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TOMMIE Old Mucky
KENDALL
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NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR
BEWARE: If you’ve read my first three novels, then you
might be in for a surprise with this story. You will find no
correlation between Old Mucky and that of 101 Letters,
Forgotten Secret or The Beating Heart. This elates me, but also
frightens me. Not to mention, this is my first attempt at much
shorter writing, and at horror, too.
This story is dedicated to my father, Joe Kendall, who
provided me all the ghost stories a boy could handle growing up,
plus a little more. Though most of his stories ended with
someone, or something, headless, I always found them enjoyable.
He helped mold my imagination. He once told me a story (it was
true, as all his stories were!) about a guy who shot at him from a
tree house. Believable. Then, he said he had one eye. Believable
still. But then, he said that one eye was in the middle of his
forehead. They seemed to always have a comical twist to them,
even if unintentional.
And so it was Joe Kendall who gave you this story, because
if it weren’t for him, perhaps I never would have indulged myself
in such a disturbing plot. My hope now is that you delight (even
if it is in an unsettling way) in this story as much as I did my
father’s.
Tommie Kendall
December 2016
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This is for my family, and all of our memories on Scrabble
Road – it was the best of times
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Old Mucky
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Front page from the Shelbyville (Ky) Sentinel News,
September 1, 1937:
ONE DEAD, ONE MISSING ON SCRABBLE ROAD
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937.
It was the year of Old Mucky.
This was just two years prior to the start of another world
war and it was as if there was a depression within the depression
in towns all across the country. It was also the year of a dry spell
that swept across the land in the southeast. In the United States,
Franklin D. Roosevelt was sworn into office, the Hindenburg
exploded, Amelia Earhart went missing, and Snow White and
the Seven Dwarfs premiered. Mostly around these parts though,
1937 was known as the year that Old Mucky showed up on the
small Monroe farm, wreaking havoc.
The details could be read in the local papers during the
months that followed, and in later years on the anniversaries of
the tragic events. They remained there for anyone who cared
enough to look. And the remnants of those strange eight days
were found in a Kentucky mental hospital some forty years later,
where an old man by the name of Jack Monroe was whittling
away, still searching for Old Mucky – if only in his mind. Just an
afternoon’s drive from that same mental hospital, off of Scrabble
Road deep within Shelby County, sat a large, boarded-up home
that was eerily empty. The only visitors were snakes, rats, other
creatures of the night and the occasional teenagers whom worked
up enough courage to squeeze their way through the front door
on a dare, only to be sent running back to the now-paved road.
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Tires could be heard screeching on that road from time to time,
and that’s when you knew Old Mucky got the best of them.
The neighbors say they hear it every so often – the squeals
that come from an animal that seems neither living nor dead.
Sometimes, even, they say they can hear screams from a little
girl. They swear to it. It’s worst on those nights when a full
moon is visible through the tall trees.
Drive north on Scramble Road to the old cemetery that
hasn’t seen a new body in decades, and one small tombstone is
also a reminder. It’s just another piece to a puzzle that’ll never
be solved. It’s the puzzle of Old Mucky and the little girl.
Rewind to 1937, to that same house on Scrabble Road, to
that small Kentucky town – if you could even call it that? – and
the Monroe family was normal for the times. Jack was a hard-
working, ill-tempered brute of a man in his late 40s. He prided
himself on three things: his beautiful wife, Francis – nearly 20
years his junior – their six-year-old daughter, Martha, and the
ground he farmed on.
Jack and Francis were married in 1927 and claimed a large
piece of land. It was just the way they wanted it. They were
newlyweds with what seemed like a lifetime ahead of them. It
took Jack three years to lay the last board and put on the final
coat of paint on their plantation-style dream home, as he
promised he would provide the day he proposed. And it was just
in time for baby Martha, who was born a healthy baby girl in
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1931. The three lived secluded among the trees and, despite the
sadness that engulfed the entire country and the fear of another
long war looming ahead, they were satisfied with their world.
That was, until Old Mucky decided to show up. It came
without warning, leaving a family torn apart and questions with
answers that never came. After Old Mucky arrived and left, the
Monroes were never the same again, and it took a long while for
the community to get over those tragic events, too. Jack,
Francis, Martha and Old Mucky – for decades to come, the tales
would scare anyone who dared to know the truth behind that
mysterious week off Scrabble Road.
Those screeching tires, the squeals of the animal, the cries of
a little girl and an old man locked away in a mental institute are
proof to it. But the real truth is that eerie feeling one gets when
walking down Scrabble Road in the dark, because it’s impossible
to not feel the presence of Old Mucky – even if you’re unaware
exactly what you’re feeling. It’s always there, waiting in the
dark, behind each tree.
This is the story of Old Mucky. And as unlikely as it seems,
these events are true.
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“Ma, I don’t want to leave you and Pa,” Martha cried into
her pillow as her mother stroked her back with her free hand. It
was nearing nine o’clock and the only light in the house came
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from the lantern Ma was holding. “It ain’t fair! It ain’t fair at
all!”
“Now it’ll be all right, and you know it,” the girl’s mother
reassured her. “Schooling ain’t so bad. You can meet other kids.
I bet you’ll like them all right.”
“But what if I don’t?” the girl asked between sobs. She was
shaking now, a side effect of trying not to cry, afraid of what Pa
would say if arrived home and heard the commotion. She didn’t
want the belt.
“Oh you will like them all right.”
“Ma, you promise?”
Ma hesitated for a moment. Honestly, she wasn’t so sure
herself, but didn’t want to tell her daughter this. She insisted that
everything would be okay. “You will like them all right. I
promise.”
It was the night before little six-year-old Martha started first
grade at Cropper School. Her father never attended any
schooling when he was younger in the late 1890s, and her
mother went through the third grade some twenty years later
before dropping out like most of her classmates.
Martha buried her face back into the pillow, weeping once
more. A breeze picked up, flowing into the upstairs room
window that was slightly cracked open. It had been one of the
hottest summers on record, and though the sun was now out of
sight, the heat loomed behind.
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“Don’t you want to learn? To be smart?” Ma asked. “Don’t
you want to grow up with a big old brain?”
“Pa said he didn’t go to school a single day of his life,”
Martha argued, “and I think he’s smart enough.”
“Well that’s true,” Ma said. “Your Pa is smart enough.
But…”
“But…” Martha urged her on, trying to find a hint that it was
possible she didn’t really have to go to school and could stay
home with Pa and Ma instead.
“But you ain’t going to stay here your whole life, work on
this farm and live with Pa and Ma. One day you’re going to be
on your own, and you’ll need to make your own decisions and
you’ll need to learn as much as you can now so you make the
right ones.”
“Well, I want to make my own decision now,” Martha
demanded, growing louder than she wanted, or intended. “And
I’ve decided that I don’t want to go to school tomorrow, the next
day or any day for that matter.”
“I said you can make decisions one day, but not now,” Ma
said, and kissed the back of Martha’s head. “Now that’s enough
for tonight. Get your rest, you’ll need it. You have a big day
tomorrow.”
“But Ma—”
“But nothing,” she said, the sorry now parting her voice,
leaving a hardened tone behind.
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The debate would be over soon, or Pa would have to deal
with Martha the best way he knew how. Neither of them wanted
that.
“Now get your rest, Martha. And you better be asleep before
Pa gets home, or else.”
Martha knew what that meant – the or else part – and also
knew this was an argument she couldn’t win. With watery eyes,
Ma walked away from her. Holding the lantern, Ma took the last
traces of light away, as well.
Three
Martha had a dreamless night that went way too quickly –
once she was able to fall asleep that was. The sunlight that came
shining into her room woke her before Ma could. Meanwhile,
though Pa arrived home well after she was sound asleep, he was
already outside on the farm.
The plan for Martha’s first day of school, as they discussed
at the dinner table the day before, was for the nearest neighbors’
boy, Johnny, to stop by the house at eight o’clock. Johnny was
ten years old and this would be his fifth year in school. The two
would walk to the bus stop a little more than a mile away, where
Scrabble Road met Cedamore Road near the old cemetery. In the
new yellow bus, which shook and rattled, it would be about a
thirty-minute ride to arrive at Cropper – or that’s what Pa
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estimated anyway. With stops, he calculated, maybe forty-five
minutes. Being the first day and all, he finally said, maybe sixty.
Martha ate two eggs and a slice of bread quickly, took a big
gulp of fresh milk, and ran down the driveway when she spotted
Johnny. She liked Johnny. He was big and strong for his age, and
seemed to always have kind words to say to both adults and
children. Even Martha knew that was uncommon for a boy his
age. Unlike the other kids who walked up and down the gravel
road or played in the fields or nearby creeks, Johnny was nice to
her. Plus, he’d walked to school hundreds of times, Ma had told
her yesterday, so he would know what to do.
“Well hello, Martha,” Johnny said with a smile, not even
breaking stride as Martha ran up beside him, a lunchbox in her
hand. Johnny held a sack lunch and his long strides allowed him
to take one step to Martha’s two. Spot, the Monroe’s dog, ran
alongside them for a few minutes before abandoning that
decision and running back to the house instead.
“You excited for school?” Johnny asked, after looking over
his shoulder to make sure Spot was headed in the right direction.
“I don’t know,” she said.
“You scared?”
“A little,” she said.
“Don’t worry, I was too,” Johnny assured her.
“You are?”
“Well, I’m not scared now,” he said with a chuckle. “But I
was my first day. It’ll be okay though, you’ll see. The teachers
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can be a little mean at times but it’s for our own good, and most
of the kids are nice and all.”
They walked on in silence for a few minutes, Martha jogging
every few minutes to close the gap to Johnny.
“And I’ll tell you what,” Johnny said. “If you have any
problems with anyone, anyone at all, then just let me know. I’ll
take care of it.”
Martha looked up at Johnny as they walked and smiled. She
liked him – liked him a bunch.
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It was later that day – another hot one! – when Ma and Pa
were in the garden, pulling weeds and checking on the
vegetables. After Pa attended to the chickens, cattle and horses,
he would typically help Ma in the garden. This was one of the
chores Martha would assist with normally, too. The dry summer
wasn’t helping the garden much, which seemed to put Pa in an
even grumpier mood lately.
Francis was whistling and softly singing hymns when she
engaged a conversation about Martha.
“I wonder how she’s doing?” she asked.
“She’s fine,” Pa said.
“Well she was all worried last night.”
“That’s normal, Francis.”
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“I know, but she was just so worried. It’s her first day and
all.”
“That’s your problem,” he said. “You worry too much. Now
I’m telling you, she’ll be fine.”
Pa stopped what he was doing with his hands, rose up and
used his handkerchief to wipe the sweat from his brow. It was a
hot day – he was guessing at least ninety-five with not the
slightest hint of wind – and he was looking forward to drinking a
big cup of ice water during their break for lunch. Ma went back
to whistling and thinking about Martha at school – wondering
what she was doing at that exact moment. But she kept those
thoughts from her husband.
Just then, there was a noise coming from the bush just off
from the garden. Ma heard it and stood up. Pa did the same.
They heard the noise again, sounding as if it was getting closer.
Ma wanted to speak but knew better. Pa started to say something
just as a large hog appeared in a small clearing.
It was big with dark, brown fur and a slight shade of pink on
its snout. It had pointy ears – ugly as snot! – and had to be more
than one-hundred pounds. Pa thought it might even be as big as
two-hundred pounds as he slowly took two steps to his left. He
picked up a nearby rake and lifted it over his head like he was
Babe Ruth in the World Series.
“Martha-don’t-move,” Pa said in a low and slow voice.
There hadn’t been any wild hogs in the area in a while but Pa
knew they meant trouble when they showed up. During a
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drought, it meant even more trouble. They were nothing but a
nuisance.
The two – Pa and the wild hog – looked at each other just
long enough for Pa to get uncomfortable. In a moment of furry,
he ran after the pig, taking five steps to quickly close the gap
between the two. With the rake still over his head, he swung it
across his body in one fluid motion. At that exact moment, the
hog realized what was going on and put its head down. It
stormed toward Pa. The rake missed the hog and went flying
through the air instead, barely missing Ma.
Pa fell on his elbow, and the weight of his body caused him
to roll over a few times. By the time he regained his balance and
stood up, the hog was trampling its way through the garden. A
whole line of vegetables was already destroyed before Pa started
screaming.
“Get the hell outta here!” he yelled as loud as he could,
chasing the hog with fists balled up. “Get out! Get out!”
By then, Ma – at first shocked by the events – was
screaming, as well. Between the loud sounds, Spot could be
heard barking from the front yard at the top of the hill, adding to
the commotion.
The hog ran to the other side of the garden, turned to look at
the two, and traced its steps backwards until it was in the bushes
again, squealing the entire time. Once it was out of sight, and
they could hear the god-awful squeals no more, Pa surveyed the
damage. He shook his head.
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“Just our luck, and it had to happen today, and it had to
happen during the hottest month these parts had ever seen, in the
middle of the driest summer,” he said, to no one in particular.
Ma stood by, silent. “That’s got to be the ugliest damn pig I’ve
ever seen, and a dead one at that.”
Pa fingered through some vegetables to see what was
salvageable. It was already going to be a tough few months
ahead – now even worse.
“I tell you what, Francis,” he said, even though his words
weren’t really attended for her. “I’ll kill that pig. Mark my words
– that pig will die.”
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Martha had little to say when she arrived home from school.
She seemed to have no feelings one way or the other toward her
first day. This was surprising to Ma, mainly because that was all
Martha talked about for the last year.
“So how was it?” Ma asked.
“It was all right,” she replied, seeming unsure of what to say.
She fiddled with her fingers at the kitchen table as Ma made
dinner.
“And…”
“I said it was all right,” Martha reiterated. “I don’t want to
talk about it. I’m tired.”
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“Well did you meet any friends?”
“Johnny.”
“You already knew Johnny,” Ma said. “I meant did you meet
any other friends?”
“Yes.”
“What were their names?”
“I don’t remember.”
“Martha!” Ma shouted, wiping her hands on a red, hand
towel. She wore a matching apron. “Don’t you go off getting
sassy with me.”
“I’m sorry, Ma, I said I’m tired. Can we talk about this later?
Please?”
Pa came in the kitchen just as Martha stood up and walked
out.
“What’s wrong with her?” Pa asked.
“I don’t know.” Ma faced the stove again. “She says she’s
tired.”
“Well she better straighten up,” he said. “It’s been a long day
for all of us.”
Six
Just prior to bedtime that night, Ma went to Martha’s room
to tuck her in – their normal routine. But she couldn’t find her.
She checked the other rooms upstairs. Nothing. She walked
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down the stairs. They creaked with each step. Martha wasn’t in
the living room. She wasn’t in the kitchen. Ma nearly stepped on
a mouse that quickly ran past.
“Martha,” Ma called out. “Martha. Where are you?”
She heard sniffling from the kitchen so retraced her steps.
The sniffling grew louder. She reached for the doorknob on the
counter cabinet and opened it to find Martha curled in a ball,
crying. Ma should have known that’s where Martha would be.
Anytime something was bothering her then that was her go-to-
place, where she could escape. When asked why, Martha said it
was her safe place. Pa didn’t like it too much but Ma didn’t see
any harm with it so let her be.
“Martha, do you know what time it is?” Ma asked. Martha
always was an emotional girl, but it wasn’t like her to be so
upset. Lately, she seemed more sad than happy.
“I know Ma,” she said, still sniffling. “But I’m scared.”
“Now you get out of there,” Ma said. “There’s absolutely
nothing to be scared about.”
“But Pa’s going to kill me,” Martha said.
“You know Pa’s never going to kill you,” she said. “Why in
the world would you even say words like that?”
“I did something awful,” Martha said.
“I’m certain it ain’t that bad and I’m even more certain Pa
ain’t going to kill you,” Ma said. She grabbed Martha by the
arm, pulling her out of the cabinet. She stood Martha to her feet,
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dusted off her legs. She looked her in the eyes, seeing the
sadness.
“Now listen to me. No matter what you did, I’m certain it’ll
be okay.” She paused for a moment. “Was it something that
happened at school?”
Martha shrugged.
“I want to help you, honest to God I do,” Ma said. “There’s
nothing I dislike more than when Pa wears you out with that belt
of his. But if you don’t talk, then I can’t listen, and I can’t help.
So you gotta tell me what’s wrong.”
Martha nodded her head up and down. She began to speak
but just then they could hear the front door open and close. Pa
appeared in the room.
“Martha, what are you still doing up?” he asked as soon as
he noticed her. “You have school tomorrow, young lady.”
“She was just getting a drink,” Ma said. “She’ll be back in
bed soon.”
Ma gave Martha a look like we’ll-talk-about-this-later and
then led her upstairs.
“Ma, one more thing,” Martha said after climbing into the
bed. “I had an awful dream. Pa was so mad at me that he wanted
to kill me. I was playing in the trees and then there he was, and
he wanted to hurt me, hurt me badly. He looked so angry, so
mad, and I didn’t even know why. He was screaming and yelling
and wanted to hurt me. And then he…”
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“Now Martha,” Ma cut her off midsentence. “You know
that’s only a dream. You need to stop all this nonsense of Pa
trying to kill you. There is absolutely no reason to ever think
your Pa is going to kill you.”
Ma pulled the blanket to Martha’s neck. When she realized
how hot it was, she lowered it to her waist. She kissed her
forehead. Martha flinched.
“Stop worrying, will you?” Ma said, more demanding than
asking.
“Ma,” Martha added.
“Yes.” More mice could be heard, this time in Martha’s
room.
“You were there, too.”
“I was where?” Ma asked.
“In my dream, in the trees, with Pa and me,” she answered.
“You were there. And Ma, I think you wanted me dead, too.”
Just then, there was a loud stomp on the floor downstairs.
“Got the bastard!” they heard Pa say.
Martha’s eyes sunk into her head, even more frightened.
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The next three days came and went without much incident.
Pa kept an eye out for the hog but it never showed up. The
damage to the garden wasn’t nearly as bad as he initially
thought. Martha talked much more about school in the evenings;
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she actually seemed excited to be going. Johnny picked her up
each morning and walked her to the bus stop. She sat next to
Janice – her new best friend – on the bus and at school. This
made her excited. There were no nighttime fits or visits to her
safe place. For the most part, everything seemed to be back to
normal.
But on Friday, as Martha was sitting in the first-grade
classroom at Cropper School, everything was about to change
once again on the Monroe property. It was all due to that hog.
At midday, Pa and Ma were at the creak washing off when
they spotted the large hog roaming around the embankment. It
wasn’t paying the Monroes any attention. Ma was fine by this.
As for Pa, he desperately wanted that hog dead. He wished he’d
brought his rifle to the creak that day – he thought about it before
they headed down the hill, just in case that hog showed up again.
Pa kept quite – they both did. They thought the hog was
going to wobble off into the woods but when Pa splashed his
hands in the water in front of him, it turned back toward them.
Pa whispered, “Francis, get out of the water.”
Ma did just that. Pa and the hog were starring at each other;
Pa was still waist deep in the water and the hog on the land. The
hog stepped its front foot into the water, then its next, then all
four, causing mud to instantly form around his body. Pa looked
for something to grab. He picked up a branch that was floating
past. The mud expanded away from the hog, which engulfed the
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clothes they were washing. This infuriated Pa even more. He
mumbled under his breath.
The hog snorted twice and then slowly stepped toward Pa.
“Jack, be careful,” Ma said.
The hog seemed to think about lunging toward Pa for the
briefest of moments, but then thought differently and turned
upstream instead. Pa could had let it be at that point – he was
certain of it – but he had so much anger toward the hog that he
wanted to wound it, or at least teach it a lesson. He squeezed his
fingers tightly around the branch.
Pa moved toward the hog’s backside, slowly at first and then
faster as he crept toward the embankment until he was ankle
deep in water.
Without warning, Pa ran towards the hog as quickly as he
could, splashing through the water with every footfall. He
smacked the branch against the hog’s side with enough force to
snap it. The hog let out a loud snort and wail that echoed through
the trees.
The hog lunged away, but Pa moved quicker and kicked it
on the side – the hog snorted and wailed. It was angry now, and
just as Pa went for another kick, the hog moved away and Pa fell
on his back into the water, smacking his head against a rock.
Blood instantly filled the shallow water around him. This time, it
was Pa who moaned. He grabbed for the back of his head. He
felt dizzy as darkness crept into his vision. It took all his might to
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keep his face from falling underwater. Eventually, he lost all
strength; his face was now submerged under the bloody water.
“Jack!” Ma cried out and ran into the water. The hog looked
over at Ma, snorted three times, and wobbled off into the woods,
leaving Ma and her injured husband behind.
When she reached him, Ma grabbed Pa by the shoulders and
lifted him up. She was afraid he wouldn’t be breathing, but he
gasped for breath. She reached around and felt the back of his
head, her fingers feeling a large gash. She tried to pull and hold
his skin together.
It took her the better part of two hours to get him back to
their home – all the while he was moaning and groaning – and
when he refused a trip to the hospital, she laid him on the couch
and put a washcloth on his forehead instead.
“Oh Jack,” she said. “Let me take you the hospital. You’re
hurt. Please let me take you to the hospital. At least, let me call
the doc.”
For the thousandth time, he shook his head no. Pa didn’t
need the hospital or a doctor – he just needed rest.
“That damn hog…” he started to say, in a voice barely
louder than a whisper.
“Now hush it,” Ma said. “Don’t worry about that hog. You
need your rest. Just relax.”
He tried to stay awake, blinking variously, but eventually
gave in and darkness overtook his surroundings once more.
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Eight
As night reached the Monroe home late on Friday, it had
been a slumber fest all evening. Pa was in and out of sleep since
the accident. Ma kept a watchful eye over him as much as
possible. Martha arrived home in low spirits and, out of
character, took a lengthy nap, as well.
It was Martha’s first non-school night since she started at
Cropper, and because Pa was in no condition to make such non-
consequence decisions, Ma took it upon herself to hash out a few
rules for such occasions. She said Martha could stay up later than
normal, she could listen to the radio and they could eat dinner in
the living room. But even this had a small reaction on Martha,
who had little to say since school.
With Pa on the couch, Ma sitting next to him and Martha
cross-legged on the floor, the Lone Ranger was playing on the
radio. The storyline was heard despite the static. Typically,
Martha would be ecstatic to be able to listen to the Lone Ranger
with Ma and Pa – except for special occasions, they only listened
to news broadcasts or baseball games – but she wasn’t feeling
very well on this night. She picked at the plate of food in front of
her. Ma thought she was worried about Pa.
“What’s the matter with you?” Pa asked, not bothering to
even look her way.
“Nothing,” Martha said.
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“You better snap out of it. I ain’t got no energy to deal with
you tonight.”
Ma rubbed Pa’s legs. The three listened to the radio for a few
more minutes as the Lone Ranger continued.
“Can I be excused?” Martha asked. “I’m not feeling well.”
“No,” Pa said. “We’re having family time. Now listen to the
radio and eat your cotton-picking food.”
Martha tried a bite of corn but couldn’t seem to swallow
anything. Her stomach was hurting and she felt nauseated.
“I’m taking my gun with me down to the creak tomorrow,”
Pa said to Ma, paying no attention to Martha. “That damn hog is
going to be a dead hog.”
“Now hush, Jack, don’t worry about that hog right now,” Ma
said.
“I’m telling you,” he said. “He trampled our garden, got our
creak water all muddy and attacked me – almost sent me straight
to the hospital. We can’t be having no wild animal running
around these parts.”
Pa’s head was bandaged up. Ma did her best to clean the
wound and hold the gash together. She was insisted that he visit
the doctor but finally gave up on the argument when she knew it
was one she wouldn’t win.
“I’m going to take a gun with me every single day until I see
that hog again. It’ll come back, and when it does, I’ll kill it
dead.”
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Just as the Lone Ranger ended, Martha asked if she could be
excused again. Pa said yes this time. She turned back around
when she got to the door.
“Why do you want to kill the pig?” she asked. “From talking
to Ma, you attacked it anyway.”
Pa looked at her with a stone face and eyes that could pierce
through fire. He looked at Ma, then back to Martha.
“That pig attacked me, and it’s a dead pig the first time I get
a clear shot. And that pig isn’t even a pig at all, it’s a wild hog. A
wild hog that could do harm to this farm and this family and a
little girl like you. I can kill anything I want to on this farm.”
Martha looked back at him. “So, would you kill Spot if he
attacked you?”
“Spot is a pet, a dog. Spot ain’t a damn fool to attack me like
this wild hog. And Spot has a name.”
There was silence for a few moments.
“Old Mucky,” Martha blurted out after giving it thought.
“What?” Pa asked, confused.
“Old Mucky,” she repeated quickly this time. “The pig or
hog or wild hog, whatever you want to say it is. Its name is Old
Mucky. So now you can’t kill it.”
“Have you lost your ever-loving mind, young lady?” Pa
asked.
“It’s your rule,” she said, “so now you can’t kill the pig
because it has a name.”
She turned, and walked away.
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Nine
Martha finished her business in the wooden outhouse that sat
a hundred or so yards behind the house. She grabbed the lantern
so she could see her way back. It was after midnight and both Pa
and Ma were fast asleep inside.
Typically, Martha wasn’t the type of kid to be spooked out,
even when it was pitch-black out like tonight, but she had been
thinking about the pig all day on Saturday and was thinking what
would happen if Old Mucky really was a mean, wild hog and
came at her like he did Pa two days earlier.
Pa wasn’t well enough to go out on Saturday morning like he
planned, but he did later that evening. Old Mucky never showed.
Martha was thankful for this, but part of her really wanted to see
the pig. Pa said that he would take his gun out again on Sunday,
Monday and each day thereafter until the hog came back. When
Martha insisted that she wanted to see it, Pa said she would but
only when it was dead. Martha thought it was silly that Pa
wanted to kill the pug so badly.
But now, with Pa asleep and his gun next to his bed, Martha
was scared of Old Mucky for the first time.
She closed the wooden door behind her and stepped onto the
moist grass with bare feet. The door creaked shut. When it
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closed all the way, there was a faint noise. She jumped, dropping
the lantern to the ground.
Just as she bent over the pick it up, she heard a louder noise
coming from the trees just behind the outhouse. It got closer. She
could hardly breathe. It didn’t help when she heard a snorting
sound from the same direction.
“Old Mucky,” she said, as if it knew its name and would
somehow be a gentler pig if she was nice first. “Hello. Old
Mucky? Is that you? Don’t be afraid, boy, it’s only me. Old
Mucky?”
She bent down the rest of the way, felt for the lantern,
grabbed a hold of the handle and stood back up. She debated to
look the direction of the trees – where the noise was coming
from – but opted against it. She decided she would rather not
know if something was actually there or not – be it Old Mucky
or something else entirely.
Instead, she took a deep breath and ran as quickly as she
could to the house, like something was chasing her – maybe, it
was. She almost fumbled with the lantern as it swung next to her
side, nearly dropping it twice but catching it each time. Her legs
turned over as quickly as they could. Her breathing got heavier
and heavier as air filled her lungs. She could hear something
behind her, getting closer and closer. It was nearly right up on
her, she figured, when she reached for the doorknob of the
backdoor and swung it open. The door slammed behind her.
That was close, Martha thought, panting for air.
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There was scratching on the door and what sounded like
heavy snoring on the other side. Something was trying to get in.
She stood and slowly backed away, almost knocking over the
coat rack. She covered her mouth with her left hand to keep from
screaming.
She knew better than to wake Ma or Pa, so she crept her way
into the kitchen, opened the cabinet door to her safe place and
climbed inside, closing the door behind her. She flicked on the
lantern. The back door opened slowly, so she pulled her legs to
her chest and started rocking back and forth. She had a sick
feeling in her stomach and was now shaking. A mouse ran across
the inside of the cabinet but she didn’t even notice.
“Pa,” she cried with a low voice that barely escaped the
small space she hid. “Help me, Pa. Don’t let Old Mucky get me.
Kill it, Pa, kill it dead.”
She heard something on the kitchen floor now, like whatever
it was, it was circling; it casted a shadow inside the cabinet so
she turned off the lantern, taking all the light with it. The sound
got closer to the cabinet door. There was sniffing. The heavy
breathing was back. Martha wanted to scream but she was too
frightened. She squeezed her eyes shut as tightly as she could,
praying.
“Please God, don’t let Mucky in; please God let Pa save me.
Please God, don’t let Mucky in; please God let Pa save me...”
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She lowered her head between her legs and cried, wanting
more than anything for her Pa to kill that mean, wild hog. She
hated it. She despised it. She, too, now wanted Old Mucky dead.
“Old Mucky,” she cried out, “leave me alone. Please, please,
please leave me alone. I’m sorry, Pa. I’m sorry, Pa.”
Ten
It was Monday morning – the start of the second full week of
Martha going to Cropper School. When Ma went into her
bedroom to wake her, Martha was already awake. She was
sitting up in bed but facing the opposite wall. Ma was worried
about Martha. She slept most of Sunday and was acting as if she
was scared of something. It had to do with that hog, Ma would
swear to it, and Pa’s insistence that he had to kill it soon.
Ma walked over and touched Martha on the back. Martha
jumped like she was stung by a bee. But her face remained
facing the opposite wall. She didn’t make a sound.
“It’s time for school, Martha,” Ma said. “Are you okay?
Why you so jumpy, baby?”
When Martha turned around, her face was as pale as snow
but her eyes as red as fire. There were dried up tears that stopped
streaming down her face sometime in the middle of the night.
Her hair was matted in sweat. Ma shook her shoulders. Martha’s
expression was blank.
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“Martha! Martha! What’s wrong, dear? What’s wrong?”
“I… I… I don’t know,” Martha finally said, struggling to
speak. Her voice was hoarse. “I feel… strange. I don’t… know,
Ma. I really… don’t.”
Martha didn’t cry this time. She just starred at her mother
with a void look on her face. Ma hugged her, and then pulled her
away so she could get a better look. She didn’t look like her baby
girl at all.
“Oh Martha,” she said. “I don’t think you can go to school
today. Maybe it’s the flu or something. You want to stay in bed
today, honey?”
Martha didn’t respond. She just starred. In that instant,
somehow, her face seemed to be even whiter and her eyes
redder.
“It’s… awful,” Martha finally said. “It’s awful and Pa… he’s
going to kill me. I promise… you, Ma, Pa’s… gonna… kill me.”
Eleven
“Jack, I really think something’s wrong with her,” Ma
pleaded as they walked alongside the creek bed, with Spot by
their side this time. Martha was sleeping back at the house and
Ma was trying to hurry with the clothes today so she could check
on her.
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“What have I told you about all that worrying?” he asked,
though didn’t expect an answer. “She’ll be fine. She probably
just came down with something. She’ll be back to herself in no
time. She probably could have gone to school today. I told you I
didn’t want her missing.”
“Nonsense,” Ma said. “You didn’t see her this morning. She
looked… looked… I can’t even explain the way she looked. Her
face. Her eyes. I mean –“
“That’s enough, Francis,” Pa said, and he meant it. “She’s
fine. Don’t you go making a bigger deal than what it is.”
Pa placed his riffle next to a big bush and started to help Ma
with the clothes.
Meanwhile, Spot seemed to notice something in the trees. He
barked and ran off into the distance, but Pa and Ma didn’t pay
him any attention. Spot was never seen again.
Twelve
Ms. Morris – the first-grade teacher at Cropper School –
knocked on the Monroe’s front door for ten straight minutes. She
made the trip to their home right after classes let out to make
sure she had the opportunity to speak with them. It was no use.
She walked one lap around the house, left a note on the rocker by
the door and walked down the gravel driveway, hoping she’d run
into them on the way out.
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Thirteen
The Monroe house was now completely empty. It was
nearing four o’clock in the afternoon and Pa and Ma were still at
the creek. They both supposed their six-year-old daughter was
sleeping in her room. But they were wrong. The clothes that
Martha was wearing earlier that morning were tossed around on
top of her bed, but she was nowhere in sight. Unknowingly to
everyone else, Martha was gone.
Fourteen
At the exact same time Ms. Morris was departing the
Monroe farm, Ma and Pa were in the creek at the bottom of the
hill. They had no idea that Ms. Morris had stopped by and left a
note, and there was no indication that Martha was anywhere
other than in her bed. There was a lot they didn’t know that day.
Ma was anxious to get back to her ill daughter. Pa was still
bandaged up but was eyeing the riffle every so often, anxious to
get a clear shot at that hog. He had revenge on his mind. Little
did he know, his big chance was right around a tree.
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Old Mucky showed itself on the embankment. It was as if
one moment it wasn’t there, then the next it was. Ma froze –
ankle deep in water – and Pa lunged for his riffle. He picked up
the riffle, placed it to his shoulder and when he turned to face the
hog again, Old Mucky had vanished.
“Where’d it go?” Pa asked Ma.
“Oh Jack, let it be,” Ma said. “Please, just let it go. You’re
gonna get yourself hurt again. Please, just let it be. I beg of you.”
“Francis,” he said, softly, “where did that hog go?”
She didn’t respond.
“Where is he?!” he yelled. He heard a noise coming from his
right side, and when he pointed the gun in that direction, a few
birds flew away instead.
“He went that way,” Ma finally said, pointing to the opposite
direction.
Pa, who was barely out of the water now, spat on the ground
and turned left toward the direction Ma pointed.
“Be careful, Jack,” Martha warned.
“Its fine,” he said, and took two steps toward the trees.
Pa thought he saw the hog but noticed it was only a tree
stomp. At that moment he felt his feet lift off the ground and he
flung back in one quick motion. The rifle flew from his hands.
He splashed into the shallow water.
When he regained his composure, rising to his knees, Old
Mucky was snorting at him, just feet away. Pa didn’t move at
first. Somehow, Old Mucky appeared even bigger and uglier at
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this close of a distance. Pa felt the hot breath from the hog blow
across his face with each snort. Its slightly pink nose was
twitching.
Slowly, Pa started to stand but Old Mucky moved forward,
knocking him back to the ground. Pa was the one frightened
now. Ma watched what was going on but was motionless. Inside
though, she was begging for Pa to be okay.
Old Mucky let out the loudest snort Pa or Ma ever heard. It
blew the bandage off of Pa’s head, revealing the large gash in the
back of his head. Blood instantly poured down his backside and
into the water. The snort echoed throughout every tree in the
forest, it seemed.
(Ms. Morris, who was now more than a mile away from the
Monroe farm, heard the snort, as well, hesitated for a brief
moment, but continued walking.)
The snort was the kind of sound that had meaning, like Old
Mucky was trying to tell Pa something. Old Mucky let out a few
quieter and shorter snorts, and turned away from Pa. The old hog
walked back onto dry land, wobbling away.
Once it reached the tree line, Pa jumped up, grabbed his
riffle and pointed it at the hog’s backside. He placed his right
pointy finger on the trigger.
As if he knew what was happening, Old Mucky stopped in
its track. It slowly turned around. Pa and Old Mucky made eye
contact, and for the briefest of moments Pa thought he
recognized those eyes. Pa blinked hard to shake those thoughts,
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closed his right eye and aimed. Finally, Old Mucky was in his
sights. Old Mucky was all his.
Pa pulled the trigger.
Fifteen
The blast from the riffle seemed to make time stand still all
around them. Pa had a ringing in his ear and he could see Ma’s
mouth open from the corner of his eye, though he couldn’t hear
any noise coming from her.
Old Mucky was hit with the first shot, stumbling backwards
as soon as the bullet entered the hog’s side, ripping flesh. There
was a splatter of blood that hit a nearby tree. Old Mucky fell to
its front legs, snorted, shook its head, and stood tall again. The
hog shook when Pa aimed a second time.
The ringing in his ear was still there when he pulled the
trigger again. The second shot hit Old Mucky close to the first
wound, tearing flesh once again. This time Old Mucky fell all
the way to the ground. The hog moaned in agonizing pain.
Eventually, the hog rose to its feet once more. Pa aimed for a
third time but didn’t pull the trigger. Exhausted, he dropped the
riffle at the same time that Old Mucky stumbled off into a
clearing in the trees.
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Ma ran over to Pa just as he fell, his back hitting against a
tree. There was blood pouring out of the back of his head. On the
opposite side, where Old Mucky was shot, it looked as if there
had been a slaughter.
“I got the son of a bitch,” Pa said. There was a small grin
that formed on the right side of his lips. “Old Mucky is as good
as dead now.”
Sixteen
Ma helped Pa across the creek. The two began a slow walk
up the hill, toward their home. There wasn’t much said between
the two – what could they say? The Old Mucky saga was over
and they would soon be home to their daughter. After a day of
rest, Ma figured Martha would be as good as new. Their life, as
they knew it, would be back to normal.
As they were cresting the hill, they noticed Johnny running
toward them. He was coming from the direction of his place. Ma
and Pa were confused as to why he would be out that way on a
Monday evening after school. When he saw the Monroes, he ran
faster.
“Everything okay?” Johnny asked as he ran over to the two.
Pa’s shirt was covered in blood and he had the riffle slung over
his shoulder. Ma also had a few splattered spots on her clothes.
They left the rest of their belongings down by the creek.
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“Its fine,” Pa said, out of breath.
“Yes, its fine, Johnny,” Ma said, sounding more coherent
than her husband “There’s just been an accident, that’s all. But
we’re fine. It’s okay now.”
“Is this why Martha wasn’t at school?” Johnny asked. His
eyes were glued to Pa’s blood-stained shirt.
“No,” Ma said. “Martha was sick today. But she should be
back in school tomorrow. Thank you for helping her last week.
She really likes you, Johnny.”
Ma and Pa had stopped walking, leaning against a tree. Pa
could hardly hold up his head.
“She wasn’t feeling well last week either, right?” Johnny
asked. “Is that why she missed two days last week, too?”
“No Johnny, she missed today,” Ma said. “This was the only
day she missed.”
Now the boy was confused. His glance went to Ma.
“I don’t want to disagree with you, Ms. Monroe, but Martha
missed the first day of school, on last Monday, and again on
Friday. She said she was sick so headed back home shortly after
I stopped by to get her. I thought that would be fine. I thought
you all knew, honest to God I did.”
Ma and Pa looked at each other.
“And then she missed again today,” Johnny continued. “Ms.
Morris said she was going to stop by to have a little chat with
you all after school today. But when I saw her down yonder (he
pointed back toward his house), she said you all weren’t home. I
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told her I’d check on Martha, and then I ran into you’ll on the
way.”
“Johnny?” Pa said, doing his best to raise his head.
“Yes, Mr. Monroe.”
“So you’re telling us that Martha skipped school on Monday
and again on Friday without our knowledge?”
“Yes sir, but I wasn’t aware of that. Honest to God, I had no
idea. If I did, sir, then you would have been the first to hear
about it.”
Seventeen
Ma and Pa could see their house in the distance, between
two large trees, when they noticed red on a tree branch in front
of them. Pa instantly put his arm across Ma’s chest, stopping her.
“What the hell?” he said, rubbing his hand across the spot of
red. He smelt two fingers. It was blood – fresh blood.
“Jack?” Ma questioned. He had no response.
When they looked up toward the house again, they realized
there was more blood. The red seemed to be on each branch on a
direct line to their home.
“Jack?” Ma asked again, more frantic this time. “What do
you suppose this is from?”
Pa, still holding his riffle, grabbed Ma by the hand and
started in a trot toward their house without saying a word, his
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heart beating fast. When they got within twenty yards of the
front door, Pa could see a trace of blood along the stairs and into
the front door, which was opened for some reason.
“Ma, look at me,” Pa insisted. She looked at him finally,
though her eyes seemed to be in a million other places. “I’m
going to take this riffle and go in there. Something’s not right. I
need you to stay out here. Stay behind this tree. Okay?”
“It’s Martha, isn’t it?” Ma said, more pleading that it’s not
the case than asking the question. “Something’s wrong with our
little girl. Somebody’s got her. Don’t they?” Ma whimpered.
“Oh Jack.” She fell to her knees and hugged the tree, looking
away from the house. She couldn’t bare the thought of knowing
something was wrong with Martha.
Pa knew he didn’t have much time. He flung his gun over his
shoulder and ran toward the house as quickly as he could,
leaving Ma behind. He slipped on blood on the way up the stairs,
falling to his face. When he looked up, he saw that the doorknob
had a small blood handprint on it, as well. The note that was
sitting on the rocker – the one Ms. Morris left a little earlier –
flew off into the wind when he ran past, unnoticed.
He pointed the riffle into the living room when he slowly,
cautiously walked inside the front door. The odor was sick and
rotten. The breeze smelt of urine and feces.
“Who’s here?” he yelled out, but there was no sound. “I have
a gun.” Again, nothing.
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He almost slipped once more when he noticed there was a
line of blood leading to the kitchen. He turned back to see
someone standing in the doorway. He blinked to clear his vision.
It was Ma. Her eyes were that of someone who had seen a
ghost. She was gasping for breath, unsure of what was going on
– of what to expect.
“Is she hear?” Ma asked. If there’s a stage beyond frantic,
that’s where Ma was.
“I… don’t… know,” Pa said, a pause between each word.
Ma walked behind Pa, sobbing, and held his elbow as the
two of them, bit by bit, followed the trail of blood. The light
from the sun that shined in through the back window was
blinding.
“Stay close by,” Pa said, “and if I say run, then you run. By
God, you run.”
Ma sobbed so he knew she heard. When he poked his head
into the kitchen, he noticed the line of blood led to the cabinet
door. When Ma noticed this, too, she ran around Pa and loudly
shrieked.
“Nooooooooo!” she screamed. “No! Not my baby!”
Ma was the first to the cabinet, and before Pa could pull her
away, she opened the door. There, naked and in the fetal
position, was Martha. Blood covered her from head to toe and
though she would never say the words, Ma instantly knew her
baby girl was dead.
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Pa strained to move Ma out of the way. Ma reached out her
right arm for the girl but before she could touch her Pa grabbed
Ma by the waist and flung her behind him. She shrieked.
“Nooooooo!”
Pa pulled Martha from the cabinet. Her legs and arms
flopped like a ragdoll. Her hair was now a shade of red that was
tangled and matted to her forehead. Her pupils were barely
visible, rolled toward the back of her head. He laid her on the
wooden floor in front of them.
Pa starred at her lifeless body; a headache formed in his head
that was so bad that it felt as if someone put a knife in his skull
and turned it.
“No,” he said, and repeated it over and over again. “No. No.
No. No. No. No.”
Ma screamed so loud that a small crack formed in the
window over the countertop.
When Pa turned Martha to her side, he saw two bullet holes.
He starred at those wounds, as if his mind was playing tricks on
him and he would come back to reality at any moment. It didn’t
happen. He shook his head. While his wife continued to scream,
until she was hoarse, he squeezed his eyes shut as tightly as he
could, hoping when he opened them then those holes would
somehow be gone, but they weren’t.
Ma slumbered over Martha’s body. She took Martha into her
arms, pulled her tightly to her chest. Blood was now covering the
both of them. She rocked back and forth, kissing Martha’s
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forehead, tasting the blood of her daughter, hoping and praying
and pleading that this nightmare would be over soon, but it never
was.
My baby! Ma thought, the words echoing throughout her
head.
Pa stood, dusted off his pants and picked up his riffle. He
walked through the kitchen, toward the living room.
“Jack!” Ma screamed out, voice cracking. “Jaaack! Don’t
leave me Jack!”
But there was no answer. Pa would never talk to Ma again.
He stopped at the front door, paused just long enough for Ma
say his name one more time, and then ran out of the house and
down the bloody stairs, his riffle still in hand.
He wasn’t sure what he was running toward at first but knew
he needed to escape – to somehow get out of this world. So
that’s what he did. He started in a jog and then quickened his
pace. He ran down the hill, in and out of trees – the same trees
that were splattered with his daughter’s blood. Branches reached
out for him and smacked against his body and face as he went
on. But he didn’t care. There was a tiny moment when he felt as
free as he’d ever been – possibly, as free as before he was even a
Pa at all, when it was just Francis and him and they didn’t have a
care in the world. Somehow while he ran he even managed a
small smile as the wind flew through his hair.
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Pa eventually reached the creek, crossed it as quickly as he
could, and came out the other side still running.
And then he had an idea. It was the notion of what he was
running toward; and that made him run even faster. He felt a
presence surrounding him, that of a dark figure on all four, but
no shape was ever there. If he tried hard enough, he thought,
then he would eventually find it somewhere, somehow, and that
would bring back his daughter and set him free for good.
Jack Monroe came out on Scrabble Road on a Monday
evening, crossed it within a few strides and entered the trees on
the other side. He was alone again – alone in his own little
world, alone as he would be for the rest of his days. He would
never stop until he found it – the one thing he was searching for.
Old Mucky, he thought, and ran on.
THE END
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By Tommie Kendall
NOVELS
101 Letters
Forgotten Secret
The Beating Heart
COLLECTION
Tommie Kendall Trilogy
SHORT STORY
Old Mucky
TOMMIE KENDALL is the author of three books, all previously
published as individual novels and bundled together in the
Tommie Kendall Trilogy. Tommie graduated from Shelby County
High School in Kentucky in 2000 and Cumberland College in
2004. He was then a sports editor for eight years before turning
his writing path to fictional stories. Old Mucky is his first short
story. Currently, he resides in Shelbyville, Kentucky, with his two
young children, Emma and Cruz.
More information – www.tommiekendall.com