++BTEC Creative Media Production

Unit 2 Communication for Creative Media Production

Merit grade task:

On the reverse of this page is a genuine sample letter taken from a website that is intended to show students how to write a proposal 9*letter to clients.

For whatever reason, it is very badly written.

You need to re-write any parts of the letter that you think need revision to make it read clearly in formal English.

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Sample Advertising Proposal ………….

To Date: 6th June 2011

Ryan Andrews

PRO,

Centric Advertisement Co.

Subject: Advertising proposal for the yet-to-release cosmetic product for men “X-men”

Dear Andrews,

We would like to present before you an advertisement proposal related to the yet-to-release cosmetic product “X-men” exclusively for men. We have always contributed significantly in world’s cosmetic industry and developed various effective products for women till date.

We are currently in top market for perfume and aftershaves, we have sold many products in different countries, we have strong female support because of our recent perfume but we haven’t got a fragrance for men yet so we don't have there support but this is what were trying to bring out next.

We believe that these products build with high technology and effective ingredients, would satisfy customer’s need. Therefore, we want to regulate the advertisement procedure through various beauty magazines, channels and newspapers for reaching out to our intended customer’s base effectively.

Budget and cost are negotiable on proposal acceptance. Looking forward to your early intimation regarding the proposal within 5 days from receiving it.

Yours Faithfully

George Madrew

Feline Cosmetics Ltd.

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