e diting w ork english ii pre-ap english ii eoc english ii
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HOW THIS WORKS... You will use your journals for these daily activities. Instructions are in blue. What you need to write is in
red. At the beginning of class every day, write the date and
draw a rectangle split into four sections, then label them like this:
For your editing sentence, write the sentence EXACTLY as it appears on the board, then complete the instructions given for that sentence.
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym/Definition
HOW THESE ARE GRADED...
I will NOT be taking a grade on all of your notes.
I will, however, not be satisfied with you opting not to do these exercises.
Every Friday, you will have a VIEW Quiz. On these quizzes, you will be asked to work with these vocabulary words and apply the editing skills we’ve learned for the week. The grades on these quizzes will be averaged for one major test grade every six weeks.
HOW THIS CAN HELP YOU...
Every time that you correctly use one our VIEW words in class, either in speech or in writing (outside of daily VIEWs), you will be given a ticket.
You may redeem these tickets for classroom incentives: 20 tickets = 1 extra bathroom pass 30 tickets = 1 extra Catastrophe Pass 40 tickets = +2 on major grade of your choice 50 tickets = +5 on major grade of your choice
You may also earn tickets for finding VIEW words in editorials and other scholarly articles.
It is your responsibility to keep up with these tickets, and you may redeem them at any time before school, after school, or during tutoring.
TUESDAY, AUGUST 26Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
aloof
detached, unfriendly
warm, friendly
Use 10+ words
Double-underline the two independent clauses in this sentence:
I am going to the store, but I will not be able to go before 6:00 today.
**When you finish today’s assignment, download the “Socrative Student” app on your phone, and sign in to your class’s Remind program
WEDNESDAY, AUGUST 27Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
didactic
educational, informative
Use 10+ words
Double-underline the two independent clauses in this sentence:
Rachael wanted to watch “Blended,” but Sarah wanted to watch “22 Jump Street.”
to give instruction or advice, even when it is not welcome or not needed
THURSDAY, AUGUST 28Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
choleric
“short fuse,” grumpy
Use 10+ words
Double-underline the two independent clauses in this sentence AND circle the conjunction that connects them:
Sarah hated waking up early, but Rachael enjoyed watching the sun rise each morning.
to be easily angered
FRIDAY, AUGUST 29Vocabulary
Editing
Write your own compound sentence. Please remember that you must include:1.2 independent clauses (a subject and a verb)2.1 conjunction to connect them
Create 2 sentences that correctly use the three vocabulary words we’ve learned this week:aloof didactic choleric
Example:The aloof student sat sulking in the corner of Mrs. Arellano’s room all by himself. If he had to listen to five more minutes of her didactic, uppity ramblings, his choleric demeanor would soon get him in trouble.
Write these sentences on the BACK of your purple VIEWs handout from this week
MONDAY, SEPTEMBER 1Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
exuberant
cheerful, enthusiastic
Use 10+ words
Double-underline the one independent clause in the sentence below:
Although she didn’t enjoy it, Sarah got up early to help her mom make breakfast.
gloomy, pessimistic
TUESDAY, SEPTEMBER 2Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
disdainful
scornful, contemptuous,disrespectful
Use 10+ words
Double-underline the independent clause and circle the subordinate clause in the sentence below:
While I was at the store, Rachael started cooking supper for me.
respectful, courteous
WEDNESDAY, SEPTEMBER 3Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
insipid
dull, bland
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Double-underline the independent clause and circle the subordinate clause in the sentence below:
Experts in the art of coercion, Rachael and Sarah always get whatever they want.
vibrant, lively
THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 4Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
jingoistic
patriotic, chauvinistic
Use 10+ words
Based on your understanding of complex sentences, please punctuate the sentence below:
For future reference I don’t particularly enjoy seafood.
patriotism shown through hostility toward other countries
Prepare to be tested over the words below:
exuberant (extremely joyful or happy)
disdainful insipid jingoistic
aloof didactic choleric
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 5
Vocabulary
MONDAY, SEPTEMBER 8Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
flippant
frivolous, superficial
Use 12+ words
Based on your understanding of complex and compound sentences, please punctuate the sentence below:
Rachael is an excellent cook but she does not enjoy cooking breakfast food.
showing a lack of seriousness that is considered inappropriate
TUESDAY, SEPTEMBER 9Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
genteel
courteous, well-mannered, refined, proper
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Based on your understanding of complex and compound sentences, please punctuate the sentence below:
Although Sarah went to culinary school she still has a lot to learn about cooking.
savage, rude, vulgar
WEDNESDAY, SEPTEMBER 10Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
grotesque
ugly, gross, monstrous, misshapen
Use 12+ words
Based on your understanding of complex and compound sentences, please punctuate the sentence below:
Rachael makes pizzas and sandwiches at Simple Simon’s.
beautiful, stunning, magnificent
THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 11Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
haughty
prideful, arrogant, conceited
Use 12+ words
Based on your understanding of complex and compound sentences, please punctuate the sentence below:
Heroes of 9/11 may be gone but they will never be forgotten.
humble, gracious
Prepare to be tested over the words below:
flippant genteel grotesque haughty
You may also be tested over the words below:aloof didactic choleric
exuberant disdainful insipid jingoistic
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 12Vocabulary
MONDAY, SEPTEMBER 15Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
cynical
pessimistic, mocking, suspicious
Use 12+ words
Underline the items in a series in the sentence below:
Sarah needed flour, salt, shortening, and sugar to make biscuits.Why isn’t this sentence considered a complex or compound sentence?
positive, optimistic, trusting
TUESDAY, SEPTEMBER 16Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
emphatic
forceful, ardent, insistent
Use 12+ words
Underline the items in a series and correctly punctuate the sentence below:
Rachael told Michael they would need to re-stock Coke Pepsi and Dr. Pepper before the lunch crowd arrived.
done with emphasis or vigor
WEDNESDAY, SEPTEMBER 17Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
flaccid
limp, loose, flabby
Use 12+ words
Underline the items in a series and correctly punctuate the sentence below:
Sarah overslept but Rachael started a load of laundry washed the dishes and made her bed.
firm
THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 18Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
lugubrious
mournful, depressed, melancholy
Use 12+ words
Underline the items in a series and correctly punctuate the sentence below:
While she was out Sarah picked up eggs sugar food coloring and candles for Rachaels birthday cake.
cheerful, bubbly
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 19Vocabulary
Prepare to be tested over the words below:
cynical emphatic flaccidlugubrious
You may also be tested over the words below:aloof didactic choleric
exuberant disdainful insipid jingoistic
flippant genteel grotesque haughty
MONDAY, SEPTEMBER 22Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
inflammatory
provocative
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
Exercize, in fact, stimulates the release of endorphins, that can make people feel good but many people still prefer being couch potatoes.
liable to arouse strong emotions, especially anger
TUESDAY, SEPTEMBER 23Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
incredulous
skeptical, doubtful
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Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
In anchunt Incan society, couples were considered marryed when they took off there shoes, and handed them to each other.
unable or unwilling to believe something
WEDNESDAY, SEPTEMBER 24Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
frivolous
trivial, silly, flippant
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
Elizabeth Blackwell who was a determined courageous beleiver in womens rites overcame alot of obstacals to become the first woman doctor in America.
lacking in intellectual substance and not worth serious consideration
THURSDAY, SEPTEMBER 25Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
apocalyptic
prophetic
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Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
Thruout history, traveling traders and merchants took home new products, such as tea, spices and fabrics as a matter of fact thats one reason civilizations changed.
relating to terrible violence and destruction or to the end of the world
FRIDAY, SEPTEMBER 26Vocabulary
Prepare to be tested over the words below:inflammatory incredulous frivolousapocalyptic
You may also be tested over the words below:cynical emphatic flaccid lugubrious
exuberant disdainful insipid jingoistic
flippant genteel grotesque haughty
MONDAY, SEPTEMBER 29Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
bantering
tease, pester
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
According to the New York Times, Mickey Mantle legendary center fielder for the New York Yankees ranks among the leading home run hitters in baseball.
the exchange of lighthearted teasing or amusing remarks
TUESDAY, SEPTEMBER 30Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
magnanimous
generous, kind, forgiving
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
Some of the most unusual patents ever granted include the following a parakeet diaper, a baby patting machien and a alarm clock, that squirts the sleeper in the face.
harsh, cruel
WEDNESDAY, OCTOBER 1Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
exploitive
tyrannical, manipulative
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
Alaska nicknamed Sewards Folly by those who thought buying it was foolish was purchested from Russia for about two sents a acre What a bargin.
to take selfish or unfair advantage of a person or situation, usually for personal gain
THURSDAY, OCTOBER 2Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
detached
aloof, separate, disconnected
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
These hard working dogs are most commonly used as guyde dogs German shepherds, golden retrievers and Labrador retrievers.
connected
FRIDAY, OCTOBER 3Vocabulary
Editing
Review what revising and editing skills we’ve worked on this week and prepare to apply them on one full paragraph.
Prepare to be tested over the words below:bantering magnanimous exploitivedetached
You may also be tested over the words below:cynical emphatic flaccid lugubrious
grotesque disdainful insipid genteel
inflammatory incredulous frivolous apocalyptic
MONDAY, OCTOBER 6Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
abhor (verb)
to hate with great passion
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
When asked if life is worth living, did Charles great grandmother really say Well it depends upon the liver.
to love, to adore
TUESDAY, OCTOBER 7Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
bigot (noun) Use 12+ words
General Colin Powell was quoted in the August 21 1995 issue of U. S. News and World Report as saying “We should sacrifice for one another care about one another never be satisfied when anybody in this group is suffering and we can do something about it”.
Someone who has strong believes but will not listen to the beliefs of others
WEDNESDAY, OCTOBER 8Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
counterfeit (adjective)
fake, false
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
Animals, plants, fungi, protists and monerans these are the 5 groups into which all living things are divided.
genuine
THURSDAY, OCTOBER 9Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
hamper (verb)
to hinder, to obstruct
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes in the sentence below:
Bricks, the oldest building materiol on earth, were probly invented in egypt home of the pyramids.
to hold back or stand in the way of something
FRIDAY, OCTOBER 10Vocabulary
Prepare to be tested over the words below:abhor bigot counterfeit hamper
You may also be tested over the words below:
bantering magnanimous exploitivedetached
inflammatory incredulous frivolous apocalyptic
cynical emphatic flaccid lugubrious
MONDAY, OCTOBER 20Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
bilk (verb)
cheat, defraud
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
One of the intresting tidbits we learned in History class. Is that jeans are a by-product of the gold rush of 1849.
to do something dishonestly
TUESDAY, OCTOBER 21Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
ambivalent (adjective)
unsure, hesitant
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
If you ever find yourself at the door of destany do not let ambivalence keep you from knocking.
unable to decide
WEDESDAY, OCTOBER 22Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
belligerent (adjective)
aggressive, confrontational
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
In the play twelve angry men, the third jurer is a belligerent man whom feels the need to ridicule anyone whose views differ from his own.
calm, easygoing
THURSDAY, OCTOBER 23Vocabulary
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Synonym definition
credence (noun)
belief or credibility
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Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
Not many americans give credence to the idea that sports are merely passtimes to be enjoyed they are battles to be fot over and won.
belief in or acceptance of something as true
FRIDAY, OCTOBER 24Vocabulary
Prepare to be tested over the words below:
bilk ambivalent belligerent credence
You may also be tested over the words below:
abhor bigot counterfeit hamper
bantering magnanimous exploitivedetached
MONDAY, OCTOBER 27Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym definition
cryptic (adjective)
hidden, ambiguous, obscure
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Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
A cryptic mysterious message was scrawled on the tattered old map, bearing the seal of the count of monte cristo.
deliberately mysterious and seeming to have a hidden meaning
TUESDAY, OCTOBER 28Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym definition
apparition (noun)
ghost, mirage
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
in the movie ghost, a young girl sees an apparition of her decesed boyfriend, played by patrick swayze.
an appearance of something strange or unexpected
WEDNESDAY, OCTOBER 29Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym definition
idiosyncratic (adjective)
quirky, odd
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
While Snoopy, peppermint patty, and Lucy dressed up in normal costooms like ghosts, witches, and pumpkins, the ever-idiosyncratic Charlie Brown chose to dress as a Cowboy for halloween.
a way of behaving, thinking, or feeling that is peculiar to an individual or group
THURSDAY, OCTOBER 30Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Antonym
bloodcurdling (adjective)
terrifying, scary, spine-tingling
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
Linus lookedup up from his perch in the old oak tree and what he saw was terrifying. he let out a bloodcurdlying shreek then cried “Oh no! It’s the Great Pumpkin Charlie Brown!”
welcoming, inviting
FRIDAY, OCTOBER 31Vocabulary
Prepare to be tested over the words below:
cryptic apparition idiosyncraticbloodcurdling
You may also be tested over the words below:
bilk ambivalent belligerent credence
abhor bigot counterfeit hamper
MONDAY, NOVEMBER 3Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
boorish (adjective)
rough, impolite, rude
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
Kanye west showed boorish behavior when he roughly stole the microfone from Taylor swift during he exceptance speech at the 2009 MTV video music awards.
ill-mannered
TUESDAY, NOVEMBER 4Vocabulary
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Synonym Definition
respite (noun)
time-out
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Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
Because of my grandmothers mounting health concerns her doctors advised that she take a brief respite every afternoon.
break, time of rest
WEDESDAY, NOVEMBER 5Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
hiatus (noun)
pause
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Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
The young mother was given a short hiatus from her job, following the birth of her presios baby girl.
interruption, time or leave of absence
DON’T FORGET: EDITING TEST TOMORROW
THURSDAY, NOVEMBER 6Vocabulary
Editing
Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
thwart (verb)
prevent, frustrate
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
When I was growing up I loved playing basketball but because I was so short my efforts at making a jump shot were normally thwarted.
to put a stop to something
FRIDAY, NOVEMBER 7Vocabulary
Prepare to be tested over the words below:
boorish respite hiatus thwart
You may also be tested over the words below:
cryptic apparition idiosyncraticbloodcurdling
bilk ambivalent belligerent credence
abhor bigot counterfeit hamper
DON’T FORGET: Next week is the last week of the 6-weeks, so please utilize Jacket Time so that you will be SUCCESSFUL!
MONDAY, NOVEMBER 10Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
terse (adjective)
concise, matter-of-fact, short, clipped, brief
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
The student gave a terse reply, to the next question on her review, after her teacher took her phone away.
describing something that is done abruptly
Jake: Would you please pick up carrots, milk, bread, and eggs at the store? All organic, please – you know how preservatives affect my digestive system. Pick up some snacks, too – oh, and some laundry detergent; I think we’re out.
You: K
TUESDAY, NOVEMBER 11Vocabulary
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Synonym Definition
poignant (adjective)
emotional, touching, moving
Use 12+ words
Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
Gandhi was known forgiving poignant speeches that move his people to action.
describing something that strongly affects a person’s emotions
WEDNESDAY, NOVEMBER 12Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
decathlon (noun)
[no synonym]
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Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
After running swimming biking shooting jumping swinging paddling kicking wading and skeying for three hours straight, the exhausted athlete collapsed over the decathlon’s finish line.
an athletic competition with ten events
THURSDAY, NOVEMBER 13Vocabulary
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Word Sentence
Synonym Definition
obsolete (adjective)
out-dated
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Correct the spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and sentence structure mistakes in the sentence below:
In this generation of digital music cassette tapes have ben rendered obsolete.
describing something that is no longer valid or no longer of use
FRIDAY, NOVEMBER 7Vocabulary
Prepare to be tested over the words below:terse poignant decathlon obsolete
You may also be tested over the words below:
boorish respite hiatus thwart
cryptic apparition idiosyncraticbloodcurdling
bilk ambivalent belligerent credenceDON’T FORGET: ALL work is due by 3:35 today!