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    1. Greetings2. Introducing yourself and others3. Taking leave4. Giving and seeking information5. Giving instructions and carrying out instructions6. Requesting for objects7. Telephone conversations8. Other social expressions9. Giving directionsHot tips

    You are advised to spend only 6 minutes on Section B. Make sure you understand the situation and the sentences in each picture. Look at the pictures and ask yourself what the people are doing. Remember to read through all the options given before you choose the best option. Use your common sense to decide on the best answer. Answer all the questions. Make a guess if you are unsure of the answer.

    TIPS TO SCORE A FOR PAPER 1 ( OBJECTIVE )

    SK English Paper 1 Objective Paper

    Time 50 mins Total marks 40 marksNo of questions 40 . Choose the correct or best answer marked A, B, C or D. Then, on the

    answer sheet , darken the space of the letter of the answer that has been chosen. Also circle the

    letter on the question paper.

    Questions 1 10

    Vocabulary word, phrase or sentence level.

    Questions stimuli based with or without graphics.

    Questions 11 15

    Social and language expression.

    - correct social expression with clues

    - suitable vocabulary on given situations- parts of speech based on clues.

    Questions are based on pictures showing common social situations. Study each picture carefully,

    make sure of the situation. Choose appropriate response that fits the situation.

    Questions 16 25

    Grammar

    - grammatical items, spelling and punctuation.

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    - synonyms and antonyms

    - questions stimuli based with graphics.

    Questions 26 30

    Text Completion.

    - A cloze passage a picture is given.

    - 5 blanks test on the use of parts of speech ( grammar ) visual and textual clues. Look carefully and

    choose the correct answers.

    Questions 31 40

    Reading and Comprehension. ( 10 multiple choice questions , 2 passages. )

    - a non-linear passage and a linear passage.

    Reading skills :

    - main idea - specific information

    - cause and effect relationships - drawing conclusions

    - predicting outcomes - sequencing

    - vocabulary - inference

    TIP : To score excellently well , pupils must think beyond the text. Use own experience and

    knowledge in order to answer the questions correctly.

    TIPS ON ANSWERING THE UPSR ENGLISH LANGUAGE PAPER 1

    1. Read and understand the questions.

    2. Look at the pictures or graphics given and relate them to the answers given.

    3. Pupils have to understand the situation and dialogue before choosing the correct response that fits the

    situation in the picture.

    4. Look at all the punctuation marks.

    5. Cloze passage look carefully at the picture.

    6. Read the passage at least twice to get a general idea.

    7. Read all the options A, B, C, D before choosing the best answer.

    8. Answer all the questions given.

    9. Comprehension question -Pupils should read the passage at least twice so that they understand it

    better.

    ANALYSIS OF UPSR ENGLISH LANGUAGE PAPER 1 ( 2006- 2010 )

    Section A ,Questions 1 10 ( VOCABULARY )

    Question No 1 : Animals, footwear, plants , adverbs, places

    Question No 2 : Footwear, place, transport, clothes, adjectives

    Question No 3 : Kitchen utensils, relationship, animals, verbs (past tense ), animals (home )Question No 4 : Objects, animals, occupation, animals, adverb of manner

    Questions No 5 7: Fishing, Personal hygiene, Gardening , Having dinner at a restaurant

    Question No 8 : Situation At a stall, Stroking a cat, Having breakfast, In the bedroom, In the garden.

    Question No 9: Situation Mending shoes, Returning a wallet, Hanging the clothes, In the

    garden,painting

    Question No 10: Situation Playing with rabbits, Mowing the lawn,Missed the bus,

    Baking a cake, Tapping the rubber tree.

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    Section B , Questions 11 15 ( SOCIAL AND LANGUAGE EXPRESSIONS )

    Question No 11: How is your new school? ( To enquire ) / Does it fit you? ( To enquire )

    I enjoyed the chicken curry. ( To confirm ) / Thank you for switching on the

    light . ( To express gratitude ) / I did , but its too spicy. ( To explain )

    Question No 12: It will start at any time. ( To inform ) / I would suggest these roses. ( To suggest)

    I would like another piece. ( To request ) / Ill help you to look for them.

    ( To offer ) / These hibiscus are beautiful, arent they? ( To ask for confirmation)

    Question No 13: Where did you buy the blouse? ( To enquire ) / Go straight and take the first junction. (

    To explain) / Theres someone at the door. ( To explain ) /

    Its alright! I can manage. ( To decline ) / Where is the nearest bus stop?

    ( To enquire )

    Question No 14 : Which one would you like? ( To offer ) / Oh, how kind of you .

    ( To express gratitude. ) / Let me give you a hand. ( To offer ) / Jenny bought it at the new bakery. ( To

    inform ) / Pleased to meet you. ( To greet )

    Question No 15: I cant find my keys. ( To inform ) / I need a room for tonight. ( To request )/

    Ill take you to the clinic. ( To inform) / Let me check it for you. ( To offer )/

    Please help me clean the hutch. ( To request )

    Section C , Questions 16 - 25 ( GRAMMAR , SPELLING & PUNCTUATI ON )

    Ques. 16: Comparison of adjective / Adverbs / Adverbs / Articles/ Articles

    Ques. 17: Preposition /Adjectives / Adjectives / Verbs ( Interrogative ) / Main Verbs

    Ques. 18: Pronoun / Quantifiers /Conjunction / Verbs ( to-be ) / Subject-verb Agreement /

    Ques. 19: Adverb / Comparison of Adjective/ Present Tense / Prepositions / Conjunctions

    Ques. 20: Conjunction / Past Tense / Verb / Conjunctions / Determiners

    Ques. 21: Synonyms / Synonyms / Synonyms / Antonyms - Opposites / Antonyms-Opposites

    Ques. 22: Spelling- Object / Description / Mode of Transport / Insects / Vegetables

    Ques. 23: Spelling Part of the body/ Food / Object / Object/ Adjectives

    Ques. 24: Punctuation: Full stop / Apostrophe / Comma / Question marks / Exclamation marks

    Ques. 25: Punctuation: Question marks/ Exclamation marks / Exclamation marks / Exclamation marks /

    Comma

    Section D, Questions 26 30 ( TEXT COMPLETION )

    Yr 2006 2007 2008

    Q. No. 26: Past Tense Q. No. 26: Present Tense No. No 26: Noun

    27: Collective Noun 27: Common Noun 27: Preposition

    28: Preposition 28: Verb 28: Noun29: Noun 29: Adjectives 29: Past Continuous Tense

    30: Adverb 30: Preposition 30: Noun

    Yr 2009 2010

    Q. No, 26: Noun Q. No. 26: Noun

    27: Noun 27: Verbs

    28: Noun 28: Infinitive to

    29: Verbs 29: Prepositions

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    30: Verb-to-be 30: Pronouns

    Section E , Questions 31 40 ( READING AND COMPREHENSION )

    ( NL ) : Non-linear ( L ): Linear

    Qs 31 35 Qs 36 40

    2006 - TV Programme ( NL ) Narrative ( L )

    2007 - Diary ( NL ) Factual ( L )

    2008 - Life Processes ( NL ) Dialogue ( L )

    2009 - Process in making ( NL ) Letter ( L )

    2010 - Notice ( NL ) Narrative ( L )

    Types of Questions Question Number

    2006 2007 2008 2009 2010

    Main Idea

    ( Ide-ide penting ) 33 31 31, 36 - 32

    Specific Information

    ( Maklumat tertentu ) 31 32,39,40 32, 37, 38 31,34,36 31, 33, 34

    Predicting outcomes( Meramalkan hasil-hasil) 32,40 - 33 37, 39 40

    Drawing conclusion

    (Membuat kesimpulan )

    Cause and Effect

    ( sebab dan kesan ) 35 38 40 32, 38, 40 -

    Relationship

    ( Perhubungan ) 34, 37 35 - 35 36, 38

    Vocabulary

    ( Perbendaharaan Kata ) 38 33,37 35,39 33 35, 39

    Inference

    ( Inferens ) 36 34,36 - - 37

    Sequencing

    ( Urutan ) 39 - 34 - -

    Total no. questions 10 10 10 10 10

    __________________________________________________________________________________

    IMPORTANT NOTES & TIPS TO SCORE A

    Section A Questions 1 4 ( a sentence with a missing word )

    You are advised to spend 4 minutes on these questions.

    TYPES OF VOCABULARY ITEMS

    1.Animals ( Gender masculine and feminine ) , animals and their young,Mammals, birds, fishes, reptiles, amphibians, insects, other animals

    2.Animal homes barn, hutch, den, lair , burrow, sty, stable, aviary, apiary,

    3.Places airport, harbour, helipad, quarry, reservoir, landfill, desert, cemetery, sawmill etc

    4.Objects - drawer, screwdriver, spanner, bucket, toothpaste, rake, hoe, microscope etc.

    5.Transport air, land and water transport, hovercraft, raft, scooter, yacht, cable car etc.

    6.Games sports equipment , sports attire , indoor games, outdoor activities, telematch etc.

    7.Clothing traditional costume, vest, jacket, pinafore, dothi , jippa, overall, apron etc.

    8.Footwear sneakers, sandals, slippers, boots, clogs, high-heeled shoes , spikes etc.

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    9.Occupations things ,instruments or tools used by the people

    10.Hobbies collecting stickers, making handicraft, gardening, flower arrangement,

    11.Plants fruit, flowers, trees

    12.Kitchen Utensils ( pestle and mortar, fish slice, gas cylinder, chopping board , saucer etc.)

    13.Relationships ( doctor-patient-nurse, aunt-uncle-niece-nephew, etc.

    14.Buildings description of buildings , parts of the buildings ( minarets, arches, porch etc. )

    15.Food and Drinks

    16.Parts of the body head, arm and leg

    17.Collective nouns for people, things and animals

    18.People Gender ( Masculine and Feminine ) ,

    Samples questions.

    1. The hunter turned his head when he heard the low _____________of a bear.

    A. growl B. bleat C. roar D. bark

    2. Gopal is staying with his ___________because his parents have passed away.

    A. host B. teacher C. friends D. guardian

    3. Karim practices blowing the _____________during his leisure.

    A. drum B. clarinet C. guitar D. cymbal

    Section A Questions 5 7 ( A paragraph is given with 3 blanks . Options are in phrases )

    You are advised to spend only 3 minutes for Questions 5 -7.

    -Understand the paragraphs and the pictures before choosing your answer.

    -Look at the context ( situation ) in the paragraph. Study the pictures carefully. Answer all questions.

    -Check Read the paragraph using the phrases you have chosen.

    Section A Questions 8 10 ( Sentence Level )

    You are advised to spend only 3 minutes on Questions 8 10

    - A picture is given for each question

    - Study the pictures carefully.

    - Make sure the sentence you choose fits the picture given.

    Section B ( Social Expressions )

    Questions 11 15 ( 5 questions with various situations )

    You are advised to spend only 6 minutes on Section B.

    Types of Situations and Responses

    1. Greetings2. Introducing yourself and others

    3. Taking leave

    4. Giving and seeking information

    5. Giving instructions and carrying out instructions

    6. Requesting for objects

    7. Telephone conversations

    8. Other social expressions

    9. Giving directions

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    Tips

    - Understand the situation and the sentences in each picture.

    - Look at the pictures and ask yourself what the people are doing.

    - Read through all the options given before you choose the best option.

    - Use your common sense to decide on the best answer.

    - Make a good guess if you are unsure of the answer.

    Section C ( Grammar )

    Questions 16 21 ( 6 sentences with a missing word in each sentence )

    You are advised to spend only 8 mins. On Questions 16 21 .

    - Pictures may be given for some questions.

    - If no pictures are given, look for clues in the sentence.

    - Make a good guess if you are unsure of the answers.

    - Write the word in the blank and read the sentence aloud.

    - If the sentence is logical and grammatically correct, circle that option as your answer.

    - Answer all questions.

    Grammar Items Tested

    1. Articles

    2. Nouns

    3. Pronouns

    4. Adjectives

    5. Comparison of Adjectives

    6. Adverbs

    7. Prepositions

    8. Conjunctions

    9. WH-questions

    10. Tenses Present Tense, Present Continuous Tense, Past Tense, Past Continuous Tense,

    Past Participle, Future Tense

    11. Verbs Interrogative Verbs, Main Verbs, Verbs-to-be,

    12. Subject-Verb Agreement

    13. Quantifiers

    14. Determiners

    15. Antonyms

    16. Synonyms

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    Section C ( Spelling )

    Questions 22 23 ( 2 sentences with a missing word in each sentence)You are advised to spend 2 mins. on Questions 22 & 23

    - Study the pictures and sentences given.

    - It there are no pictures given, look for clues in the sentence.

    - Check the options given and choose the correct spelling for the missing word.

    - Read the sentence again and check your answers.

    Categories of Words Tested

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    1. Places

    2. Objects

    3. Games

    4. Vehicles mode of transport

    5. Clothing

    6. Occupations

    7. Hobbies

    8. Animals - insects

    9. Relationships

    10. Buildings

    11. Fruit

    12. Vegetables

    13. Food

    14. Adjective description

    15. Food

    16. Drinks

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    Section C ( Punctuation )Questions 24 and 25 ( For each question, 4 sentences are given )

    You are advised to spend only 2 minutes on Questions 24 and 25

    Tips

    -Look at all the options carefully and focus on the punctuation marks.

    -Read each sentence carefully . Make sure that you choose the sentence with the correct punctuation.

    ______________________

    SECTION D ( TEXT COMPLETION )

    Questions 26 30 ( A picture and a short text with 5 missing words )

    You are advised to spend only 6 minutes on Section D

    Tips

    - Study the picture. Read the text carefully.

    - Study the options given for each blank.

    - Get the clues to the answers from the picture and sentences given.

    - Choose the most suitable word to fill in each blank.

    - If you are unsure of the answers, make a good guess.

    - Do not leave any question unanswered.

    Types of Grammar Items Tested

    1. Articles- a,an,the 6. Prepositions along, across, from, against2. Nouns park, beach, broom 7. Conjunctions so, but, while,

    3. Pronouns- they, them, themselves 8. Wh- questions whom , who, what, when

    4. Adjectives beautiful, heavy 9. Tenses Present Continuous

    5. Adverbs- slowly, quickly 10. Subject-Verb Agreement

    11. Collective Nouns herd , swarm , troop, flock

    12. Infinitive-to

    ___________________________

    SECTION E ( READING COMPREHENSION )

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    Questions 31 40 ( 2 Stimuli )

    You are advised to spend only 15 minutes on this section.

    - 5 multiple choice questions are given after each stimuli.

    Questions 31 35 (Non linear ) Questions 36 40 ( Linear )

    1. Notices 1. Letters

    2. Advertisements 2. Speeches

    3. Diary entries 3. Dialogues

    4. Timetables 4. Factual Passages

    5. Maps & Flow Charts 5. Narrative Passages

    Tips

    - Read the text or study the stimulus given carefully.

    - Go through each question and all the options given.

    - Choose the best answer from the options given

    - Circle A,B,C or D to mark the correct answers. Shade the space provided in the answer sheet.

    - Answer all the easy questions first. Then go back to the difficult questions.- Do not waste time. Cross out the options one by one until you get the correct answer.

    ______________________________________

    Types of Questions

    1. Understanding main ideas.

    2. Locating details or specific information

    3. Sequencing ideas / events

    4. Understanding meaning of words

    5. Recognising cause and effect relationships

    6. Predicting outcomes

    7. Drawing conclusions.

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    TIPS TO SCORE A FOR PAPER 2 ( SUBJECTIVE )

    SK English Paper 2 Subjective

    Time 1 hour 15 mins.

    No of questions 3 Total marks 40 marks

    3 Sections Section A, Section B and Section C

    * Pupils are tested on the ability to construct sentences with the correct structure and grammar.

    Pupils with a good command of the language are able to express ideas .

    Section A - Question 1

    - Sentence construction based on given words and graphics.- A composite picture with helping words based on the picture.

    - May use or may not use all the words given

    - Must write 5 sentences based on the picture given.

    Section B Question 2

    - Information transfer question.

    - Pupils have to read and understand information of the 3 items based on the various topics .

    - Question 2 a - Word transfer word and phrase level

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    - Question 2 b - Sentence level while making a preference into grid (b)

    - Remember Spelling , punctuation ( tanda bacaan ) dan legibility ( tulisan yang jelas )

    Section C Question 3

    -Note expansion question.

    -Write a composition in a few paragraphs based on the pictures and words given.

    -Read instructions carefully before answering the question.

    -Pupils who have a good command of English are able to score high marks in this section.

    TIPS ON ANSWERING THE UPSR ENGISH LANGUAGE PAPER

    PAPER 2

    -Look at the pictures and observe the activities and situation in it.

    -The helping words given will help pupils get a general idea of what the situation is in the picture.

    -Pupils may or may not use the helping words to construct sentences in SectionA and C.

    However read the instructions carefully.

    -The sentences must be related to the situation in the pictures.

    -Pupils must be careful with the spelling of words, capital letters and punctuations whentransferring information from the original text.

    -Try not to make grammatical and spelling errors when constructing sentences.

    -Simple sentences, compound sentences and complex sentences can be used to construct sentences.

    -Write in paragraphs for Section C.

    -Do constant revision of your teachers notes , use the dictionary and do a lot of practices in answering

    the English papers. Do not forget to do all your corrections.

    ANALYSIS OF UPSR ENGLISH KERTAS 2 ( 2006- 2010 )

    SECTION A ( Sentence Construction )

    2006 - Topic- In the Kichen

    2007 - At a Durian Stall 2009 Children at Work / Drawing a Mural

    2008 - Preparing for Hari Raya 2010 Student at work / Wrapping Prizes

    SECTION B ( Information Transfer )

    2006 Greeting Cards

    2007 - Outdoor Activities

    2008 - Hobbies

    2009 - Personal Present

    2010 - Holiday Destinations

    SECTION C ( Note Expansion )

    2006 - An Incident : A Burglar Chased by a Goose2007 - A Story : Helping An Old Woman Repair Her House.

    2008 - A Process : Preparing Pickled Papaya

    2009 - A Story : Boy Helping Mother To Sell Nasi Lemak

    2010 - A Story : Buying Ice-cream for a Poor Girl

    IMPORTANT NOTES & TIPS TO SCORE A

    UPSR PAPER 2, Section A Question 1

    ( 1 picture and 10 words are given . Write 5 sentences about the picture. )

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    You are advised to spend 15 minutes on this section.

    TIPS:

    1. Read the instructions carefully.

    2. Study the picture and words given.

    3. Use the words to make 5 complete sentences to describe the picture. You may not use all the words

    given.

    4. Use linkers or sentence connectors and conjunctions where appropriate.

    5. Read the sentences and check if they are logical and grammatically correct.

    6. Make sure the sentences describe the picture logically and correctly.

    7. Make your sentences interesting. You may add adjectives and adverbs.

    8. You must be consistent when using tenses to describe the picture. Eg. Present and Present

    Continuous Tense. Pay attention to Subject-Verb Agreement.

    9. Check your answers and correct any mistakes in grammar, spelling and punctuation.

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    Sample Answers:

    1. The bread vendor, who is wearing a helmet, uses a motorcycle to sell bread , buns and cakes to his

    customers.2. There are many types of bread hung around the container on the motorcycle which is parked under a

    shady tree.

    3. Many children are buying their favourite bread, buns and cakes from the friendly bread vendor.

    4. The hard- working bread vendor gets his supply of bread from a bakery in town.

    5. Two women who are carrying their babies, are walking towards the bread vendor .

    0r

    1. Encik Ahmad, who is a bread vendor goes from place to place on his motorcycle to sell his bread and

    cakes.

    2. He keeps the bread, buns and cakes in a big container behind his motorcycle and hangs some of them

    around it.

    3.His customers are housewives and children who love to buy their favourite breads from him.

    4.Encik Ahmads delicious bread, buns and cakes are made in a famous bakery in town.

    5.A Malay woman and her Chinese neighbour want to buy some bread and they are walking towards

    him.

    Or

    1. The bread vendor sells his bread on a motorcycle.

    2. He parks his motorcycle under a big shady tree.

    3.A few children are buying their favourite bread from him.

    4.There is a big container at the back of his motorcycle.

    5.The two women are carrying their babies.

    MORE USEFUL TIPS TO SCORE A IN SECTION A

    -If you do not know the word given or unsure of its meaning, do not use it.

    -You are not required to write a story.

    -Sentences do not have to be in sequence.

    -The tense used must be consistent.

    -For Section A, pupils may use the Present Continuous Tense to describe the actions that are happening

    at present.

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    -You may name the people in the picture but you must be specific. Eg. Puan Kamariah, who is wearing a

    scarf, is carrying her baby.

    -If there are two boys , you may say , The elder boy is walking away while his younger brother is still

    buying the bread.

    - Do not put yourself in the picture. Avoid writing , My family and I .. or I am very happy.

    -If you wish to use the Past Tense, state the time. Remember, the sentences must be in the Past Tense .

    Look for the words that can guide you.

    Eg. went , bought ,

    Sample Answer

    1. Last Sunday,Encik Ahmad,the bread vendor went to a housing area to sell bread to his customers.

    2. Women and children bought their favourite bread, buns and cakes from him.

    3. There was a big container on his motorcycle and some bread hanging around it.

    4. Encik Ahmad got his fresh and delicious bread from a bakery.

    5. His business was good that day and he was happy.

    Table 1

    Subject + Verb + PredicateThe bread vendor is selling fresh bread, buns and cakes to his customers.

    The children are buying their favourite bread.

    The two women are carrying their babies and walking towards the bread vendor.

    The women and children bought a lot of bread, buns and cakes from Encik Ahmad, the bread vendor.

    CONSTRUCTING COMPOUND SENTENCES

    Construct 2 simple sentences first. Join them together with conjunctions eg. and , so, while,but, because,

    as , when , so that .

    1. The children are buying their favourite bread while their mothers are watching them.

    2. The players are rushing to take shelter because it is raining.

    CONSTRUCTING COMPLEX SENTENCES.

    1. NAME + WHO + ACTION + ACTION

    Latipah, who is wearing a scarf , is sweeping the compound.

    2. NAME + ADJECTIVE + ACTION

    Siti Khatijah, a helpful pupil, is helping her teacher to carry her heavy bag.

    3. NAME + OCCUPATION + ACTION + ACTION

    Encik Ahmad, the bread vendor, who is wearing a helmet, is selling bread and cakes to his customers.

    4. NAME + OCCUPATION + ACTION + WHILE + ACTIONPn Ashah, the teacher, is showing her pupils how to make paper flowers while sitting on the floor.

    5. NAME + DESIGNATION + ACTION + WHILE + ACTION

    Farah and Rani , two active children, are in their tracksuits while waiting for their coach to train them .

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    Scoring Good and Excellent marks for Question 1

    Good marks - 7 and 8

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    - Most sentences are correct.

    - Few single word errors.

    - Few errors in grammar, spelling and punctuation.

    - Ideas are relevant to the picture.

    Excellent marks 9 and 10

    - Simple and compound sentences - Sentences are correct. -

    - Nearly no grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors.

    - Ideas are relevant to the picture.

    PRACTICE FOR QUESTION 2

    Section B Question 2

    ( A stimulus is given. Pictures with short notes are given.

    Complete a table with information from the stimulus.

    Then write a paragraph giving reasons for a choice made. )

    You are advised to spend 25 minutes on this section.

    TIPS

    1. Read the instructions and information given carefully.2. For Question 2 a , look at the table and find the information you need to complete the table.

    Look for key words. Refer to the answers given as examples to follow.

    3. Transfer the information to the blanks in the table. Check your spelling, grammar and

    punctuation . Write neatly and clearly.

    4. For Question 2 b, choose one option from the choices given.

    There is no right or wrong choice. You must try to give good reasons for making your choice.

    5. You can use the information from the table to help you list out reasons for your choice.

    6. You do not have to make a comparison with the other items.

    7. List down the points and reasons .

    8. Use a variety of sentences; simple and compound.

    9. Use adjectives to make the description more interesting.

    10. Use linkers to give the description a smoother flow. ( Besides, Therefore, Moreover etc. ) However,

    use them appropriately ;and not for every sentence.

    SCORING

    1. Question 2 a Full marks is 10.

    1 mark for each correct answer. No mark for an answer with spelling errors.

    2. Question 2 b- Full marks is 5

    Good mark - 4

    - Language used is good.

    - Simple and compound sentences.

    - Some errors. Most reasons are well planned, relevant and clear.- Some punctuation and spelling errors.

    - Meaning is still clear.

    Excellent mark - 5

    - Language used is very good.

    - Hardly any errors.

    - Reasons are clear and well planned, relevant and interesting.

    - Simple and compound sentences.

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    - Spelling and punctuation correct.

    SUGGESTED SENTENCES FOR ANSWERING QUESTION 2 B

    ( APPLY THEM APPROPRIATELY )

    1. Price / Fee / Fare / Cost

    The price is low .

    The handbag is cheap. It costs RM20.

    It is the cheapest among the three . (items )

    The price is RM70. Although the racquet is expensive, it is affordable.

    It is a reasonable fee and I think I can afford it.

    The price, which is RM50, is reasonable and affordable.

    The fee is not too expensive. Furthermore, I will get a RM10 discount if I register early. This means I will

    pay less.

    The whole chicken costs RM12 each and it is the cheapest of all.

    It is worth buying.

    I would choose SMART Tuition Centre because its fees is the lowest of all.

    Although the price of the kitten is qui te costly, I will get a lovely basket for free.

    It is very economical to choose Package A because the price is within my budget. 2.

    Occupations

    I like to be a teacher when I grow up because I can impart knowledge to pupils.

    I prefer to be a doctorwhen I grow up because I can treat sick people and save lives.

    I can contribute my service to the poor people .

    Being a pilot is interesting because I get to travel around the world. I can visit many different countries

    all over the world. Besides, I can meet many kinds of people and learn

    about their culture and traditions.

    I choose to be a policeman because I can keep law and order. It is my responsibility to keep the town

    safe and peaceful. This job is challenging although it is sometimes dangerous.

    This job is enjoyable and I get to meet many people.

    This occupation is suitable for me. / It suits me.

    It is highly paid. / The salary is high.

    The qualification needed is a university degree.

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    3. Houses / Homestay

    The double-storey house in Taman Sri Selama is located quite near my school. It is convenient to go to

    school because there is an efficient bus service in this area.

    The semi-detached bungalow is the most spacious of all the houses. Therefore, it is the most suitable

    for my elder sisters big family. I am sure she and her family will feel comfortable living in it.

    I prefer the house on the hill over looking the park because of the beautiful scenery and peacefulsurroundings.

    Living in a terrace house is interesting because we have many friendly neighbours who can help one

    another.

    In addition, there is a small garden in front of the house, where we can grow many colourful flowering

    plants.

    My father will like this house because the porch in front is big enough for parking two cars.

    The security around this apartment is tight and my family will feel safe living here. Moreover, there are

    many facilities around such as a hair saloon, gymnasium and a mini-market. Therefore, it is very

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    convenient for us.

    I would choose Homestay Sg. Bayor because my uncles family loves the countryside. The surroundings

    are green and the scenery is beautiful. Besides, it is quiet and peaceful. My uncles family can experience

    feeding the animals on the farm and plucking rambutans from the orchard. The package is for 3 days and

    2 nights, which is sufficient for my uncles family.

    Staying in Homestay Amanda will be a wonderful experience for my sisters pen pal and her family who

    love nature. This place is quite far from the city and it is located near a jungle. The air is fresh and cool.

    They can enjoy jungle-trekking and looking at the beautiful flowers and plants. They can take

    photographs of many insects too.

    4. Activities

    I prefer outdoor activities to indoor activities because they are more exciting, adventurous and

    challenging.

    I can enjoy the fresh air while cycling around the neighbourhood.

    Working indoor is more comfortable and I am protected from the sun and rain.

    Swimming is a good form of exercise because it strengthens the muscles of every part of the body. It

    keeps me fit and healthy.

    Collecting stamps is interesting and beneficial. We can gain a lot of knowledge about countries all overthe world.

    Reading can improve our general knowledge, vocabulary and grammar. I can become more

    knowledgeable.

    Singing is entertaining and fun. It is my favourite activity and I am very talented in singing.

    Joining the Music Club gives the chance to play musical instruments and make new friends.

    Co-curricular activities help me to become an active , responsible and disciplined person.

    I get the chance to represent my school in sports . I can keep up the good name of my school. I will be

    proud if I win the first prize in the sports meet.

    5.

    Clothing / Shoes

    I would choose the POLO sports shirt for my father because it is suitable for him. He can wear it when

    he goes for his sports activities. It makes him look stylish and sporty. It is comfortable to wear.

    The long-sleeved shirt suits my father well as he will look smart in it. Besides, he can wear it to

    important functions like meetings and business trips.

    The batik shirt has beautifully-designed patterns and it is very attractive. It is made of good quality silk

    material. It looks elegant.

    I would choose the long skirt with flowered patterns for my mother because she will look beautiful in it.

    Besides, it is fashionable and attractive. My mother can wear it when she attends a party with her friends.

    The sizes are large and medium. The large size fits me well.

    The free gift is a wallet. It is very useful .

    SPARK shoes are comfortable for my brother to wear. They are made from good quality leather so they

    will last longer. Moreover, SPARK is the most popular brand among children today. My brother can wearthem to school or for an outing.

    The Happyfit sandals come in three colours which are pink, yellow and white. So, I am going to choose

    pink as it is my favourite colour. These sandals are made in Malaysia and I prefer local products. I can

    walk comfortably in them.

    It is trendy .

    It is durable because it is made from good quality material.

    6. Fruits

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    I would choose the durian as it is my familys favourite fruit . Its flesh is creamy and

    delicious. It is rich in carbohydrates and vitamin. It is known as, The King of Fruits and is very popular

    during the durian season.

    The orange contains Vitamin C which keeps us healthy. We can either eat it fresh or make it into a drink.

    We can buy them from the market or supermarket.

    Eating fresh fruits is good for health. We will not fall sick easily if we eat fresh fruits every day. I prefer

    local fruits because they are cheaper and fresher.

    I prefer the sweet and sour juicy mangoes. They are rich in vitamins. It i s good to eat them when they

    are fresh. Mango juice is a popular drink too.

    7. Shows / Movie / TV programme

    It is an interesting show / movie / TV programme and it is my favourite

    It is educational and I can gain a lot of knowledge from it.

    It is suitable for children like me. I can learn good moral values from the movie.

    It is entertaining and I would enjoy watching it. Laughing is good and I can release stress.

    This documentary provides me a lot of knowledge about sea animals and marine life.

    The ticket price is RM10 for an adult and RM6 for a child and it is reasonable.

    It is shown at the Star Cineplex which is a walking distance away from my house. The 5.00 pm show is suitable for me as I am free at that time.

    * Task .

    Practise writing notes for the following topics and others:

    - Trees ( fruit tree , flowering plant , ferns )

    - Pets ( hamster , kitten , bird , fish )

    - Events ( car race , mountain-climbing , canoe race )

    - Books ( adventure , hobbies , grammar , magazine, encyclopedia , dictionary )

    - Toys ( soft toy , jigsaw-puzzle , remote-controlled car )

    - Food ( burger , sponge cake , muffins )

    - Transport ( coach , train , plane )

    - Objects ( watch , wallet, neck-tie , pen , handbag, computer )

    - Traditional Games ( top-spinning , kite flying , marbles )

    - Outdoor Games ( football, hockey , handball , netball, volleyball )

    - Indoor Games ( scrabble , chess, snake and ladder , monopoly , computer game )

    - Hobbies ( painting , drawing cartoons, gardening , sewing, cooking, collecting coins )

    - Package Tours to holiday destinations ( Genting Highlands , Langkawi Island , Malacca , Penang Island

    )

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    POINT REASONFancy Blouse

    Price: Only RM65.70

    Material : Cotton

    Free: Purse

    Available in four colours

    light blue, light green, light yellow, pink and brown.

    Price: The price is RM65.70. It is reasonable and affordable.

    Material The material is cotton and it is suitable for me. Besides, it

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    is comfortable to wear.

    Free The gift is a purse.It is useful as I can keep my coins in

    it.

    Colours It comes in four colours. They are light blue, light green,

    light yellow, pink and brown. My favourite colour is light blue.

    _______________________________

    PRACTICE FOR PAPER 2 QUESTION 3

    Section C Question 3

    ( Pictures with short notes are given .

    Write sentences to describe the pictures given.

    Use the notes given to help you write the sentences )

    You are advised to spend 35 minutes on this section.

    TIPS

    1. Read the instructions carefully.

    2. Look at the pictures carefully.3. Read and understand the notes given for each picture. Understand the story.

    4. Pay attention to the words given to give you a clue to what tense to use.

    5. Try to use the same tense throughout. The introduction maybe in Present Tense if you are describing

    the main character of the story.

    6. Using the notes given , write 3 or 4 paragraphs to describe the pictures or story. Write neatly.

    7. Have an opening and a closure.

    8. Write a variety of sentences. Use simple, compound and complex sentences.

    9. Write creatively. Use proper vocabulary to express your ideas.

    10. Use adjectives and adverbs to make them interesting.

    11. If you are confident, use idioms, similies or proverbs.

    12. Your sentences should link well so that your story has a smooth flow in your story.

    ( Meanwhile, Within a few minutes, As he was walking home, Immediately, Firstly,Then, After that ,

    Suddenly , etc )

    13. Check for mistakes in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Check that you have used the full -stop,

    comma and capital letters.

    14. Use the correct sentence structures.

    15. You may change the order of the words as long as the meaning is clear.

    16. Plan your ideas well. Do not repeat your ideas.

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    Table 3 ( TSVC )

    TIME SUBJECT VERB COMPLEMENTA few days ago, Encik Mat Zen fetched his family to Lake Gardens.

    Table 4

    SUBJECT VERB PREDICATE

    There was an accident in the busy town this morning.

    A lorry knocked down a small boy who was cycling.

    The boy was unconscious and seriously injured.

    In a short while an ambulance arrived and rushed him to the hospital.

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    The boys parents went hurriedly to see their son.

    The doctors saved their son's life.

    The boys parents thanked them gratefully.

    The boy had to be treated in the hospital until he recovered.

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    MARKS FOR PAPER 2 QUESTION 3

    Full Marks - 15

    Excellent - 13 15 Language used is very good. Ideas are clear,

    well-planned and interesting. Simple, compound and

    complex sentences.New words are used. No spelling and

    punctuation errors.

    Good 9 12 Language used is good. Tried to make simple, compound

    and complex sentences. Some errors made. Most ideas

    are well-planned, relevant and clear. New words are

    used. Some spelling and punctuation errors. Meaning isclear

    Average 5 8 Language used is correct. Simple sentences with errors.

    Meaning is clear. Ideas are quite good and vocabulary

    is enough.Vocabulary is adequate to convey meaning. A

    few punctuation and spelling errors.

    TIPS TO SCORE A FOR PAPER 1 ( OBJECTIVE )

    SK English Paper 1 Objective Paper

    Time 50 mins Total marks 40 marks

    No of questions 40 . Choose the correct or best answer marked A, B, C or D. Then, on the

    answer sheet , darken the space of the letter of the answer that has been chosen. Also circle the

    letter on the question paper.

    Questions 1 10

    Vocabulary word, phrase or sentence level.

    Questions stimuli based with or without graphics.

    Questions 11 15

    Social and language expression.

    - correct social expression with clues

    - suitable vocabulary on given situations- parts of speech based on clues.

    Questions are based on pictures showing common social situations. Study each picture carefully,

    make sure of the situation. Choose appropriate response that fits the situation.

    Questions 16 25

    Grammar

    - grammatical items, spelling and punctuation.

    - synonyms and antonyms

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    - questions stimuli based with graphics.

    Questions 26 30

    Text Completion.

    - A cloze passage a picture is given.

    - 5 blanks test on the use of parts of speech ( grammar ) visual and textual clues. Look carefully and

    choose the correct answers.

    Questions 31 40

    Reading and Comprehension. ( 10 multiple choice questions , 2 passages. )

    - a non-linear passage and a linear passage.

    Reading skills :

    - main idea - specific information

    - cause and effect relationships - drawing conclusions

    - predicting outcomes - sequencing

    - vocabulary - inference

    TIP : To score excellently well , pupils must think beyond the text. Use own experience andknowledge in order to answer the questions correctly.

    TIPS ON ANSWERING THE UPSR ENGLISH LANGUAGE PAPER 1

    1. Read and understand the questions.

    2. Look at the pictures or graphics given and relate them to the answers given.

    3. Pupils have to understand the situation and dialogue before choosing the correct response that fits the

    situation in the picture.

    4. Look at all the punctuation marks.

    5. Cloze passage look carefully at the picture.

    6. Read the passage at least twice to get a general idea.

    7. Read all the options A, B, C, D before choosing the best answer.

    8. Answer all the questions given.

    9. Comprehension question -Pupils should read the passage at least twice so that they understand it

    better.

    ANALYSIS OF UPSR ENGLISH LANGUAGE PAPER 1 ( 2006- 2010 )

    Section A ,Questions 1 10 ( VOCABULARY )

    Question No 1 : Animals, footwear, plants , adverbs, places

    Question No 2 : Footwear, place, transport, clothes, adjectives

    Question No 3 : Kitchen utensils, relationship, animals, verbs (past tense ), animals (home )

    Question No 4 : Objects, animals, occupation, animals, adverb of mannerQuestions No 5 7: Fishing, Personal hygiene, Gardening , Having dinner at a restaurant

    Question No 8 : Situation At a stall, Stroking a cat, Having breakfast, In the bedroom, In the garden.

    Question No 9: Situation Mending shoes, Returning a wallet, Hanging the clothes, In the

    garden,painting

    Question No 10: Situation Playing with rabbits, Mowing the lawn,Missed the bus,

    Baking a cake, Tapping the rubber tree.

    Section B , Questions 11 15 ( SOCIAL AND LANGUAGE EXPRESSIONS )

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    Question No 11: How is your new school? ( To enquire ) / Does it fit you? ( To enquire )

    I enjoyed the chicken curry. ( To confirm ) / Thank you for switching on the

    light . ( To express gratitude ) / I did , but its too spicy. ( To explain )

    Question No 12: It will start at any time. ( To inform ) / I would suggest these roses. ( To suggest)

    I would like another piece. ( To request ) / Ill help you to look for them .

    ( To offer ) / These hibiscus are beautiful, arent they? ( To ask for confirmation)

    Question No 13: Where did you buy the blouse? ( To enquire ) / Go straight and take the first junction. (

    To explain) / Theres someone at the door. ( To explain ) /

    Its alright! I can manage. ( To decline ) / Where is the nearest bus stop?

    ( To enquire )

    Question No 14 : Which one would you like? ( To offer ) / Oh, how kind of you .

    ( To express gratitude. ) / Let me give you a hand. ( To offer ) / Jenny bought it at the new bakery. ( To

    inform ) / Pleased to meet you. ( To greet )

    Question No 15: I cant find my keys. ( To inform ) / I need a room for tonight. ( To request )/ Ill take you to the clinic. ( To inform) / Let me check it for you. ( To offer )/

    Please help me clean the hutch. ( To request )

    Section C , Questions 16 - 25 ( GRAMMAR , SPELLING & PUNCTUATI ON )

    Ques. 16: Comparison of adjective / Adverbs / Adverbs / Articles/ Articles

    Ques. 17: Preposition /Adjectives / Adjectives / Verbs ( Interrogative ) / Main Verbs

    Ques. 18: Pronoun / Quantifiers /Conjunction / Verbs ( to-be ) / Subject-verb Agreement /

    Ques. 19: Adverb / Comparison of Adjective/ Present Tense / Prepositions / Conjunctions

    Ques. 20: Conjunction / Past Tense / Verb / Conjunctions / Determiners

    Ques. 21: Synonyms / Synonyms / Synonyms / Antonyms - Opposites / Antonyms-Opposites

    Ques. 22: Spelling- Object / Description / Mode of Transport / Insects / Vegetables

    Ques. 23: Spelling Part of the body/ Food / Object / Object/ Adjectives

    Ques. 24: Punctuation: Full stop / Apostrophe / Comma / Question marks / Exclamation marks

    Ques. 25: Punctuation: Question marks/ Exclamation marks / Exclamation marks / Exclamation marks /

    Comma

    Section D, Questions 26 30 ( TEXT COMPLETION )

    Yr 2006 2007 2008

    Q. No. 26: Past Tense Q. No. 26: Present Tense No. No 26: Noun

    27: Collective Noun 27: Common Noun 27: Preposition

    28: Preposition 28: Verb 28: Noun

    29: Noun 29: Adjectives 29: Past Continuous Tense30: Adverb 30: Preposition 30: Noun

    Yr 2009 2010

    Q. No, 26: Noun Q. No. 26: Noun

    27: Noun 27: Verbs

    28: Noun 28: Infinitive to

    29: Verbs 29: Prepositions

    30: Verb-to-be 30: Pronouns

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    Section E , Questions 31 40 ( READING AND COMPREHENSION )

    ( NL ) : Non-linear ( L ): Linear

    Qs 31 35 Qs 36 40

    2006 - TV Programme ( NL ) Narrative ( L )

    2007 - Diary ( NL ) Factual ( L )

    2008 - Life Processes ( NL ) Dialogue ( L )

    2009 - Process in making ( NL ) Letter ( L )

    2010 - Notice ( NL ) Narrative ( L )

    Types of Questions Question Number

    2006 2007 2008 2009 2010

    Main Idea

    ( Ide-ide penting ) 33 31 31, 36 - 32

    Specific Information

    ( Maklumat tertentu ) 31 32,39,40 32, 37, 38 31,34,36 31, 33, 34

    Predicting outcomes

    ( Meramalkan hasil-hasil) 32,40 - 33 37, 39 40Drawing conclusion

    (Membuat kesimpulan )

    Cause and Effect

    ( sebab dan kesan ) 35 38 40 32, 38, 40 -

    Relationship

    ( Perhubungan ) 34, 37 35 - 35 36, 38

    Vocabulary

    ( Perbendaharaan Kata ) 38 33,37 35,39 33 35, 39

    Inference

    ( Inferens ) 36 34,36 - - 37

    Sequencing

    ( Urutan ) 39 - 34 - -

    Total no. questions 10 10 10 10 10

    __________________________________________________________________________________

    IMPORTANT NOTES & TIPS TO SCORE A

    Section A Questions 1 4 ( a sentence with a missing word )

    You are advised to spend 4 minutes on these questions.

    TYPES OF VOCABULARY ITEMS

    1.Animals ( Gender masculine and feminine ) , animals and their young,

    Mammals, birds, fishes, reptiles, amphibians, insects, other animals2.Animal homes barn, hutch, den, lair , burrow, sty, stable, aviary, apiary,

    3.Places airport, harbour, helipad, quarry, reservoir, landfill, desert, cemetery, sawmill etc

    4.Objects - drawer, screwdriver, spanner, bucket, toothpaste, rake, hoe, microscope etc.

    5.Transport air, land and water transport, hovercraft, raft, scooter, yacht, cable car etc.

    6.Games sports equipment , sports attire , indoor games, outdoor activities, telematch etc.

    7.Clothing traditional costume, vest, jacket, pinafore, dothi , jippa, overall, apron etc.

    8.Footwear sneakers, sandals, slippers, boots, clogs, high-heeled shoes , spikes etc.

    9.Occupations things ,instruments or tools used by the people

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    10.Hobbies collecting stickers, making handicraft, gardening, flower arrangement,

    11.Plants fruit, flowers, trees

    12.Kitchen Utensils ( pestle and mortar, fish slice, gas cylinder, chopping board , saucer etc.)

    13.Relationships ( doctor-patient-nurse, aunt-uncle-niece-nephew, etc.

    14.Buildings description of buildings , parts of the buildings ( minarets, arches, porch etc. )

    15.Food and Drinks

    16.Parts of the body head, arm and leg

    17.Collective nouns for people, things and animals

    18.People Gender ( Masculine and Feminine ) ,

    Samples questions.

    1. The hunter turned his head when he heard the low _____________of a bear.

    A. growl B. bleat C. roar D. bark

    2. Gopal is staying with his ___________because his parents have passed away.

    A. host B. teacher C. friends D. guardian

    3. Karim practices blowing the _____________during his leisure.

    A. drum B. clarinet C. guitar D. cymbal

    Section A Questions 5 7 ( A paragraph is given with 3 blanks . Options are in phrases )

    You are advised to spend only 3 minutes for Questions 5 -7.

    -Understand the paragraphs and the pictures before choosing your answer.

    -Look at the context ( situation ) in the paragraph. Study the pictures carefully. Answer all questions.

    -Check Read the paragraph using the phrases you have chosen.

    Section A Questions 8 10 ( Sentence Level )

    You are advised to spend only 3 minutes on Questions 8 10

    - A picture is given for each question

    - Study the pictures carefully.

    - Make sure the sentence you choose fits the picture given.

    Section B ( Social Expressions )

    Questions 11 15 ( 5 questions with various situations )

    You are advised to spend only 6 minutes on Section B.

    Types of Situations and Responses

    1. Greetings

    2. Introducing yourself and others3. Taking leave

    4. Giving and seeking information

    5. Giving instructions and carrying out instructions

    6. Requesting for objects

    7. Telephone conversations

    8. Other social expressions

    9. Giving directions

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    Tips

    - Understand the situation and the sentences in each picture.

    - Look at the pictures and ask yourself what the people are doing.

    - Read through all the options given before you choose the best option.

    - Use your common sense to decide on the best answer.

    - Make a good guess if you are unsure of the answer.

    Section C ( Grammar )

    Questions 16 21 ( 6 sentences with a missing word in each sentence )

    You are advised to spend only 8 mins. On Questions 16 21 .

    - Pictures may be given for some questions.

    - If no pictures are given, look for clues in the sentence.

    - Make a good guess if you are unsure of the answers.

    - Write the word in the blank and read the sentence aloud.

    - If the sentence is logical and grammatically correct, circle that option as your answer.

    - Answer all questions.

    Grammar Items Tested

    1. Articles

    2. Nouns

    3. Pronouns

    4. Adjectives

    5. Comparison of Adjectives

    6. Adverbs

    7. Prepositions

    8. Conjunctions

    9. WH-questions

    10. Tenses Present Tense, Present Continuous Tense, Past Tense, Past Continuous Tense,

    Past Participle, Future Tense

    11. Verbs Interrogative Verbs, Main Verbs, Verbs-to-be,

    12. Subject-Verb Agreement

    13. Quantifiers

    14. Determiners

    15. Antonyms

    16. Synonyms

    ----------------------------

    Section C ( Spelling )

    Questions 22 23 ( 2 sentences with a missing word in each sentence)

    You are advised to spend 2 mins. on Questions 22 & 23

    - Study the pictures and sentences given.

    - It there are no pictures given, look for clues in the sentence.

    - Check the options given and choose the correct spelling for the missing word.

    - Read the sentence again and check your answers.

    Categories of Words Tested

    1. Places

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    2. Objects

    3. Games

    4. Vehicles mode of transport

    5. Clothing

    6. Occupations

    7. Hobbies

    8. Animals - insects

    9. Relationships

    10. Buildings

    11. Fruit

    12. Vegetables

    13. Food

    14. Adjective description

    15. Food

    16. Drinks

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    Section C ( Punctuation )

    Questions 24 and 25 ( For each question, 4 sentences are given )You are advised to spend only 2 minutes on Questions 24 and 25

    Tips

    -Look at all the options carefully and focus on the punctuation marks.

    -Read each sentence carefully . Make sure that you choose the sentence with the correct punctuation.

    ______________________

    SECTION D ( TEXT COMPLETION )

    Questions 26 30 ( A picture and a short text with 5 missing words )

    You are advised to spend only 6 minutes on Section D

    Tips

    - Study the picture. Read the text carefully.

    - Study the options given for each blank.

    - Get the clues to the answers from the picture and sentences given.

    - Choose the most suitable word to fill in each blank.

    - If you are unsure of the answers, make a good guess.

    - Do not leave any question unanswered.

    Types of Grammar Items Tested

    1. Articles- a,an,the 6. Prepositions along, across, from, against

    2. Nouns park, beach, broom 7. Conjunctions so, but, while,3. Pronouns- they, them, themselves 8. Wh- questions whom , who, what, when

    4. Adjectives beautiful, heavy 9. Tenses Present Continuous

    5. Adverbs- slowly, quickly 10. Subject-Verb Agreement

    11. Collective Nouns herd , swarm , troop, flock

    12. Infinitive-to

    ___________________________

    SECTION E ( READING COMPREHENSION )

    Questions 31 40 ( 2 Stimuli )

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    You are advised to spend only 15 minutes on this section.

    - 5 multiple choice questions are given after each stimuli.

    Questions 31 35 (Non linear ) Questions 36 40 ( Linear )

    1. Notices 1. Letters

    2. Advertisements 2. Speeches

    3. Diary entries 3. Dialogues

    4. Timetables 4. Factual Passages

    5. Maps & Flow Charts 5. Narrative Passages

    Tips

    - Read the text or study the stimulus given carefully.

    - Go through each question and all the options given.

    - Choose the best answer from the options given

    - Circle A,B,C or D to mark the correct answers. Shade the space provided in the answer sheet.

    - Answer all the easy questions first. Then go back to the difficult questions.

    - Do not waste time. Cross out the options one by one until you get the correct answer.______________________________________

    Types of Questions

    1. Understanding main ideas.

    2. Locating details or specific information

    3. Sequencing ideas / events

    4. Understanding meaning of words

    5. Recognising cause and effect relationships

    6. Predicting outcomes

    7. Drawing conclusions.

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    TIPS TO SCORE A FOR PAPER 2 ( SUBJECTIVE )

    SK English Paper 2 Subjective

    Time 1 hour 15 mins.

    No of questions 3 Total marks 40 marks

    3 Sections Section A, Section B and Section C

    * Pupils are tested on the ability to construct sentences with the correct structure and grammar.

    Pupils with a good command of the language are able to express ideas .

    Section A - Question 1

    - Sentence construction based on given words and graphics.

    - A composite picture with helping words based on the picture.- May use or may not use all the words given

    - Must write 5 sentences based on the picture given.

    Section B Question 2

    - Information transfer question.

    - Pupils have to read and understand information of the 3 items based on the various topics .

    - Question 2 a - Word transfer word and phrase level

    - Question 2 b - Sentence level while making a preference into grid (b)

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    - Remember Spelling , punctuation ( tanda bacaan ) dan legibility ( tulisan yang jelas )

    Section C Question 3

    -Note expansion question.

    -Write a composition in a few paragraphs based on the pictures and words given.

    -Read instructions carefully before answering the question.

    -Pupils who have a good command of English are able to score high marks in this section.

    TIPS ON ANSWERING THE UPSR ENGISH LANGUAGE PAPER

    PAPER 2

    -Look at the pictures and observe the activities and situation in it.

    -The helping words given will help pupils get a general idea of what the situation is in the picture.

    -Pupils may or may not use the helping words to construct sentences in SectionA and C.

    However read the instructions carefully.

    -The sentences must be related to the situation in the pictures.

    -Pupils must be careful with the spelling of words, capital letters and punctuations when

    transferring information from the original text.-Try not to make grammatical and spelling errors when constructing sentences.

    -Simple sentences, compound sentences and complex sentences can be used to construct sentences.

    -Write in paragraphs for Section C.

    -Do constant revision of your teachers notes , use the dictionary and do a lot of practices in answering

    the English papers. Do not forget to do all your corrections.

    ANALYSIS OF UPSR ENGLISH KERTAS 2 ( 2006- 2010 )

    SECTION A ( Sentence Construction )

    2006 - Topic- In the Kichen

    2007 - At a Durian Stall 2009 Children at Work / Drawing a Mural

    2008 - Preparing for Hari Raya 2010 Student at work / Wrapping Prizes

    SECTION C ( Information Transfer )

    2006 Greeting Cards

    2007 - Outdoor Activities

    2008 - Hobbies

    2009 - Personal Present

    2010 - Holiday Destinations

    SECTION D ( Note Expansion )

    2006 - An Incident : A Burglar Chased by a Goose

    2007 - A Story : Helping An Old Woman Repair Her House.2008 - A Process : Preparing Pickled Papaya

    2009 - A Story : Boy Helping Mother To Sell Nasi Lemak

    2010 - A Story : Buying Ice-cream for a Poor Girl

    IMPORTANT NOTES & TIPS TO SCORE A

    UPSR PAPER 2, Section A Question 1

    ( 1 picture and 10 words are given . Write 5 sentences about the picture. )

    You are advised to spend 15 minutes on this section.

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    TIPS:

    1. Read the instructions carefully.

    2. Study the picture and words given.

    3. Use the words to make 5 complete sentences to describe the picture. You may not use all the words

    given.

    4. Use linkers or sentence connectors and conjunctions where appropriate.

    5. Read the sentences and check if they are logical and grammatically correct.

    6. Make sure the sentences describe the picture logically and correctly.

    7. Make your sentences interesting. You may add adjectives and adverbs.

    8. You must be consistent when using tenses to describe the picture. Eg. Present and Present

    Continuous Tense. Pay attention to Subject-Verb Agreement.

    9. Check your answers and correct any mistakes in grammar, spelling and punctuation.

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    Sample Answers:

    1. The bread vendor, who is wearing a helmet, uses a motorcycle to sell bread , buns and cakes to his

    customers.

    2. There are many types of bread hung around the container on the motorcycle which is parked under ashady tree.

    3. Many children are buying their favourite bread, buns and cakes from the friendly bread vendor.

    4. The hard- working bread vendor gets his supply of bread from a bakery in town.

    5. Two women who are carrying their babies, are walking towards the bread vendor .

    0r

    1. Encik Ahmad, who is a bread vendor goes from place to place on his motorcycle to sell his bread and

    cakes.

    2. He keeps the bread, buns and cakes in a big container behind his motorcycle and hangs some of them

    around it.

    3.His customers are housewives and children who love to buy their favourite breads from him.

    4.EncikAhmads delicious bread, buns and cakes are made in a famous bakery in town.

    5.A Malay woman and her Chinese neighbour want to buy some bread and they are walking towards

    him.

    Or

    1. The bread vendor sells his bread on a motorcycle.

    2. He parks his motorcycle under a big shady tree.

    3.A few children are buying their favourite bread from him.

    4.There is a big container at the back of his motorcycle.

    5.The two women are carrying their babies.

    MORE USEFUL TIPS TO SCORE A IN SECTION A

    -If you do not know the word given or unsure of its meaning, do not use it.

    -You are not required to write a story.

    -Sentences do not have to be in sequence.

    -The tense used must be consistent.

    -For Section A, pupils may use the Present Continuous Tense to describe the actions that are happening

    at present.

    -You may name the people in the picture but you must be specific. Eg. Puan Kamariah, who is wearing a

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    scarf, is carrying her baby.

    -If there are two boys , you may say , The elder boy is walking away while his you nger brother is still

    buying the bread.

    - Do not put yourself in the picture. Avoid writing , My family and I .. or I am very happy.

    -If you wish to use the Past Tense, state the time. Remember, the sentences must be in the Past Tense .

    Look for the words that can guide you.

    Eg. went , bought ,

    Sample Answer

    1. Last Sunday,Encik Ahmad,the bread vendor went to a housing area to sell bread to his customers.

    2. Women and children bought their favourite bread, buns and cakes from him.

    3. There was a big container on his motorcycle and some bread hanging around it.

    4. Encik Ahmad got his fresh and delicious bread from a bakery.

    5. His business was good that day and he was happy.

    Table 1

    Subject + Verb + Predicate

    The bread vendor is selling fresh bread, buns and cakes to his customers.The children are buying their favourite bread.

    The two women are carrying their babies and walking towards the bread vendor.

    The women and children bought a lot of bread, buns and cakes from Encik Ahmad, the bread vendor.

    CONSTRUCTING COMPOUND SENTENCES

    Construct 2 simple sentences first. Join them together with conjunctions eg. and , so, while,but, because,

    as , when , so that .

    1. The children are buying their favourite bread while their mothers are watching them.

    2. The players are rushing to take shelter because it is raining.

    CONSTRUCTING COMPLEX SENTENCES.

    1. NAME + WHO + ACTION + ACTION

    Latipah, who is wearing a scarf , is sweeping the compound.

    2. NAME + ADJECTIVE + ACTION

    Siti Khatijah, a helpful pupil, is helping her teacher to carry her heavy bag.

    3. NAME + OCCUPATION + ACTION + ACTION

    Encik Ahmad, the bread vendor, who is wearing a helmet, is selling bread and cakes to his customers.

    4. NAME + OCCUPATION + ACTION + WHILE + ACTION

    Pn Ashah, the teacher, is showing her pupils how to make paper flowers while sitting on the floor.

    5. NAME + DESIGNATION + ACTION + WHILE + ACTION

    Farah and Rani , two active children, are in their tracksuits while waiting for their coach to train them .

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    Scoring Good and Excellent marks for Question 1

    Good marks - 7 and 8

    - Most sentences are correct.

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    - Few single word errors.

    - Few errors in grammar, spelling and punctuation.

    - Ideas are relevant to the picture.

    Excellent marks 9 and 10

    - Simple and compound sentences - Sentences are correct. -

    - Nearly no grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors.

    - Ideas are relevant to the picture.

    PRACTICE FOR QUESTION 2

    Section B Question 2

    ( A stimulus is given. Pictures with short notes are given.

    Complete a table with information from the stimulus.

    Then write a paragraph giving reasons for a choice made. )

    You are advised to spend 25 minutes on this section.

    TIPS

    1. Read the instructions and information given carefully.

    2. For Question 2 a , look at the table and find the information you need to complete the table.Look for key words. Refer to the answers given as examples to follow.

    3. Transfer the information to the blanks in the table. Check your spelling, grammar and

    punctuation . Write neatly and clearly.

    4. For Question 2 b, choose one option from the choices given.

    There is no right or wrong choice. You must try to give good reasons for making your choice.

    5. You can use the information from the table to help you list out reasons for your choice.

    6. You do not have to make a comparison with the other items.

    7. List down the points and reasons .

    8. Use a variety of sentences; simple and compound.

    9. Use adjectives to make the description more interesting.

    10. Use linkers to give the description a smoother flow. ( Besides, Therefore, Moreover etc. ) However,

    use them appropriately ;and not for every sentence.

    SCORING

    1. Question 2 a Full marks is 10.

    1 mark for each correct answer. No mark for an answer with spelling errors.

    2. Question 2 b- Full marks is 5

    Good mark - 4

    - Language used is good.

    - Simple and compound sentences.

    - Some errors. Most reasons are well planned, relevant and clear.

    - Some punctuation and spelling errors.- Meaning is still clear.

    Excellent mark - 5

    - Language used is very good.

    - Hardly any errors.

    - Reasons are clear and well planned, relevant and interesting.

    - Simple and compound sentences.

    - Spelling and punctuation correct.

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    SUGGESTED SENTENCES FOR ANSWERING QUESTION 2 B

    ( APPLY THEM APPROPRIATELY )

    1. Price / Fee / Fare / Cost

    The price is low .

    The handbag is cheap. It costs RM20.

    It is the cheapest among the three . (items )

    The price is RM70. Although the racquet is expensive, it is affordable.

    It is a reasonable fee and I think I can afford it.

    The price, which is RM50, is reasonable and affordable.

    The fee is not too expensive. Furthermore, I will get a RM10 discount if I register early. This means I will

    pay less.

    The whole chicken costs RM12 each and it is the cheapest of all.

    It is worth buying.

    I would choose SMART Tuition Centre because its fees is the lowest of all.

    Although the price of the kitten is quite costly, I will get a lovely basket for free.

    It is very economical to choose Package A because the price is within my budget.

    2.Occupations

    I like to be a teacher when I grow up because I can impart knowledge to pupils.

    I prefer to be a doctor when I grow up because I can treat sick people and save lives.

    I can contribute my service to the poor people .

    Being a pilot is interesting because I get to travel around the world. I can visit many different countries

    all over the world. Besides, I can meet many kinds of people and learn

    about their culture and traditions.

    I choose to be a policeman because I can keep law and order. It is my responsibility to keep the town

    safe and peaceful. This job is challenging although it is sometimes dangerous.

    This job is enjoyable and I get to meet many people.

    This occupation is suitable for me. / It suits me.

    It is highly paid. / The salary is high.

    The qualification needed is a university degree.

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    3. Houses / Homestay

    The double-storey house in Taman Sri Selama is located quite near my school. It is convenient to go to

    school because there is an efficient bus service in this area.

    The semi-detached bungalow is the most spacious of all the houses. Therefore, it is the most suitable

    for my elder sisters big family. I am sure she and her family will feel comfortable living in it.

    I prefer the house on the hill over looking the park because of the beautiful scenery and peaceful

    surroundings. Living in a terrace house is interesting because we have many friendl y neighbours who can help one

    another.

    In addition, there is a small garden in front of the house, where we can grow many colourful flowering

    plants.

    My father will like this house because the porch in front is big enough for parking two cars.

    The security around this apartment is tight and my family will feel safe living here. Moreover, there are

    many facilities around such as a hair saloon, gymnasium and a mini-market. Therefore, it is very

    convenient for us.

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    I would choose Homestay Sg. Bayor because my uncles family loves the countryside. The surroundings

    are green and the scenery is beautiful. Besides, it is quiet and peaceful. My uncles family can experience

    feeding the animals on the farm and plucking rambutans from the orchard. The package is for 3 days and

    2 nights, which is sufficient for my uncles family.

    Staying in Homestay Amanda will be a wonderful experience for my sisters pen pal and her family who

    love nature. This place is quite far from the city and it is located near a jungle. The air is fresh and cool.

    They can enjoy jungle-trekking and looking at the beautiful flowers and plants. They can take

    photographs of many insects too.

    4. Activities

    I prefer outdoor activities to indoor activities because they are more exciting, adventurous and

    challenging.

    I can enjoy the fresh air while cycling around the neighbourhood.

    Working indoor is more comfortable and I am protected from the sun and rain.

    Swimming is a good form of exercise because it strengthens the muscles of every part of the body. It

    keeps me fit and healthy.

    Collecting stamps is interesting and beneficial. We can gain a lot of knowledge about countries all over

    the world. Reading can improve our general knowledge, vocabulary and grammar. I can become more

    knowledgeable.

    Singing is entertaining and fun. It is my favourite activity and I am very talented in singing.

    Joining the Music Club gives the chance to play musical instruments and make new friends.

    Co-curricular activities help me to become an active , responsible and disciplined person.

    I get the chance to represent my school in sports . I can keep up the good name of my school. I will be

    proud if I win the first prize in the sports meet.

    5.

    Clothing / Shoes

    I would choose the POLO sports shirt for my father because it is suitable for him. He can wear it when

    he goes for his sports activities. It makes him look stylish and sporty. It is comfortable to wear.

    The long-sleeved shirt suits my father well as he will look smart in it. Besides, he can wear it to

    important functions like meetings and business trips.

    The batik shirt has beautifully-designed patterns and it is very attractive. It is made of good quality silk

    material. It looks elegant.

    I would choose the long skirt with flowe red patterns for my mother because she will look beautiful in it.

    Besides, it is fashionable and attractive. My mother can wear it when she attends a party with her friends.

    The sizes are large and medium. The large size fits me well.

    The free gift is a wallet. It is very useful .

    SPARK shoes are comfortable for my brother to wear. They are made from good quality leather so they

    will last longer. Moreover, SPARK is the most popular brand among children today. My brother can wear

    them to school or for an outing. The Happyfit sandals come in three colours which are pink, yellow and white. So, I am going to choose

    pink as it is my favourite colour. These sandals are made in Malaysia and I prefer local products. I can

    walk comfortably in them.

    It is trendy .

    It is durable because it is made from good quality material.

    6. Fruits

    I would choose the durian as it is my familys favourite fruit . Its flesh is creamy and

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    delicious. It is rich in carbohydrates and vitamin. It is known as, The King of Fruits and is very popular

    during the durian season.

    The orange contains Vitamin C which keeps us healthy. We can either eat it fresh or make it into a drink.

    We can buy them from the market or supermarket.

    Eating fresh fruits is good for health. We will not fall sick easily if we eat fresh fruits every day. I prefer

    local fruits because they are cheaper and fresher.

    I prefer the sweet and sour juicy mangoes. They are rich in vitamins. It is good to eat them when they

    are fresh. Mango juice is a popular drink too.

    7. Shows / Movie / TV programme

    It is an interesting show / movie / TV programme and it is my favourite

    It is educational and I can gain a lot of knowledge from it.

    It is suitable for children like me. I can learn go od moral values from the movie.

    It is entertaining and I would enjoy watching it. Laughing is good and I can release stress.

    This documentary provides me a lot of knowledge about sea animals and marine life.

    The ticket price is RM10 for an adult and RM6 for a child and it is reasonable.

    It is shown at the Star Cineplex which is a walking distance away from my house.

    The 5.00 pm show is suitable for me as I am free at that time.

    * Task .

    Practise writing notes for the following topics and others:

    - Trees ( fruit tree , flowering plant , ferns )

    - Pets ( hamster , kitten , bird , fish )

    - Events ( car race , mountain-climbing , canoe race )

    - Books ( adventure , hobbies , grammar , magazine, encyclopedia , dictionary )

    - Toys ( soft toy , jigsaw-puzzle , remote-controlled car )

    - Food ( burger , sponge cake , muffins )

    - Transport ( coach , train , plane )

    - Objects ( watch , wallet, neck-tie , pen , handbag, computer )

    - Traditional Games ( top-spinning , kite flying , marbles )

    - Outdoor Games ( football, hockey , handball , netball, volleyball )

    - Indoor Games ( scrabble , chess, snake and ladder , monopoly , computer game )

    - Hobbies ( painting , drawing cartoons, gardening , sewing, cooking, collecting coins )

    - Package Tours to holiday destinations ( Genting Highlands , Langkawi Island , Malacca , Penang Island

    )

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    POINT REASON

    Fancy BlousePrice: Only RM65.70

    Material : Cotton

    Free: Purse

    Available in four colours

    light blue, light green, light yellow, pink and brown.

    Price: The price is RM65.70. It is reasonable and affordable.

    Material The material is cotton and it is suitable for me. Besides, it

    is comfortable to wear.

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    Free The gift is a purse.It is useful as I can keep my coins in

    it.

    Colours It comes in four colours. They are light blue, light green,

    light yellow, pink and brown. My favourite colour is light blue.

    _______________________________

    PRACTICE FOR PAPER 2 QUESTION 3

    Section C Question 3

    ( Pictures with short notes are given .

    Write sentences to describe the pictures given.

    Use the notes given to help you write the sentences )

    You are advised to spend 35 minutes on this section.

    TIPS

    1. Read the instructions carefully.

    2. Look at the pictures carefully.

    3. Read and understand the notes given for each picture. Understand the story.4. Pay attention to the words given to give you a clue to what tense to use.

    5. Try to use the same tense throughout. The introduction maybe in Present Tense if you are describing

    the main character of the story.

    6. Using the notes given , write 3 or 4 paragraphs to describe the pictures or story. Write neatly.

    7. Have an opening and a closure.

    8. Write a variety of sentences. Use simple, compound and complex sentences.

    9. Write creatively. Use proper vocabulary to express your ideas.

    10. Use adjectives and adverbs to make them interesting.

    11. If you are confident, use idioms, similies or proverbs.

    12. Your sentences should link well so that your story has a smooth flow in your story.

    ( Meanwhile, Within a few minutes, As he was walking home, Immediately, Firstly,Then, After that ,

    Suddenly , etc )

    13. Check for mistakes in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Check that you have used the full -stop,

    comma and capital letters.

    14. Use the correct sentence structures.

    15. You may change the order of the words as long as the meaning is clear.

    16. Plan your ideas well. Do not repeat your ideas.

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    Table 3 ( TSVC )

    TIME SUBJECT VERB COMPLEMENT

    A few days ago, Encik Mat Zen fetched his family to Lake Gardens.

    Table 4

    SUBJECT VERB PREDICATE

    There was an accident in the busy town this morning.

    A lorry knocked down a small boy who was cycling.

    The boy was unconscious and seriously injured.

    In a short while an ambulance arrived and rushed him to the hospital.

    The boys parents went hurriedly to see their son.

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    The doctors saved their son's life.

    The boys parents thanked them gratefully.

    The boy had to be treated in the hospital until he recovered.

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    MARKS FOR PAPER 2 QUESTION 3

    Full Marks - 15

    Excellent - 13 15 Language used is very good. Ideas are clear,

    well-planned and interesting. Simple, compound and

    complex sentences.New words are used. No spelling and

    punctuation errors.

    Good 9 12 Language used is good. Tried to make simple, compound

    and complex sentences. Some errors made. Most ideas

    are well-planned, relevant and clear. New words are

    used. Some spelling and punctuation errors. Meaning is

    clear

    Average 5 8 Language used is correct. Simple sentences with errors.

    Meaning is clear. Ideas are quite good and vocabulary

    is enough.Vocabulary is adequate to convey meaning. A

    few punctuation and spelling errors.

    Weak 1 4 Poor use of the language. Many errors in sentences,

    spelling and punctuation. Ideas cannot be

    understood. Vocabulary is very weak. Sentences must

    have meaning.

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    SAMPLE ANSWER

    Halim is my pen pal. He studies in the Year 6 Best in SK Cemerlang. Halim enjoys outdoor activities such

    as camping and fishing. We share similar hobbies too. Halim is an active and friendly boy. He is popular

    in his school and his teachers like him too.

    During the last holidays, Halim and his friends went camping together. They were excited and planned for

    the trip well. They camped in Bukit Nanas quite far from their school. Halims uncle, Encik Abdul Rahman

    accompanied them on the trip. He was an experienced scout so he could look after the boys well and

    help them . They brought along tents, torchlights, clothes, cooking utensils and enough food for threedays.

    The weather was fine and everyone was in a happy mood. After getting down from Halims uncle new car,

    they had to walk through a jungle track to reach their campsite. Each of them had to carry their own

    heavy knapsacks on their backs. The air was fresh and they enjoyed walking . They were happy to get

    away from the hustle and bustle of their busy town.

    Soon they reached their campsite. They saw a beautiful waterfall nearby. The boys pitched their tents and

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    collected firewood for the campfire at night and cooking. After that, they spent a lot of time playing in the

    cool clear water. Encik Abdul Rahman taught them how to make a fishing rod. Halim and his friends

    made their own fishing rods from thin branches and twigs.

    They had fun trying to catch fish using the fishing rods they had made. They also took turns to cook their

    simple meals over a fire.

    Besides fishing and swimming, the adventurous boys also went jungle trekking . It was a challenging

    activity as the ground was steep and slippery. Although it was tiring, the boys enjoyed themselves in the

    jungle. They could see various types of insects and rare birds and plants. They collected some leaves

    and pebbles for their Science Corner in their class. At night, they had a lovely campfire and sang many

    camping songs , joked and laughed a lot.

    Soon, it was time to return home. They had spent three wonderful days in the jungle. Before leaving their

    campsite, they made sure that the place was clean. They picked up all the rubbish and put it in a big

    plastic bag. Halims uncle made sure that he had put out the fire carefully. He did not want to cause any

    forest fires. Then, all of them left the jungle feeling tired but happy. It was an educational and adventurous

    experience. When they returned home, they wrote down their experience in their diaries.

    ____________________________________________________________________________________

    Weak 1 4 Poor use of the language. Many errors in sentences,

    spelling and punctuation. Ideas cannot be

    understood. Vocabulary is very weak. Sentences must

    have meaning.

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    SAMPLE ANSWER

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    Halim is my pen pal. He studies in the Year 6 Best in SK Cemerlang. Halim enjoys outdoor activities such

    as camping and fishing. We share similar hobbies too. Halim is an active and friendly boy. He is popular

    in his school and his teachers like him too.

    During the last holidays, Halim and his friends went camping together. They were excited and planned for

    the trip well. They camped in Bukit Nanas quite far from their school. Halims uncle, Encik Abdul Rahman

    accompanied them on the trip. He was an experienced scout so he could look after the boys well and

    help them . They brought along tents, torchlights, clothes, cooking utensils and enough food for three

    days.

    The weather was fine and everyone was in a happy mood. After getting down from Halims uncle new car,

    they had to walk through a jungle track to reach their campsite. Each of them had to carry their own

    heavy knapsacks on their backs. The air was fresh and they enjoyed walking . They were happy to get

    away from the hustle and bustle of their busy town.

    Soon they reached their campsite. They saw a beautiful waterfall nearby. The boys pitched their tents and

    collected firewood for the campfire at night and cooking. After that, they spent a lot of time playing in thecool clear water. Encik Abdul Rahman taught them how to make a fishing rod. Halim and his friends

    made their own fishing rods from thin branches and twigs.

    They had fun trying to catch fish using the fishing rods they had made. They also took turns to cook their

    simple meals over a fire.

    Besides fishing and swimming, the adventurous boys also went jungle trekking . It was a challenging

    activity as the ground was steep and slippery. Although it was tiring, the boys enjoyed themselves in the

    jungle. They could see various types of insects and rare birds and plants. They collected some leaves

    and pebbles for their Science Corner in their class. At night, they had a lovely campfire and sang many

    camping songs , joked and laughed a lot.

    Soon, it was time to return home. They had spent three wonderful days in the jungle. Before leaving their

    campsite, they made sure that the place was clean. They picked up all the rubbish and put it in a big

    plastic bag. Halims uncle made sure that he had put out the fire carefully. He did not want to cause any

    forest fires. Then, all of them left the jungle feeling tired but happy. It was an educational and adventurous

    experience. When they returned home, they wrote down their experience in their diaries.

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